Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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I've written a few short stories myself but they are too long to post here ;(
 
The super human criminals step out of the hover van that was stolen from a military facility and that has become their main transportation. They make their way towards the the bank. One of them runs really fast and does a quick recon of the outside of the bank and comes back to the group.

Rapido: "Looks like the coast is clear. The guards are inside at the moment."

Mastermind:" Then we proceed. Firepower it's almost time for your distraction."

Firepower:"Yes sir."

Mastermind: "Feral and Battle axe as well as you Firepower keep the body count a little low okay? We are professionals not complete savages. Well except for you Feral."

Feral:"Thanks for the compliment! Ha hah ha hah ha hah I can't wait to hear their screams and taste their blood on my claws. I'm just giggly inside."

Mastermind:" You are definately psychotic. I guess that is a side effect of genetic splicing."

Feral:"Part hyena and proud of it! Ha hah ha hah hee hee."

Mastermind:" After the slight distraction, Killerwatt is to give a power surge to disrupt the electromagnetic locking mechanism for the vault. Rapido and Brawn are to empty the vault as quick as possible. I will oversee it all from the hovervan got it?"

All respond:"Yes sir!"

Mastermind:"Proceed."

The super criminals then begin their robbery.

Elsewhere... In the establishment known as "Club Chosen" in the upper floor Brenda has brought Daniella to a couch and is has a glass of water for the faint woman.

Brenda:" It's okay chica. Just take deep breath's. Breath in and breath out."

Daniella:" My dads alive and okay?"

Brenda:"Well yeah, kind of. Yeah. He and Javiar have to be rescued. Or are being rescued as we speak. Angelique has sent some friends so we should head to the hospital soon."

Daniella:"Yeah ..yeah ..sure um let me just take this in and relax a moment."

Brenda:"Don't relax too long because someone is on their way up to visit you."

Daniella:"Huh? Who??"

Brenda:"Oh it's just Dona. I can sense her presense. She's a good person but sometimes her gossip stories can be a bit long."



Somewhere else deep underneath the city in a specially made and fortefied place is a large thick metal door with the words "Project Legacy" on it. There is a timer next to it that is counting down.


Also in the city Onji, Milagro and her brother Antonio are sitting down and enjoying their meal's.
 
In the kitchen where Onji, Milagro and Antonio are eating their meals...

Antonio:" Hey sis I think I'm ahead of you with monster kills this week."

Milagro:" Nope I don't think so bro I am ahead!"

Antonio:"You liar I'm ahead!!"

Milagro:"No way lil bro berserk malfunctioning robots don't count!"

Antonio:"Uh...uh.. I guess your right.(Sigh)"

Milagro:"Yep I rule. You drool. Ha ha ha!"

Antonio:"That's not funny. I'll pass you soon enough, you'll see!!"

Milagro:"Keep dreaming bro, keep dreaming."

Onji:"Enough you too! This is not a contest. We are maintaining the balance between good and evil and there is alot of evil out there."

Milagro:"Yeah we know but evil isn't what it used to be."

Antonio:"Yeah like in your stories of the past Uncle Onji. Those were cool stories!!"

Onji:"Those stories are actually history. As for evil not being what it used to be? Let's just say the old evil that has survived the past is in hiding or evolving to adjust to the new world and its new evil's. The old evil still exist's."

Milagro:"Does it really? All I've seen is mutant hybrids or some dilluted semi demon things."

Onji:" It does."

Antonio:"How do you know?"

Onji steps back into a shadow and teleports behind Antonio.

Onji:"I know, because I exists. I have demon blood in me. I wasn't always good. I have killed many and a lot of blood was on my hands. I may be different from those days but I can still sense the dark ones out there."

Milagro and Antonio's eyes open wider and they feel a little afraid and excited at the same time. Onji just steps towards a window and looks outside. His mind travels elsewhere to a nightmare he had recently. It was an unseen evil with emmense power which will cause great destruction.
 
Krystal said:
Nice!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂


Ummmmmm Chuck? Get to writing! *nods*
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I agree. I'll play after Chuck writes!

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Elsewhere in another place, another dimensional plane....
Two figures walk through a harsh frozen wasteland. There is a long bearded man and a woman wearing animal skins over regular clothing to keep warm. The man has a shield and sword and the woman has a spear and bow and arrow. They walk through a valley heading toward a mountain, in the far distance behind them is two large hungry wolves and up ahead ice moves and shifts and a very large humanoid form takes place. This form then grabs a large shard of ice and forms it into a very large club.

Man:"I hope we can find shelter soon before we run into anymore frost giants."

Woman:"I am sick of this place! I don't even no how long we have been here?"

Man:"Good thing we found these weapons from fallen warriors in this wasteland. I really miss my sword that was left behind."

Woman:"Well you don't have it. We have a long journey. I just hope the kids are okay?"

Man:"I'm sure they are. We still have to get through Niffleheim and then go through the very hot fire realm so we can get to where we need to be. Hopefully if we are where I think we are we can get help soon."

Woman:"I hope so I miss home soooo much!!"

Man: "Me too my dear, me too!"

The man and woman embrace each other and proceed to move forward on their journey. Will they survive the dangers ahead and all around them? Will they find their way home soon?

Elsewhere in a hospital two patients arrive. Two men that were frozen in suspended annimation by magick and ice. Very soon a daughter will be reunited with her long lost father.
 
Somewhere else...

As Onji looks out the window staring towards the city buildings he is lost in thought. Milagro picks up a newspaper and begins to read.

In the far distance two figures sit on the ledge of a very tall building. They are the mysterious couple seen by Brenda and Dona. A goth looking woman and man dressed somewhat like a viking.

Morgan:"So what do you think of this world?"

Enrik:"Interesting. It's cleaned up from how it was."

Morgan:"Yeah you told me it was infested with demons and dark things and almost became a part of hell awhile back."

Enrik:"Yes indeed. It is good that things turned out for the better and that good triumphed over evil!"

Morgan:"This wouldn't have been a fun place to visit if things didn't turn around."

Enrik:"Well it did."

Morgan:"You did interfere a bit."

Enrik:"Well I had to do something!"

Morgan:"You know the rules. We are limited in our interactions in each world!"

Enrik:" I know, I know! I just couldn't sit back and watch so many innocents suffer! It was too much!! I did stay away from the main fight though."

Morgan:" I know the hero in you couldn't help it."

Enrik:"Thats right. Got a problem!?"

Morgan:"Hey buddy that's what I like about you! But we have to chill, okay?"

Enrik:"Yeah your right. I know the people of each world must fulfill their own destinies. But we can give at least a little guidance."

Morgan:"Yeah some but not too much."

Enrik:"We still need to look out for invaders from other worlds."

Morgan:"Yes we do. If any show we got enough power to kick some butt!"

Enrik:"Oh yeah enough to wipe the floor with em!"

Morgan:"Uh the floor? How about the whole city and then some?"

Enrik:"Um I wasn't going into all the details of our power levels. besides shhh we gotta keep that quiet and secret you don't know who can be listening?"

Morgan:"Yeah your right. So you think that couple will find their way back?"

Enrik:" I hope so it would make some people here very happy."

Morgan:"Yeah it would! Speaking of happy... that woman should be happy when she see's her dad."

Enrik:"Yes she will be! Speaking of dad's or more like family...I think I want to make a short visit home."

Morgan:"Yeah well we better make it quick we don't want to miss any action!?"

Enrik:"It will be short. I promise!"

Morgan:"Okay. Remember we travel and observe and help a little."

Enrik:"Yep the life of a Godling."

Morgan:"The life of dimensional travelers."

Enrik:"Lets get a beer too!"

Morgan:"Oh I heard there is really good beer in this other dimension and....

The two mysterious beings get up and fly and dissappear through a dimensional portal.

Back at the apartment of Onji and the kids..
Milagro is reading the newspaper and read of a recent robbery done by some mysterious super criminals. They have some pictures from an amateur and shows some sort of animalistic man and a very large muscular man with a human shaped blur near him. There is also a very athletic woman weilding a large battle axe and some armored cyborg with multiple guns and plasma cannons attached or built into him. He is like a walking tank. There is also a shot of a person with electrical powers. The article mentions of a major robbery and a high body count.
 
Somewhere in a special military building there is a training area where a man named Hector Torres is training intensively. He has undergone alot of training and was a subject to a special military experiment to create the perfect soldier. Genetic enhancement drugs and cybernetic implants has made him the perfect fighting machine. His combat trainer is non other than....

Xman:"Hey kid your moves have really improved. Keep up with the intensity! Oh and here are your papers your code name is Battalion."

Hector:"Cool! But why that name?"

Xman:"Because when we are done with your training that is what you will be a one man battalion."

Hector:"Are my weapons almost done?"

Xman:"Yes they are almost done. But don't worry about that. Remember you are a weapon. So stop slacking and get back to training!! You need to get through that dangerous obstacle course under five minutes boy! Now move it!!!

Hector:"Yes sir!!"

Hector then proceeds to move through the obstacle course.

Elsewhere a meeting of sorts is taking place in a dinning hall where various supertypes have gathered together to talk and eat. Who is there? We shall find out eventually.
 
Okay peeps I wrote a bit and set up some stuff. I hope you enjoyed and are inrigued? Also there are some super types that need to be at that dining hall and somebody or some people have to stop those murderous thieves! Okay peeps get some creative juices flowing and write something for me to read. Take care and LOL!!
 
*His name is Andrew. He is on his way home after a workout at a gym in Neo York.

He's only 21, but living on his own, barely scraping by, but surviving. He is a gay man. He was out to his family, and they were very accepting. His parents and two sisters were great people, and gave him much love. However, they believed that he would need someone to talk to, so they gave him a round trip ticket to see his uncle in the mid-west. He was also gay, and he would be able to help Andrew in ways that they couldn't.

What his family didn't know was that while he was accpeting his sexuality, he was going through other changes. He was "knowing" things, and "seeing" things. Anytime he touched something, images flooded his mind. After some searching, he found a solution on the internet. He had the psychic ability of "Psychometry", which meant that when he touched something, he was able to pick up the thoughts and feelings of the person who last handled the object. That is why he didn't mind going to visit his uncle. When they gave him the tickets, he was able to "see" they had the best of intentions.

The day of the disaster, he knew what was happening. He and his uncle were supposed to go to dinner. He was changing into dinner clothes, and grabbed a shirth his mother had packed. He was hit immediately with pain and fear. Images of people running and screaming.......He never knew that fear could be so overpowering. Then, the images faded to black, as if watching a tv that had been shut off. He knew in an instant that his mother was dead. His uncle found him shivering and sweating in the bedroom. Then, the news stories started come in about the disaster.

He came home to Neo York, against his uncle's wishes. He had to see who of his family, and what of his belongings had survived. Nothing was left. No one was left. He was alone. He lives alone, and questions his existence. What should he be doing now???? How will these abilities help, or hurt him.

He walks down the street, and sees a business card on the ground. The name on the card is Daniela La Guapa Estudiante. He picks it up, and gets impressions very quickly. He sees a large building called "Club Choosen", and sees a woman in the main offices. He snaps back to reality, and decides to look up "Club Choosen". Perhaps he will get some answers there.*
 
"Club Choosen - 9pm - Don't be late <click>"

That is all the message said as Gianna listened.

Gianna: Italian for "God is Gracious" But, Gianna didn't feel that God was gracious at all. In fact, she wasn't sure if God even existed.

"Club Choosen - 9pm - Don't be late <click>"

Gianna pondered whether to pay an mind to this eerie phone call when suddenly she felt saddened. In her mind was a vision:

A young man, early twenties, alone, walking, thinking, feeling down & then "Club Choosen" pops into her thoughts.

"I have to go he needs me" She thought to herself.

Gianna looked at her watch, 8:25pm.

"I still have time"

With that she ran out of her apartment without ever looking back.
 
At Club Chosen Dona arrives and sees Brenda and Daniella talking in the office and Daniella looks a little pale.

Dona:"Hey girl are you okay? Are you sick? You look a little pale?!"

Daniella:"I'll be fine. It's not everyday you get some major life changing news."

Dona:"What is it chica que paso? What happened tell me? Are you gonna be okay? Please no more bad news!"

Brenda:"It's not bad news its good news."

Dona:"Huh? What?"

Daniella:"My dads alive!"

Dona:"I dios mio!" (Dona begins to feel faint and Brenda rushes to her side)

Brenda:"Okay enoughs enough I'm not gonna hold everyone up who feels faint! Yes Carlos is alive and Javiar too. We will be heading over to the hospital soon to see them."

Dona:"I can't believe it they are alive! They somehow survived the disaster from a few years ago."

Brenda:" They did and when they wake up they will see a new city rebuilt, well mostly rebuilt and renamed and see us a little older. They won't be but we will."

Dona:"Do you think anyone else might have survived?"

Brenda:"Only time will tell."

Daniella:"I hope so I really really hope so!"

Outside Club Chosen a man makes his way towards the building with a woman in the distance trying to intercept him.


Elsewhere in the special military base Hector Torres aka Battalion is done with his training for the day and is now looking over files with Xman on a group of other special soldiers that will work under him.

Xman:"Okay Hector here are the people you will be leading soon for special peace keeping missions.

.Tony Potts, code name (Strafe). He has a special winged armor that he can fly around in that makes him like a mini fighter plane. His specialty aerial assault. Cool and intelligent guy. A drinker needs to cut down.

.Kenshiro Matsu, code name (Stealth). He's a highly trained ninja with a special stealth suit that makes him invisible to sensors, motion tracking and others sensory devices. Quiet but when he speaks it is important and sometimes deep.

.Brian Mcgee, code name(Wet Work). Highly trained navy seal and with an attitude. They say he's a bit unstable and a deadly killer in combat. Very cocky and foul mouthed.

Xman:" Be careful with him. He might not work well for this team."

.Laura Kendal Code name (Hack). She is a computer and tech wiz and great for field surveillance and mechanical repair. Nice but talks alot. Bad temper at times.

.Jack Russel code name (Demolition). Explosive expert. Loves to blow things up. Big joker always doing pranks.

Xman:"Looks like you got some work to do. You need to whip these guys into shape and make them work together like a well oiled machine. You got some work ahead of you."

Hector:"Yeah I see. Well I guess it's time to set up a meet."

Xman:"Good luck soldier."

The two salute each other and part ways.

Somewhere else a certain super criminal group is meeting up with their head boss to bring in the money and jewels they stole recently . This boss is a powerfull and feared man that is actually trying to take over Neo York. He is refered to as "The Monarch".
 
In an office in the special military facility of the new government, Xman remembers days gone by. He is retired from what he used to do and now serves as a combat instructor and mentor to a new generation of would be heroes. Although he is still with the government it is not the same one. A few years ago after the big natural disasters alot of government officials and people were outed for their greed and corruption. It was a world wide outing. Many were jailed and excecuted for their crimes. Some have survived and gone into hiding and have become a terrorist organization. This is why this team is being built. To combat with the forces of greed and corruption and maintain power to the people. Corruption and greed in all its forms is not gone yet but they are trying.

Xman sits in his chair and then focuses on a photo pulled from his wallet a photo of his two daughters when they were little. He is then filled with sadness because of their vanishing in the great disaster. "My two girls." He thinks to himself.

Elsewhere....
 
*Andrew looks at the clock on the wall. 8:30. He goes and looks at a full length mirror. He's dressed in jeans and combat boots. Black sleeveless T-shirt. Red button down over it. He goes to the closet. He looks around through some of the things he's managed to save from the wreck that he once called home. He's looking for a leather jacket. He finds some of his older clothes, his karate outifit, and some of the belts he's won. Near the bottom, he finds the jacket.

He throws the jacket on, and heads out the door. It's about a 20 minute walk from his place to "Club Choosen". He got the directions off his beat up computer. It's a piece of crap, but better than nothing. That's the outlook he wants to have on life. As difficult as it is, he has to remain positive.

He walks down the street, and sees a bracelet in an alley. He bends down to pick it up. Suddenly, visions fill his head. A woman, pushed into the alley. She's shocked. He forces her to the ground. He has enhanced strength, and uses it as he pleases. He grabs her breasts, and wants to rape her. Suddenly, beams shoot from her eyes, and the man is disintigrated.

Typical, how things are now. People with powers, lashing out at others. Andrew's powers can protect him, but they are more passive than active.*

He reaches the door of "Club Choosen", and the bouncer looks at him.*

(Bouncer) "Let's see some i.d."

*Andrew pushes his i.d. towards the bouncer. He reviews it, and lets him in. Andrew heads to the bar and buys himself a drink. The bartender is cute, and he smiles and Andrew.*

(Andrew) "He buddy, can you tell me where I can find Daniella?"

(Bartender) "She owns this place. Good luck trying to get in touch with her. See how hoppin' this place is? She's very busy."

(Andrew) "Why is this place so hoppin' anyway?"

(Bartender) "Look around at the paintings, and artifacts here. They are all from the battles "The Choosen Ones" have had to save humanity. People come here because it gives them hope. Go review what is here, and while you do that, I'll see if I can locate Daniella for you. Come back in a few minutes."

*Andrew walks around and sees the pics, and stories of Brenda, Angelique, Rico, Taina, and the rest. He comes to a picture of two figures. They are in action poses. One is dressed in jeans and a grey hoodie. He looks "normal". The other is also in an action pose, dressed similarly to Andrew. Black jeans, biker boots, leather jacket. He is holding a crossbow, and a dagger is tied to his thigh. He begins to read the history on Carlos ElAmante` Delhombre, and Javair Pantalones Afeminadas. He doesn't know them, but considers them "kindred spirits", and feels happiness, even though not knowing them, that they had found each other. He realizes he has been there for some time, and goes back to the bar to see if the bartender had information for him.....*
 
"God Damn Neo City Traffic"

Gianna looks at the car radio clock. 8:45pm

"What the F*ck! Drive @$$hole!", she screams out of the driver side window. (Gianna isn't known for her patience)

"Twenty minutes to drive 10 F*ckin blocks" she mutters to herself

Just then she can hear a faint voice cry out "help me" but Gianna doesn't know where the voice is coming from. Over & over "help me" is being said in her mind.

At the next red light she turns off the car radio.

"Help me please, can't you hear me?"

Gianna focuses on the voice & realizes it's coming from inside the truck of the car in front of her.

It's a Red Lexus & the license plate reads "CHOOSEN"

Gianna gasps & tries to regain her composure. She decides to follow the car.

Gianna looks at the car radio clock. 8:55pm...
 
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