Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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Awesome stuff my fellow writers! I can't wait to read more! We shall see what happens with the remaining "CHOSEN ONES" and what new threat they and their friends and friends to be will face. I also will develop the new characters more and stay tuned for some new villians and a few mysteries to unravel!
 

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Deep down below inside a very large underground structure their is a secret organization that is in hiding. They are called the "Shadow Society" and they are hard at work on multiple projects to salvage or regain some of the power they have lost in the world. One of their projects is turning out to be a success. They have created an ultimate warrior to their cause with the help of some scientists and their own very liked and esteemed Dr. Faustus.
He is an infamous genetic scientist who was deemed a criminal by the respected science community. He did illegal experiments and played god and was charged for his crimes. He was freed by the Shadow society. In the Shadow Society there is no law but their own. Using the finest genetic specimen's and other scientific breakthroughs in genetic engineering they now have the perfect warrior.

They have named him Achilles named after the greatest warrior from the Iliad, the Troyjan war. As he makes his way through a special obstacle course with great agility and speed and shattering what no normal man should be able to shatter with his own fists and firing weapons with deadly accuracy there is no question in their minds that the experiment is a success.

Dr. Faustus speaks to the ones above him and proclaims "Achilles is much more smarter, stronger, faster and has enhanced reflexes and senses. He also heals much faster and has much greater endurance than a normal man. He is the perfect warrior a killing machine that cannot be stopped and very soon our enemies shall pay for what they have done to us and our cause!"
Then an applause is heard throughout the structure and in a another plane of existance the Darkest lord of them all smiles.
 

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*Andrew walks up to the bar, and the bartender smiles......*

(bartender) "So, did you learn anything about the "Choosen Ones"???

(Andrew) "Yeah, quite a bit. I'm interested in Carlos and Javiar most of all, but right now, I need to see Daniella La Guapa Estudiante, please."

(Bartender) "Well, she could give you more info on the two of them. Carlos was her father. But right now, she's not here."

*Andrew tosses the card in anger, and then apologizes. The bartender picks it up, and hands it back to him. Andrew starts to get images, and can see Daniella leaving Club Choosen with two other women. The bartender saw them pass, just a few minutes ago.*

(Andrew) "Will she be here tomorrow??"

(Bartender) "As far as I know, she will. Can I get you something to drink?"

*Anderw buys a beer, and starts to drink. He turns and sees a young woman, walking towards him.....*
 

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As she comes closer to him, He cant stop looking at her.

(Young Girl) Hi How are you? My name is Desyre, What is yours?

(Andrew) My Name is Andrew Nice to meet you. So what a beautiful girl like you doing around here?

(Desyre) Well as for me, I know who you are, You dont remember me do you?

(Andrew) No Im sorry, Where do I know you from?

(Desyre) Look at me really good, You need to remember me, We went to HighSchool together.

(Andrew) I appologize refresh my memory.

(Desyre) Im Julian, remember julian, Fat Julian, you sent to make fun of, and look at you drooling all over me, You Scum!!!

Andrew all confused he doesnt know where to turn his face with all that is going on.
 

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*Desyre turns to slap Andrew. Andrew grabs Desyre's hand, and his mind is filled with visions. Much of them hurt and anger for what Desyre has gone through at the hands of others. While Andrew doesn't want to stay at "Club Choosen" anymore, he has learned that fate will toss you curves, and sometimes it is good to go with the flow.*

(Andrew) "Desyre, I'm sorry. Things are just screwed up right now.

(Desyre) "Oh, so I'm supposed to sympathize with you now???

(Andrew) "Desyre, my family is dead. Parts of old New York still lie in ruin, and the rebuilt sections are called Neo York. With all the people who have lost their lives, is a petty little high school issue really what's on your mind?"

(Desyre) "So I'm just supposed to forget what happened in the past?"

(Andrew) "If we want the lives that we used to have back, if that is even possible, then that's what has to be done. And here is a little news flash for you. Dressing all up like that doens't impress a gay man."

(Desyre) "humph! Well, how well do you know this place??"

(Andrew) "It's my first time here, but what do you want to know?"

(Desyre) "What's with all the pictures and paintings on the walls?"

(Andrew) "They are the Choosen Ones. The ones that destiny picked to help rid the world of evil. Unfortunatley, evil is back, and the Choosen Ones are missing."

(Desyre) "What brings you here?"

(Andrew) "I came looking for anwers......"

*Desyre looks at Andrew, trying to figure out if she should say, or turn to run........*
 

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From dictionary.com the word "Chosen"

v. chose, (chz) cho·sen, (chzn) choos·ing, choos·es
v. tr.
To select from a number of possible alternatives; decide on and pick out.

To prefer above others: chooses the supermarket over the neighborhood grocery store.
To determine or decide: chose to fly rather than drive.

v. intr.
To make a choice; make a selection: was used to doing as she chose.

Middle English chesen, from Old English cosan. See geus- in Indo-European Roots.]
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cho·sen ( P ) Pronunciation Key (chzn)
v.
Past participle of choose.

adj.
Selected from or preferred above others: the chosen few.
Having been selected by God; elect.
 

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oh man that bites :(

I can't write now (being a couch potato) but I will come back to this ;)
 

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FreestyleGod said:
Greaaaaaaaaat I just wrote something long for the telenovella and for some reason it didn't go through and now its all erased. I'm not writing it again. You will see something at some point. Grrr argh!!! :mad


GOD!!!!!!!!!! :(

There's a text limit remember? You'd do best to write it in word or notepad and copy and paste to CF :)
 

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Inside the hospital Carlos is stable and slowly waking up. Daniella, Brenda and Dona are already on their way to see him and Javiar. Unknown to Carlos is many things. He does not know what year it is and what happened when the disaster hit and who survived. He does not know that his daughter and some friends are on their way over to see him. Nor does he know that Javiar is in another room in a coma. Will have Javiar awaken? Only time will tell.

In another part of the city inside a small warehouse a certain group of super criminals are hanging out. Mastermind is sitting in his office sipping earl grey tea when suddenly there is a loud howl and growling in the kitchen area. Mastermind steps out of his office to investigate the commotion.

Mastermind: ”What is all the ruckus?”

Brawn: “Um Feral is in the kitchen and he’s going wild with the food and making a mess!”

Mastermind: “What!? Oh great I guess he is more unstable than I thought.”

Battle axe: “Uh yes he is! The other night when we did that heist and there was a bit of a body count…

Mastermind: “Yes there was a body count and I told you guy’s that was a bit unprofessional.”

Battle axe: “Sorry boss uh well anyways I don’t mind chopping our enemies and dismembering from time to time but Feral…. He started to eat some of his kills.”

Mastermind: “Really?”

Battle axe: “Yeah.”

Rapido: “Damn man that sick! What’s up with that?”

Mastermind: “Well that can easily be explained. There is a flaw in his Human and animal DNA mixture and he’s becoming more and more unstable because of it. That is the last time I work a cheap deal with Dr. Faustus.

Brawn: “Who’s Dr. Fist us?”

Mastermind: “Dr. Faustus you dimwit!”

Brawn: “Sorry.”
 

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Mastermind: “Dr. Faustus is genius when it comes to genetics and other biology fields. He is also a criminal because of his experimentation. As for our buddy Feral here I guess he was a failed experiment.

Killerwatt: “Hey boss Fire power is almost done charging up. I helped him get done faster by providing some electrical juice myself.”

Mastermind: “Excellent! That cyborg walking tank of ours is the best! I am glad I hired him. He’s unstoppable!”

Raaaarrrrrrrrrr!!!!!! Arrroooooooooo!!!!!!!!


Battle axe: “Um he’s not gonna eat us is he?”


Mastermind: “He shouldn’t. He was hypnotized not to attack us should he go berserk but then again… here Brawn shoot Feral with this tranquilizer. That should calm him down.
You guys watch him while I give a call to Dr. Faustus about our buddy here.


High above unknown to them on the roof there is a shadowed person watching them from the skylight.


Elsewhere in the city… Milagro is in the kitchen and looking out the window staring out into the city. Antonio is in werewolf form trying to arm wrestle Onji. As she looks out into the streets she sees some sort of explosion from the street down a few blocks and a giant creature emerge from where the explosion area. Milagro looks back towards her brother and Onji and says “Uh guys suit up it looks like we got some work to do!”
 

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Hey peeps this time it worked! No erase this time. It does bite, Dayer! From now on I'm typing it on word and cutting and pasting. I also forgot about the text limit. "Doh!!" Thanks Krystal!! Anyways... I hope you like. I will write more soon. Take care and LOL!!!

Oh peeps we need more characters!! Where are all the previous writers? We need some super heroes and super villians! LOL!!
 

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In the outer area's of the city a bright light appears out of thin air and a cold breeze and snow enters through the light and then a figure steps through. It appears to be a man. As he walks he is fascinated by what he sees.
"So this be the world whence the strangers came? What a splendid place! I shall explore this place of mortals, the gods have been away far too long."
And so the figure walks about observing in awe and as he notices the garb of man he then gestures and whispers an encantation and his ancient garb transforms to blend with his surroundings and now he can understand the language and speak fluently. He moves along and in his heart their is wonder and the desire for mischief.

Elsewhere Onji, Milagro and Antonio prepare to do battle with a large creature which is heading in the direction of the very same hospital where Carlos and the others are.
 

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*Andrew watches as Desyre turns and walks away. She apparently has had enough of him, and is ready to move on. Andrew grabs her glass, the one she was holding, and left on the bar top. He picks no vibrations. He tries harder, still nothing.*

(Andrew) "Damn it, why is this ability sooooo unpredictable?"

*He tries again, putting all his concentration on it, suddenly, his nose begins to bleed. He's pushed himself too hard. He grabs a napkin, and discreetly holds it to his nose, and stops the bleeding. He needs to find Daniella. He has to get to where she will be, if not to where she is now. He goes back to the bar, and buys another beer. When the bartender hands it to him, he gives a slight "nudge" with his ability, and gets the vibes he's looking for. He finds the elevator that goes to Danielle's offices on the third floor. He also learns the special code. Now, he needs a diversion. He walks over to a man, who is standing by a woman. He says to him, "That guy in the corner was making some comments about your woman." A fight ensues, and security goes to break it up.

Andrew slides into the unguarded elevator, and punches in the code. Once in the office, he walks around. He touches a few things, but doesn't get much info. He decides to just wait for Daniella to show up, and who knows how long that will take? He takes off his jacket and boots, and lies down on one of the couches.*
 

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Yes while he is lying on the coach, he closes his eyes. The door opens wide open its Daniella and right behind her is Desyre.

Daniella: I heard its your birthday, so I convinced Desyre to come up with me.

Desyre: Yes Andrew we are both here to give you the time of your life.

Daniella: So Papi Prepare your self for what is coming to you.

so with everything being said, andrews face is in shock, and the music turns on.

Desyre opens up her trench coat, she has a lacie red baby doll
Daniella, has a white, Thong and Bra
and they both start a sexy porn dance for Andrew.

Andrew: Oh my girls, What is going on,

Daniella: SHut up and go with the flow.

Desyre just goes closer to andrew, and starts to rub herself on top of his body.

but with all this happening, Daniella starts to get a little jeolous here, and she looks at them as what the hell am I doing, I want this man for myself.

so she goes and starts to prove to andrew that she is better than desyre, but andrew is occupied at the present time.

Desyre: Daniella come on honey you wanted this also. You are sexy mami.

Andrew: Yes Daniella come on sweet thang, get that thong over here on top of me.

Daniella, Andrew and Desyre has the room all hot and foggy, with all interesting things going on. But something happens
 

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Andrew is in on the sofa and experiencing all of this strangeness and is feeling overwhelmed with all kinds of emotions. "What is going on?!?!"
At that moment he is feeling great emotional distress and there is some sort of psychic backlash and the two women morph into a small little imp that had followed Andrew into the office. The creature is 2 feet tall and was feeding off of his emotions. His innate ability disrupted the creatures vampirism on him. Now the creature is stunned and angry and goes for an attack on Andrew. Andrew then looks down and notices some sort of martial arts training area and a weapons chest. He runs towards the weapons chest to get something to kill this thing.

Meanwhile on top of the roof there is the strange man from the other dimension. He laughs out loud to himself and then jumps off the building and lands on a nearby street. He then says to himself "I love being the God of mischief!!! He will play a part in the action to come and I will have front row seats to this splendid drama ha ha ha ha ha!!!!"

Elsewhere Daniella, Brenda and Dona enter the room in the hospital where Carlos is. Carlos see's his daughter and friends and.....
 

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Daniella, Brenda, and Dona walk towards Carlos. He looks as if he hasn't aged a day since the disaster. Daniella is over come, and she runs to his bedside. She grabs him, and hugs him.

(Daniella) "Papi!!!! After all this time, it is soo good to put my arms around you!"

Carlos just stares at her, and gives no response. His face is expressionless.

(Dona) "Why doesn't Carlos talk to her?"

(Brenda) "I don't know Dona, but maybe I can find out......"

Brenda approaches Carlos' bed, but before she can act, a doctor comes in.

(Doctor) "Hello ladies. Can I help you?"

(Daniella) "This is my father. What is his condition? Why won't he speak to me?"

(Doctor) "This man, and another man, were bought in having been found frozen in ice. We have managed to "thaw" them out, and Mr. ElAmante` DellHombre has woken. However, you must remember, he has been through an ordeal. It will be like coming out of a coma. He may have a difficult time talking, walking, eating, and recognizing people."

(Brenda) "Where is the other man that was with him?"

(Doctor) "He is in his own room. He's still unconscious."

(Daniella) "Can't they be placed in the same room?"

(Doctor) "Why?"

(Dona) "They are a couple."

(Doctor) "Excuse me?"

(Brenda) "The other man is Javiar, Carlos' husband."

(Doctor) "I see. That is not allowed under hospital policy."

(Daniella) "They are a married couple."

(Doctor) "No, they are not. They are not legally married, not each other's next of kin, and will stay in separate rooms. Visiting hours are over now. It's time for you to leave."

Daniella goes, and kisses her father.

(Daniella) "I'll be back tomorrow, papi."

the three ladies leave the hospital....and talk to each other.

(Daniella) "I can't believe he was so rude to my father!"

(Brenda) "Daniella, try to relax, and go get some sleep. I will try to send some healing magics to Javiar and Carlos."

(Dona) "Brenda is right. Go back home, or back to "Club Chosen" and try to relax.
 

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Andrew reaches the weapons cabinet, and grabs a katana blade. He turns and swings the blade towards the imp. The imp dodges the blow, and goes towards Andrew's throat. Andrew raises the blade, and the Imp flies into the handle. Having picked up the Imp's vibrations through the handle of the katana blade, Andrew can sense the next attack. The Imp flies at Andrew, and at the last second, Andrew raises the blade, and slices the Imp in two.

The Imp screams, and explodes into a puff of smoke. Andrew is tired, and not sure what to do. He needs sleep, and won't leave. However he doesn't feel safe. He leans against the cabinet, and is hit with an impression. He sees himself sprinkling water around. He looks in the cabinet, and finds an ornate bottle. The bottle is holding holy water. Andrew picks it up, and begins to sprinkle it around the doors and windows. While he does this, he thinks of Desyre, and why she is sooooo fixated on him? She better realize he is gay soon, or he may have to b*tchslap her.

Feeling comfortable, he lays back down, and drifts off to sleep.
 
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