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The Final Battle-Part 6

Heaven/Andreus VS Tobias (continued)

Tobias flies to Andreus and grabs him. Andreus has never felt such a strong grip. Tobias flies up with Andreus, and then slams him into the concrete floor, breaking his back. Angelique runs to Andreus and begins to heal him. Tobias flies up, and attempts to crash into Angelique, but he slams into a wall instead. Angelique looks up to see a force sheild around her and Andreus, thanks to Brenda. Tobias then turns on Heaven. He grabs her, and she struggles to break free. He flies her at top speed towards a wall, and a wooden spike that is jutting out. He pushes her towards and and lets go. Suddenly, Heaven is grabbed and pulled down. Carlos, completely healed, has saved Heaven.

(Heaven) "Carlos....I don't know what to say."

(Carlos) "Say it after we've stopped Tobias."

Taina and Onji appear in the room, and look at the battles goin on. They can't decide where they are needed most. Suddenly, Marisol catches Taina's eye......Marisol gives Taina a pushing motion, then points and Taina, and grabs her necklace. Taina knows what Marisol is saying, and whispers to Onji.

Heaven, Angelique, Rico and Carlos stand in front of Tobias....

(Tobias) "Fools, you will never stop me..........I am all powerful!!!!"

Suddenly, Tobias is pushed back......pressed against the wall....It is Marisol, using her psy powers to hold him in place. Suddenly, Tobias' shirt starts to move. Tobias fights to free himself, but he is trapped....The movement on his chest confuses him. Then, he looks to his right and sees what is happening. The other twin, Taina is using her powers too. She causes his shirt to rip, exposing the "Red Eye Diamond" pendent he wears, which gives him the Earthmeld power. The chain snaps, and the pendant flies towards Taina. Onji grabs it and teleports it away....and Tobias screams........

The other sounds in the room from the other battles continue, but begin to quiet. The Chosen Ones are winning. In the corner, Daniella and Aurora watch and smile. They can see that the tide is definitly flowing with the side of good. Javiar, Francisco, and Rudolfo have started attacking vampires. They have killed off all of the human guardians. This frees up Angelique, Luna, and Carlos to attack the more skilled vampires, and finish them off.

Marisol let's Tobias go, and he falls from the wall, to the floor. He looks up to see Heaven decending on him. She attacks him with the ferocity of a wild animal. She beats him to a bloody pulp, throwing punch after punch. The attack is so quick and furious, that Tobias has no chance to fight back. He is at the brink of unconsciousness. Finally, Heaven grabs Tobias by the throat, and she snaps his neck. Carlos steps forward, and just to be safe, pierces Tobias' heart with two of his special arrows. Finally, before he can turn to dust, Rico graps the body and throws it into the fire pit. A huge plume of dark, vile smelling smoke rises from the pit. It is over.

Onji returns to the warehouse, and everyone is standing, staring at each other, in silence. They did it. They won.......the Chosen Ones stand triumphant.

Everyone begins to rejoice.......Daniella, Javiar and Carlos hug. Heaven sits by Andreus and Luna.....Rico and Taina fall into each others arms. Marisol and Rudolfo share a kiss. Onji and Aurora approach each other, and congratulate themselves on a job well done. Brenda approaches Angelique, and receives a hug.

(Brenda) "Angelique, I'm so sorry that I let anger and jealously taint me and my behavior. Can you forgive me?"

(Angelique) "Brenda, I'm glad you came back to the right side. It will take some time to repair our friendship, but after what we just accomplished, how can we not make that effort?"

Suddenly a scream is heard.......

(Taina) "Ay Dios Mio......the pain......(Taina is holding her stomach).......Rico, mi amor, I think the baby is coming........."
 
Just as the Original chosen are celebrating and the baby is felt, time begins to slow down and stop and all dissapears in a blinding white light.

In the Dark future The power of Antonio and DarkAngel is felt all over the city. The fight is so vicious and their power is so immense that each attack is felt by all. The original chosen and the new chosen gather close together and join hands with Ophelia and then a protective sheild is placed all around them and the ruined building. As they look up the stormy skies have become more violent as the large gate is closes further. But something else is affecting the sky and the world. Suddenly Darkangel stops his attack and feels his strength draining.

(DarkAngel):"Something is wrong?? I sense it!?

(Antonio):"I sense it too. Looks like the good guys win after all."

(DarkAngel):"No this cannot be. Nooooo!!!!!!!!"

(Antonio):"YES!!"

Down below Tobias is feeling weaker as well and he heard his master's dissappointment from high above and decides to help. He then flies up with both swords in his hands to attack Antonio. As Tobias gets near two large red lights which look like eyes in the sky appear. Then there is a loud sinister voice "This was not part of the plan!! Kill him my DarkAngel!!!" Then at the gate there is a figure appearing and it is the Dark one himself. The Dark one raises his hand and points to the Darkangel. Suddenly DarkAngel feels a surge within him and he finds his great strength has returned even more stronger. Then he begins his attack anew. He flies to Antonio and punches him with great speed in the face and the stomach and then the face again. Antonio feels some serious pain and is now bleeding and quite bruised. Darkangel then grows large claws and slashes gaping wounds on Antonio's chest. Antonio begins to use his energy to heal and Darkangel takes advantage of that a begins to pound on Antonio ferociously. Antonio being beaten suddenly hears a voice "Look down." He then looks down and see's the a shine down below. He then reaches out with his senses and realizes the gleam is the spear of destiny. The voice was actually his guardian angel. Antonio then reaches out his hand and levitates the spear to himself. Tobias floats nearby not knowing what to do. As DarkAngel assaults him Antonio pushes him back with all his strength. DarkAngel is startled by Antonio's act.

Antonio now has the spear and hurls the spear with great speed towards DarkAngels heart. DarkAngel doesn't get a moment to react the spear has pierced his flesh and is now burning inside his heart. DarkAngel reels in pain and is suddenly engulfed in flames. Tobias then flies to his master and pulls out the spear but now he is burning. The Dark one is now furious and has appeared high above. DarkAngel is weak and refuses to die Tobias is now burning from touching the spear. He is dying. Then Antonio summons all his strength and calls to his friends. "My friends! The chosen of the past and future lend me your strength to hurl this abomination away from here to go to the firey pitts where it belongs!" The chosen then look up and point their hands up to him and lend him some of their strength. Then Antonio lights up brightly and rushes DarkAngel and they make contact. The gate is now much smaller and DarkAngel grabs hold of the edges and refuses to go in. Then Antonio realizes what must be done. He then grabs hold of DarkAngel and then looks to down towards his friends. "Good bye my friends and Good bye Taina my love. We did it we saved the world." Then Antonio pushes forward with the last of his remaining strength and he and DarkAngel pass through the gate. Now the gate is closed. Tobias burning still is falling ever downwards towards the ground. He then yells out "Though.. I pass.. into oblivion ..MY LEGACY.. SHALL.. LIVE.. ON!!.... Tobias then dies and ash and smoke is left of him.
 
All around the sky shutters in violent and strange quakes and the earth shakes like a world wide earthquake. All of the chosen and Ophelia gather closer together and Taina cries for Antonio. Just when they think it is the end... All fades into a bright white nothingness.

In another plane of existence in the near the Heavens four Angels float near a table with a book. They are Michael the ArchAngel and Rafael and Antonio's Guardian Angel and near them a certain fallen Angel.

(Dark Prince):"I guess this means my fun is over?"

(Michael):" Yes it does."

(Dark Prince):"Yeah over.... for now."

The dark one then dissappears returning to his dark kingdom.

(Michael):"Well Antonio succeeded."

(Guardian Angel):" Yes he did. But he has paid the ultimate price. He is down below holding his dark half at bay."

(Michael):"Yes unfortunately."

(Guardian Angel):" Will he be free?"

(Michael):"Only time will tell. Okay Rafael we have work to do."

(Rafael):"Yes we do."

Rafael then opens the book and there is a picture of the earth and then the pages begin to turn and show all that has happened in both time lines.

(Rafael):"Time and reality is unbalanced.(Rafael then grabs a plumed pen) With the power of the great one above Time and Reality shall be restored."

Then all the bright white light on earth dissapears and all is restored as it was. The earth is back with sunlight and people walk the streets and birds chirp and dogs bark. All is restored and no one remembers what happened no one except the chosen and other individuals directly involved with what has transpired. The chosen and friends remember both time lines and it will haunt their dreams for a time.

Down below in the dark realm Tobias is dragging heavy loads to a room in the palace of the Dark one. He is now a slave. He hopes to maybe be promoted at some time in the future.

On earth The chosen are now gathering together to rush to a hospital. Taina's baby is now the current situation. Those affected by sunlight stay behind while the others go to the hospital.

Time passes and....
 
Fast forward to a month after the final battle that took place. It is a clear night, and the sky is filled with stars. The original weather prediction was for thunderstorms, but with a small incantation from Brenda the witch, the storm front blew by quickly in the morning, and it is smooth sailing. A cool breeze blows over the churchyard, which will keep everyone comforatable.

The church courtyard is surrounded by large shrubs, giving complete privacy to the special gathering that is taking place here tonight. The shurbs have been decorated with twinkling white lights, and large white bows. Several small tables and chairs have been set up around the courtyard, with candles and floral center pieces. In one corner is a bar, and opposite that is the food table. A dj has been set up against the left side of the courtyard, and he is playing "mood" music as guests have started to file into the courtyard. In the center of the courtyard is a gaezebo, which has been decorated with flowers, bows, and twinkling lights.

Rico is the first to arrive, as Carlos and Javiar have asked him to be the official "greeter". Since there are no ushers or "best men", Rico was asked to greet the guests and direct them to the seats. By his side is Taina. She is holding her baby. She remembers going into labor after the final battle, and being paniced that they wouldn't make it to the hospital in time. To this day she thanks God that Angelique was able to quickly heal Rico's wounds from the battle so that he could be at the hospital while she gave birth. He was in the delivery room with her, and was so overcome with joy, he almost passed out. Taina couldn't help but laugh at that. After all the battles and bloodshed, he almost passes out in the delivery room! She looks down at the little bundle in her arms, the sweetest little girl she's ever seen. After all that they had been through, she wanted her daughter to have a name that would signify their triumph over all the evil they've faced, she and Rico decided to name her Milagro (Miracle). Little Milagro is sleeping now, and Taina hopes she will remain this way, so that the ceremony will be peaceful. Little Milagro, even at this young age, has started to exhibit some of her mother's powers, causing her toys and bottle to levitate at times. It is something that Taina and Rico are going to have to teach her to suppress for now.

In a few moments, in walks Alberto ElChulo, and his guest, Dona Lengua Larga. While in this timeline, they didn't have to take part in battles, due to Brenda's spell, they remember the battles they had, that now, actually never happened. It has caused Dona to realize that gossip (while fun) really serves no purpose in the big scheme of things, and she is ready to start being more mature about her topics of conversation. As for Alberto, he now realizes that jumping from woman to woman is not the way to find happiness in his life. While he and Dona may not end up married, they are both happy with each other for now, and that is enough.

Next at the entranceway to the courtyard is Brenda the witch, and Onji the shadow demon. They feel this is an important step for them. It's funny that they had started out of the side of evil, and now are at the wedding of two of the Chosen Ones. It is not the most comfortable of situations yet, but the fact of the matter is that during the final battle, the two of them helped the Chosen Ones to win, and have sworn that they will stay on the side of good, in case they are needed in future battles.

Right behind them are Heaven, and Andreus. Heaven has had a difficult time as of late. The soul she received has caused her bloodlust for human blood to stop. However, it has been an adjustment for her. It is almost like learning how to live again. While she is happy with the results, she didn't realize how complicated things would be. She is progressing, and knows that this is (and will continue to be) a success story for her. Andreus is at her side. He has loved Heaven for many years, and knows the feelings are mutual. He has vowed to stay by her and support her decision, and give her whatever assistance she needs.

Next comes Aurora, and Blanca. They met in the future, when things went to hell. Becuase of Brenda's spell, they both had memories of everything that took place, so they remembered each other. After the final battle, and victory of the Chosen Ones, Aurora looked up Blanca to see if she was ok. Blanca was very happy to see Aurora, and they caught up with each other, and have begun dating. Nothing serious, just some dating, but they are both happy with this situation.
 
Marisol and Rudolfo enter the courtyard now. Marisol immediately runs over to Taina, to say hello to her little niece, Milagro. Taina good-naturedly teases Marisol, asking when she is going to see an engagement ring on Marisol's finger??? Marisol replies that while nothing is set yet, she and Rodolfo have been discussing marriage. They are taking things one day at a time, and when the time is right, they will be engaged. Rodolfo looks around the courtyard, and the "assortment" of guests that are arriving. A few of Javiar's and Carlos' old friends from Carlos' days of dressing in drag as "Chiquita Banana" have arrived. Neither Carlos or Javiar invited family, as neither one of them are close to their families. Chosen Ones, vampires, witches, demons, humans....all in one space, celebrating. It all seems surreal to Rodolfo, especially since in their battles together, at seperate times, both Javiar and Carlos nearly died. Rudolfo thought this was a day that neither of them would live to see.

Francisco arrives with Daniella, and Angelique. He looks around the courtyard as well. He thinks to himself just how "over the top" this whole thing is. While he is not a homophobe, the idea of a gay marriage ceremony is a little "too much" for him. Also, his sister Daniella has filled him in on all the battles that have taken place. While he knew that there was more to this group than meets the eye, he wasn't prepared for everything he heard. The first thing he does is goes to the bar and gets a beer, so that he can relax. As for Angelique and Daniella, they mingle with as many people as they can, before they have to play their parts in the ceremony. Angelique walks up to Brenda, and hugs her. The two women have been able to renew their friendship, and put the bad feelings in the past.

The last of the guests are starting to appear. More of Javiar's and Carlos' friends. Then, Luna appears escorted by Romero (X-Man). The two of them had admired each other from afar for some time now, after seeing each other fight at the old club "Sinfulicious". They admired each other's skills on the battlefield, and began to talk. While it is not a romantic connection yet, there is a strong friendship, and who knows where that could lead to? The two of them walk over and start to talk to Marisol, and Taina. Romero surprises them by telling them he has found a place to live just outside of town. This will allow him to come visit with them more often, and they can become a family.

Everyone is standing around, talking and listening to music. The "Chosen Ones" are hearing stories about both Javiar and Carlos from their other friends. It turns out that in the begining, the two of them didn't get along well, but somewhere along the line, things changed. Suddenly, the dj starts to lower the music, and Fr. Jack Daniels walks up the aisle, and takes his place in the gazebo. Everyone takes their seats. The dj changes his disc, and plays instrumental music that was picked by Carlos and Javiar......they didn't want to have "Here Comes The Bride", for obvious reasons, but wanted to be a little "funny" with their choice. Since their recent battles have taken them to "hell and back", and some would consider this ceremony "strange" they have decided to walk up to the gazebo to the music of "Stanger in Paradise". Daniella is escorting Carlos up the aisle. He is in a black tuxedo, with a white collarless shirt. A gold chain instead of a tie. They reach the gazebo, and Daniella kisses her father, and sits down. Then, Angelique appears, with her arm on Javiar. He is in black pants and collarless black shirt, with a white jacket. Also a gold chain instead of a tie. Angelique kisses Javiar and sits down. Everyone else then sits down, and Fr. Jack Daniels begins the ceremony.

(Fr Jack Daniels) "What is love? Love is the strongest emotion that we can feel. When two people are in love, it is not something that should be hidden, but out in the open, and celebrated. We are here to day to witness a marriage. What is a marriage? It is two people coming together to cement their love in a permanent bond. Many people have different ideas what constitues a "married couple". After getting to know both Carlos, and Javiar, and their struggles together, I can honestly say that I know these two men are truly in love, and can't think of anyone else who should be allowed to be married. Carlos and Javiar have written special vows for today, and I ask them to face each other and recite them."
 
(Javiar) "Carlos, you mean more to me than anyone else before, and more than anyone else ever will. I have complete trust in you, I have complete faith in you, and I have complete love for you. You make me feel happy, you make me feel confident, you make me feel loved, and I promise to do the same for you, for the rest of our lives."

(Carlos) "Javiar, you accepted me when I felt no one else did. You are the reason I learned to love myself, and in turn, love you. If you fall, I will catch you. If you hurt, I will heal you. If you cry, I will comfort you. If you fear, I will hold you. If you rejoice, I will celebrate with you, and will do all that and more, for all of our time together."

(Fr Jack Daniels) "Carlos, please take the ring, and place it on Javiar's finger and repeat after me. I Carlos, take you Javiar, to be my husband. With this ring, I thee wed."

(Carlos) "I Carlos, take you Javiar, to be my husband. With this ring, I thee wed."

(Fr Jack Daniels) "Javiar, please take the ring, and place it on Carlos' finger and repeat after me. I Javiar, take you Carlos, to be my husband. With this ring, I thee wed."

(Javiar) "I Javiar, take you Carlos, to be my husband. With this ring, I thee wed."

(Fr. Jack Daniels) "By the power vested in me, I now pronounce you 'Spouses for life'. You may share a kiss."

The two lean in and give each other a kiss, and everyone begins to applaude. They turn and face eveyone, with the biggest smiles anyone there has ever seen. Everyone then moves behind the gazebo to the "party section" where the dance floor has been set up, and the dj takes over.

(DJ) "Ladies and gentlemen, it is my honor to introduce to you for their first dance together as "spouses for life", Carlos, and Javiar! Let's give the a nice round of applause as they have their first dance together. They ask that anyone who would like to join them on the dancefloor, please do so."

Carlos and Javiar prepare to begin their dance, and their new life together. And the dj plays their song.

"Missing Part" by Judy Torres

In my dreams I had the perfect love affair
Just a friend who I could tell my troubles to
I never knew, not in a hundred million years
that the friend who I was looking for had to be you

'cause I'm gonna take you higher
than you've ever never wanted love to be
Now I can see, that I have finally found real love
and knowing what we can be in our hearts
Remembering how simply our love did start
It seems to me that my heart, has found it's missing part

My eyes were closed, I couldn't see you needed me
Now I know you need me just as much as I need you
Now I see that we only must believe
In the strength to carry on, take love where we wanted it to

'cause I'm gonna take you higher
than you've ever never wanted love to be
Now I can see, that I have finally found real love
and knowing what we can be in our hearts
Remembering how simply our love did start
It seems to me that my heart, has found it's missing part

The bridge might fall, and the winds may howl
and still we'll always have a care
Forever and ever we'll be there, forever....forever

'cause I'm gonna take you higher
than you've ever never wanted love to be
Now I can see, that I have finally found real love
and knowing what we can be in our hearts
Remembering how simply our love did start
It seems to me that my heart, has found it's missing part

I found my missing part

Before the rest of the evening can progress, the DJ makes an announcement. Carlos and Javiar have a request of the guests. They request the presence of some special guests at the gazebo, for a special picture. After a few minutes, the photographer is set up and snaping a group picture.

Rico, Taina, Rudolfo, Marisol, Romero, Luna, Heaven, Andreus, Brenda, Onji, Angelique, Carlos, and Javiar, Daniella, Auroa, Alberto, and Dona. The Chosen Ones.
 
During the time of celebration on uch a glorious night something else is taking place. Far away in a secluded lair there is a deep underground structure and in that structure there is a bolted door with a timer and on that door it says
"Project Legacy". What is this? Only time will tell and that is another story.

THE END. Or is it?
 
I just wanna say that I had a GREAT time writing this story, creating the characters of Carlos and Javiar, and making them "come alive" through my keyboard.

I had a great time writing with FreestyleGod, Tazee, Nyasia, MyOnlySweetie, LaMasGrande, LaMatrix, Enigma, and all the other writers who dropped in and out of our story!
 
FreestyleGod said:
During the time of celebration on uch a glorious night something else is taking place. Far away in a secluded lair there is a deep underground structure and in that structure there is a bolted door with a timer and on that door it says
"Project Legacy". What is this? Only time will tell and that is another story.

THE END. Or is it?
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Or is it? 😱 I hope it's not! 😀 I love reading what you guys create! :yeey
 
Hey peeps I just wanna let you guys know I had a great time working on this story, it was fun coming up with all these characters and creating all the danger and drama to entertain you. I enjoyed working with all the writers involved, this was a kick ass story and I'm glad all the readers enjoyed it and hopefully someday we can make something of this awesome story, maybe something tv wise. As for the next story that will be some time in the future
I will be busy writing a story of my own to hopefully make some money off of it, till the next online story keep it real. Also big thanks and respect to lamatrix for starting this and big thanks to all the other writers especially nyasia, chuck, taezee, lamasgrande, and everybody else and our biggest fans krystal and myonlysweetie peace and lol.
FreestyleGod
 
ahhhemmm someone promised me a copy of this novela cause when i got cut off at my old job from the internet I had no time for writing and getting creative. but my hats off to Chuck and FreestyleGod for keeping it going and making it what it is. CF's very own TELENOVELA.

on a another note. I'm thinking of another one give me a few days to come up with the story! lmaooo!
 
Another one would def be great & my hats off to Chuck as well for Taking over my character when I poofed offline 🙂
 
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