Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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Lamatrix said:
ahhhemmm someone promised me a copy of this novela!
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Oh snap!

I'm working on it. LOL

I have it saved to my comp, I'm going over it to make sure I saved everything, and it makes sense, and all the errors are out.

When it's complete, you'll have it.
 
I truly loved writing for this, and here is a long overdue thanks.

Hey Krys, thanks for coming into the story, and bringing Carlos back into it, reviving him after I killed him off. :lol

I enjoyed developing Carlos from drag queen to Vampire Slayer, and having the story end with his and Javiar's commitment ceremony. That would never have happened if I went through with my original plans to keep Carlos a ghost.
 
Hey peeps I finally finished my Wolverine/Predator story and guess what? I will start the new Telenovella very soon! I have a begining that will knock your socks off! After that it will be up to you guys to now make up some new characters to go along with the set up. Stay tuned and be ready to write after that! LOL and Peace!!!! :thanks :wave
 
After many years of peace and happiness and very little trouble from the forces of darkness and all that our heroes have gone through another battle had happened. This battle would not be won though for this was a battle with nature and the great city was left in ruins. Eventually the survivors and outside help would be rebuild the city new and rename it Neo York. Despite all the new technology and the glitz and glamor of the new city there are still parts that were not fixed up and those places are the dark lower levels where the unwanted and unseen people and things hide. A place of mutation a place of creatures a place of the poor and the unattractive. In this day in age there are not only mutations but also cyborgs and genetic engineering and other kinds of superhumans but despite all this... the supernatural still exist and they are waiting for a sign a signal to come out and try to succeed where their bretheren have failed. That time is not quite yet, but soon.


Down in the lower levels there are mishapen poor children running and screaming down a dark street. The children are running for their lives and as they run all of them make it into an old abandoned building all except one. The one left behind is a little girl and she has tripped and fallen to the ground. The fragile child is crying from the pain of her bleeding knee. In the distance she can hear it coming, the growls and the loud ground shaking thuds of it's feet moving from its massive size. The creature is getting closer and closer and the child is terrified. The creature is some sort of mutant demon hybrid and it is hungry. It is massive in body and height standing at 10 feet tall weighing half a ton. It has thick armored like red skin and very large teeth and long strong claws and it usually feeds on large animals but it enjoys devouring children.


The creature is now standing over the terrified child drooling in anticipation of its tender morsel. The child screams and then suddenly a shadowed figure runs at the creature with great speed and kicks it. The creature moves back slightly and is surprised that it was even moved even if slightly. The creature now take a swipe at the figure but the figure is quick and agile and dodges easily the little girl is then grabbed and quickly brought to the doors of the building and the other children help the little girl in. The creature is now annoyed and looks to his new prey and says "That was my meat! Now you will be my food!" The figure says "I don't think so monster!" The creature yells out "You are mine meat bag!!" The figure steps out of the shadows and it is a young woman and she gets into a battle stance and says "Come and get me if you can!"
 
The creature then roars and begins to charge towards the young woman, she side steps and dodges and as the creature is turning around to try its next charge she makes her way up close and personal and unleashes some devastating blows with fist and feet to the creatures face. The creature is now really angry and then a voice is heard "Keep it still so I can kill it!" She hears the voice and the creature begins to move forward to attempt another attack. The girl's eyes begin to glow a little and she gestures with her hands and holds the creature back telekinetically back against a brick wall. She then calls out "Hurry up bro this thing is strong!" and then from a nearbye roof top a teenage boy leaps and transforms to a semi lupine form and unsheaths a sword. It is the sword known as Darhk glaive. The wolf boy then plunges his sword deep into the brain of the creature and it drops with aloud thud and old cracked windows break from the creatures impact to the ground. The boy pulls out the sword and cleans it off and walks to the young woman and says "Wasn't that awesome sis?" "Whatever." she says. And then out of the shadows steps a demon ninja. The demon ninja is Onji and he then stands next to the teen boy and the young womanand says "Milagro you needed to react faster. What if that creature was faster and smarter? What then of the little girl? And you young man? You were showing off!! You were a little sloppy with that landing too. It looks like some more intensive training tommorrow. Now let us go get some dinner your auntie Brenda must be waiting.


As the trio walks away Onji is reminded of the good old days of the chosen ones. He is then saddened that not all are here to day. Some died in the natural disaster and some dissappeard without a trace. Brenda is around and has raised the children along with Onji. Angelique is now the new Oracle because Ophelia has moved onto a higher existence and Angelique is her liason. Angelique now resides in a private tower.
 
Well there you go peeps!!! The beginning of a new chapter of the telenovela!
I will reveal some more soon. Now its time for some new characters!
Speaking of new characters.... Milagro. Yes the daughter of Taina. The son? The son of Taina and Rico. Both have special abilities. Milagro has enhanced strength and speed as well as telekinetics and she heals faster than a normal human and she may have another power that I haven't revealed yet. The boy has enhanced abilities especially his semi werewolf form which he has total control of his lupine heritage and he has enherited his father's sword. Onji is their trainer and guardian. He is their Obiwon. Although he is older his demon heritage allows him to live a very long time.

As for other characters? It's time for peeps to make up some! So go ahead peeps and have fun!! Oh bye the way Taina and Rico's son needs a name any ideas? Lets have a vote! Well take care and peace my friends and LOL!!!
 
GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nice indeed! I'm all late and ish though! LMAO!

But what of Taina and Antonio's child? :confused
 
Krystal my dear, Milagro is Taina and Antonio's child. She is older now(it's the future) and has a younger brother, the son of Taina and Rico. I think Antonio(first name and Carlos as his middle name). Oh and Dayer darling you go ahead and think of some characters we need some good stuff to work with!
Hey Chuck where are ya??
 
As the trio of heroes make their way home something of importance is about to take place. In the private tower of Angelique the new oracle she sits in meditation and see's a vision, the vision is of Carlos and Javier floating slowly upwards to the surface of the ocean.They are encased in ice that was caused by the freezing of water around them due to a mystical protection shield. This shield was created by a magical talisman that they held together in hopes it would save them from a large tidal wave that was one of the natural disaster's that ravaged the earth and laid the city to ruins. Carlos and Javier have been preserved inside the mystic shield.

Elsewhere there is a dance club that has become very popular the club is called "Club Chosen". The dance club itself is very gothic in look and the employees that work there are dressed as vampires and werewolves and witches. On the walls there are very detailed paintings that depict the chosen ones battles. These masterpieces of art were created by the owner of the club and that person is Daniella the daughter of Carlos of the chosen. She is now older and had this three floor building built as kind of a shrine and a tribute to the ones who had saved the world a few times. Inside the building is the lower floor that serves as the dance club, it is a very large area and has a high cieling with stairs that lead to little balconies over looking the whole dance floor and bar area. Then there is the private vip area that has a smaller dance floor and a dining area and also a private meeting room. The upper floor is Daniella's private suite which is very large with a living area, office, guest rooms and a martial arts training area complete with weapons cabinate.

It turns out that Daniella became very wealthy because of a dream she had of a hidden artifact that was in a buried treasure chest. There was some gold and gems also and the artifact itself was put in a museum. The source of the dream? A little after effect that lingered a bit after the whole time and reality thing and saving the world was over. This gift faded after the dream.

The trio of heroes arrived at their home and find that the place is empty. There is a note at the dinner table that says "Hey guys you took too long and something important came up, food's in the oven. I will be back soon! Love always your favorite wicked witch Brenda!"

At Club Chosen Brenda walks through the doors and the bouncers know to let her in. She walks into the main area passing people to get to the private elevator. On the way passing the bar area she passes two individuals A man dressed somewhat like a viking and a goth looking woman. She senses great power in them but feels they are not a threat, she senses that they are good. She then makes her way to the elevator and she is let up to see the owner of this fine establishment. Daniella was in her office dealing with some bills and paper work with freestyle music playing in the background when suddenly she hears a familiar voice "Daniella. Daniella! Daniella!!" She gets up and opens the door to her office and see's Brenda. "What's going on?" Daniella asks. Brenda replies "Angelique had a vision, your dad is alive!"
Daniella is stunned and she thinks of all the years that have passed and all that she has gone through and then she faints.
 
In her private tower Angelique sits and meditates and looks further into her vision. She see's Carlos and Javier being rescued from the ice and the ocean. She see's Carlos awake and reunited with his daughter, but she also see's sadness. It turns out due to Carlos's enhanced physical form it helped him to recover as for Javier he was a normal man and is in a coma and she is not sure when he will wake up. This is her vision.

Elsewhere a familiar face is walking towards Club Chosen, it is Dona she is headed over to see how Daniella is doing. Although she is older now she still finds time to walk around and spread the latest gossip. As she makes her way in two people are walking out, a viking looking man and a woman dressed in black with long black hair. They smile and the man holds the door open for her and Dona walks in. The two mysterious people walk away and a light appears in front of them and the two dissappear.

Somewhere else a large bank heist is about to take place and the ones involved are in a large hover van. They are superhumans. Some have biological power while the others have technological or cybernetic abilities. They are working for a powerful person who runs a major crime organization. The guards inside may have some body armor and taser guns but they will prove to be ineffective against the superhumans about to rob the bank.
 
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