Today, The Sky Is Gray In My Mind

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Today is a sad day for me.
Trying to write so I won't feel lonely.

People see me and never know....
The pain I feel, the pain I hold.

They say that in order for someone to love you....
That they must understand you.

No one will understand me.
These wounds I have are live and deep.

You see what's on the outside.
But can you see what's on the inside?

And if you did......how would you treat me then??
Afraid to be alone without no friend.

Janet, Rosa, and Mary.
All of you are married.

Yet you seek what's not yours.
Looking at fresh meat, taking tours.

Can anyone blame me for my lack of trust?
I just find that this love game is so unjust.

George Lamond once said "who needs love"
But then I see myself alone....."where does that leave love"

"Love can be so right, but things can go so wrong."
"Love may not last very long."

"I know as for me"
Love will never be.

Cuz what I want to share together...
Will never be forever.

I belong in another time.
When love was all that and so fine.

But I see heartbreak in the people I see.
So I can't help that this way I have to be.

Should I move?
Cuz the way I feel is not cool.

Influences are getting me.
I didn't know girls can be so easy.

I'm looking for the blue skies.
I just wanna feel love's high.

But when something negative happens.....
I give up quick and start lackin'.....

....Of the love I wish to give, the love I wish to receive.
Sometimes I think it will just stay a dream.

I think I was meant to be alone.
I just wish I had someone I can hold.
 
I agree LaBettygreat poetry. Mysterious I think your a talented writer, You put alot of emotion in your poems.I enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing
 
i agree with the girls mysterious it's very emotional : i felt the deep emotions in this one..... i feel ya . this was beautiful work...i always enjoy reading your work. all the time . i hope your day feels brighter before the night is over,so you can sleep content. .thanks for sharing this poerty .i loved it like all of them.talented you are ....
 
Great job!!! I hope you continue to share with us your ideas, feelings, thoughts....etc, etc. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Hey guys. I didn't quite know how to respond back to your compliments being that I was down yesterday so it took me awhile to say what I really wanted to say.

First off, I want to say thanks for the kind words. They are definitely appreciated and not overlooked. When I write, I write what I feel at that exact same moment, and in this case like LaBetty said, it turned out to be a very sad poem that I think would depress even the most positive reader. lol. And if so, I apologize for that. That's why I labeled it "Today The Sky Is Gray In My Mind" as a disclaimer in a way. LOL.

La Mas & LaBetty: Thank you for the very kind words!!

MusicLady & NY Beauty : Thanks. My day is brighter. 😉 Thanks for the warm wishes. Talented writer?.....I don't know. Emotional?? Yes. lol.

Myriam Cruz: I will definitely post more. Thanks! 🙂
 
talented you are . hey i'm emotional too. so i'm with oyu on that one too .but i understand what you mean .and i love all of your work. and your welcome no problem at all. you know those are ways to inspire others in an unusual way but it works . all this these emotions that we write on here . beleve it or not it helps others .there like oh i'm not alone. for me i like to say it's therapy for me. i get out thoughts ideas poems emotions.,and it helps me a lot to read others thoughts as well ,rather it be sad or happy depressing or funny ,erotic however. i love to read and it helps me. and i get inspired. so thank you for sharing your words . i always enjoy reading.
 
Yeah. It's definitely a release for me to just spill out what i'm feeling. Most of the time, I keep these feelings inside. It does help because I feel alot closer to my heart than usual when i'm writing and I just feel like holding on to that moment forever.
 
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