T - E - A - R - S (copywritten 2003)

[lonely4eva]

T - TORMENTING drops of emotions that fall, caused by pain that is
----released from deep within one's soul..

E - EVERLASTING because the pain that causes them never seems 2 fade..


A - ALONE is usually how one feels in this state of mind, isolated
----from the world and everything that exists..

R - REFLECTIONS from past experiences continue to hold our soul
----captive as we struggle 2 free ourselves from the pain keeps
----us from once again finding happiness..

S - SLOWLY they fade only 2 return 2 our existence at some other
----time in our lives..

:hpound - :hpound = :sosad

 

[pr_shortie]

damn lonley..that was good..i liked it ALOT

 

[lonely4eva]

Thank u the words come easy especially when u carry so much pain within u......

 

[pr_shortie]

aaaawww..I know how you feel but u gotta keep ya head and belive that better times are to come..

 

[lonely4eva]

I know that there are better times to come, but in the meantime i'll just ease my pain the best way I know how and that's through my poetry....

 

[pr_shortie]

I feel ya on that one..Im the same way...keep em coming😉

 

[ARTISTDLA]

i love the poem, i hope that the pain you feel is not towards me.....im praying......

 

[myonlysweetie]

It was tight! Loved it..i hope to read more...=)

 

[littlebenitez5]

BPT the place to be!!!!!
Nice poem good to hear from someone from our hometown