"No More Pain"(copywritten 2003)

[lonely4eva]

As I sit here in lonliness, pain and emptiness fills my heart today
I can't bear it any longer, I just want it 2 go away....

So I hop in my car 2 take a ride
tears stream down my face, the pain I can no longer hide....

As I drive I end up on this winding road
freestyle blasting, as the tears they flowed....

Then I spot a narrow bridge up ahead
crazy shit going through my head....

So I close my eyes as I press on the gas
as thoughts of family and friends in my mind pass....

The car crashes through the railing and fear sinks in as I'm in the air, it hits the water, the pressure is 2 much 2 bear....

In those brief moments as I remenisced
life slowly fading I wonder if I'll be missed....

So as I lie there lifeless at the bottom of the lake
I'll leave this lonely world behind and the lord my soul 2 take:sosad

 

[shorty]

:realsad

 

[marlene aponte]

that's a good one Lonley!🙂

 

[lonely4eva]

thanx 4 da support peeps....😀

 

[ARTISTDLA]

this poem brought tears to my eyes, how could you just say you want to die?, lifes a precious gift, and you say you want to end it all, please listen to me and dont think like you do no more, suicide is not the way to go,just stay strong,keep your head up and live on.....YOURS TRULY ARTIST DLA

 

[1sxychica]

suicide is a coward's way out...

nice poem.

 

[DESTINY11]

I don't think Lonely's contemplating suicide, sometimes are imagination writes.. Nice peom L

 

[lonely4eva]

Thanx DESTINY11 your right i'm not suicidal I just guess I like 2 write poetry that jerks at your emotions. U know the kind of poetry u read and it brings tears 2 your eyes. I also like 2 write poetry that other people in similar situations can relate 2. Once again thanx everyone 4 supporting my poetry.........

 

[DESTINY11]

Your welcome L, It made me kinda think of Eminem, I really enjoyed it😉 Hollllaaaa

 

[lonely4eva]

It's funny that u say that because there are some people in my life that call me eminem......