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MISPLACED

ONCE MORE WITH FEELING THEN ILL RETIRE THIS SCENE
let someone else share their story

MISPLACED

i journey into a looking glass
a reflection of the past
and what i see astounds me
cause with u i am there

now i still hold on to the secrets of yesteryear
same old silence
same old fear
but closer still i stare
on a mantle wraiths of lilies
they pray for good mournings
no end in sight
and when i turn to my former self
(an image ,living in a dream)
I TEEM
CAUSE YOU WHO KNEW LOVE
CAUSE YOU WHO HELD LOVE
YOU LOST FOREVER AND IT WAS GOOD-BYE LOVE
CAUSE WITH YOU ,I WAS THERE

oh what happiness
what selfish delight
and now i cater only to my spite
what rages inside of me?
i am bereft,i am defeated
all around me is a stage
a play who plays
on and on

my reflection
you continue to use my recollection as a weapon
you sting,you wound
you stir the fire and it burns

(i turn away from my memories and enter presently)
THE GLASS THAT BLINDS
THE GLASS THAT BINDS
that which turns what was real into exaggeration
you are no longer mortal,of faults i cant proclaim
risen to the heavens beyond my grasp
living only in this looking glass
a saint
(although the past laughs)
looking glass how you glare
my reflection standing there
tells me i am weak
(i angrily reply)
YOU EVIL DO NOT SPEAK
FOR ALL YOU HAD YOU TOOK FOR GRANTED
CAUSE YOU WHO KNEW LOVE
CAUSE YOU WHO HELD LOVE
YOU LOST FOREVER AND IT WAS GOOD BYE LOVE
CAUSE WITH YOU I WAS THERE
uttering violence whispering silence
my reflection justly replies
what you have known you have held
and what you held was no saint but filled with disrepair
i wish to do you no disservice but you must face the truth
cause you who knew love
cause you who held love
you lost forever and it was good bye love
cause with you i was there

fading away my reflection leaves me
standing in my room i breathe deep
all around me ,you surrond me
my fate has no plans
cause on the wall
a ticking clock stalls
it stands

(I DEMAND)
WHAT IS THE REASON FOR THIS CRYING SEASON
lunacy abounds hiding behind dark clouds

i travel on
space
how i hate how i procrastinate
i do dwell on the stories that i tell
in repetition
disarrayed visions
of you and me love
when will i find peace?
mobility is it within my reach?
cant i for a moment stray?
i am restless i have no glory
but for the wonder of you
for that i end my story
cause you who knew love
cause you who held love
you lost forever and it was good bye love
cause with you i was there






enjoy!?

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I definately enjoyed all of them mama.. Keep 'em coming 🙂
 
For right now i am going to let my words hang i in the air and let people feel them.My writing is kind of scattered i am attemting to write songs,Every,was my first attempt its harder than it looks.First i create a melody than a hook,tell me if i am on the write track or share your method.I have been caught up in the BOOK OF THE THIRD tell me has Kay continued or is he still busy?I like the story its challenging in that is has multiple interweaving story lines also that it represents our culture and not in stereotypical way.I wish every one lots of success our voices need to be heard.LOL:1luv :rainbow :1luv
 
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I like your writing style, if music is made let us have it🙂
Yeah were are you Kay... you left us hanging!
 
he said to email him at his aol address for the story but looks like he's been busy with the Music that the story looks like its on hold for now.
 
Nooooooooooooooo Don't put it on hold,, Scan it or mail it to us 🙂
 
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