"Give Me The Chance" FINAL

[XPiMpiToX]

Hey guys...here is the final version of my first freestyle song...tell me what u think...

"Give Me The Chance"
Written By: Raul Martinez Jr.
(c)2001 Raul Martinez Jr.

Verse 1:
Everytime that I think of you
I just can't understand how we can't be
I can't understand how my love for you will go to waste
Simply because you will not give me the chance...

Chorus:
Give me the chance to show my love for you
Give me the chance to prove
That I will be there for you
Ohh girl just give me the chance
and I will be yours forever...

Verse 2:
Do you feel my presence...
It's the presence de el amor que tengo por ti
Todo mi amor sera para ti
Don't believe it when they say i'm not worth the time
Cuz girl all I want is for you to be mine...

Chorus(2x)

Verse 3:
The time has come
Will you be mine or will my heart have to die
I've waited much too long
And I don't want to be hurt
So Please tell me
What I want to hear...
Chorus
till fade...

And there it is...tell me what ya think...xpimpitox@aol.com

 

[Rhoq]

Raul...

I like the way it all came together. Nice to see that 3rd verse thrown in as well...

 

[XPiMpiToX]

Re: My Song

Thanx for the comments Rhoq. much appreciated. ill write more and of course they will be up here on CF

 

[*FreestyleGurl*]

i like.......🙂

 

[hekt]

Hey Raul, are you the same Raul thats on MP3.com ?

 

[XPiMpiToX]

To Hekt

Nope i could say that im not...this the raul from a lil town up in bay area california...im jus a youngin freestyle freak

 

[FR3ESTYLEKING]

DAMN I NEED THAT MACHINE, when i had the beatz I created one for Lil' Suzy's "Now & Forever" accapella. You should've heard it!