DISTANCE(copywritten 2003)

[lonely4eva]

Your so far away this I know is true
and if I could have only one wish it would be 2 be there next 2 u.....

If u look up at the stars at night u would see
that were not as far apart as it may seem 2 be....

Miles may come between us distance may too
but as long as u keep me in your thoughts
then always will I be there with u....

Remember everything u see at night as u look up at the sky
are the same things in life that r seen by I....

So as u look up to the stars at night where ever u r
you'll see that the distance between us really is'nt all that far :inlove

 

[1sxychica]

l4e... how cute!!!! but things is.. those are just words... 😉

 

[Enigma]

You wrote that with passion huh? Nicely written lonely4eva! 🙂

-ant

 

[freestyle4life]

l4e... how cute!!!! but things is.. those are just words... 😉

Dayum thats cold chica..........

 

[DESTINY11]

Awww endito, that was sweet Lonely 🙂 She said it was cut.. That's what counts😉

 

[1sxychica]

all i said... is that poems are just words.. u should prove urself

words only say so little... actions do so much... it was a good poem tho..

 

[lonely4eva]

Thanx 4 da support everyone. It's easy 2 write poetry like that as long as u write what u feel from deep within your heart...

 

[1sxychica]

well that's when poetry becomes good... when it's from the heart.

keep them coming.

 

[ARTISTDLA]

i say the same 1 sexy chica...but his words do mean alot to me since im the one a far...but its all good and i love poetry and his words do pierce my heart with joy and puts a smil n my face so all is good...

 

[DJJoshuaEdward]

That's really tight and VERY comforting...I like it a lot...

 

[1sxychica]

hmmm... that'sa good thing DLA... i mean it must be nice for someone to dedicate poems for u 🙂 u guys seem so much in love.. that's sinly precious.. i hope u two meet one day!

as for u L4E... u should say if this is a dedication.. cos some of ur poems are sad, and some are happy... it'd be cool to know who they're for 😉 🙂 just my thoughts anyways 🙂

keep them coming!

 

[lonely4eva]

I write what I feel at the time, remember that I'm human and I have good days where I write happy poems and I have bad days when I might write something sad, but sometimes I just like 2 share poems that I wrote from my past. I also like 2 write poetry that other people can relate 2 that could be in a similar situation........

 

[ARTISTDLA]

hmmmmmmmmmm thanks for the poem that you told me was for me over da phone....you should at least say that this poem is for me...i feel like you want to hide what you feel for me...and that i dont know why....it kinda hurts when you do that cuz all the poems that i write for you i dedicate to you.....and your name is there and people see who i really am expressing my feelings to....well there your words and its up to you.....maybe i should stop putting your name down to who the poem is for....i know thought that you will ask who its for, but oh well, maybe i should tel you over the phone, like you do me...if im so special like you say why arent you showing it?..........

 

[1sxychica]

:crap.. uh oooh.. she got a point there chico!

don't worry mama.. he said it was for you so then it was for you 🙂

 

[ARTISTDLA]

yeah i know....but its not the same dedicating it over the phone than on CF cuz on CF i feel special when i see my name and a poem along with it being dedicated to me from someone who cares like he says he does over da phone...know what im saying

 

[1sxychica]

maybe he didn't dedicate this one for u.. but just wrote it over all to people that could relate to long distance relationships/friendships.. I dunno why he didn't... 🙂 oh wells...