Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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romero woke up...pain on both sides of his neck..feeling like the worse hangover in his life...the club was empty..silence..just the lights still flashing the disco ball still spinning..then reality ..it was evident that smitty and flemming were dead..thier throats torn out and the wide eyed look on thier faces.and the blood ..fuk he thought..the rest of the team were waking up..confused as to what happened..ramirez was standing by the dance floor staring but not saying a word the others getting up stumbling..they also seing smitty and fleming...WTF jose screamed..what happened? ranirez says ."i dont know but ive got to report to alpha lead why we have two men down..and if i tell them the truth..we all will be in an asylum when we get back to the states!!"
 
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they all came out of the club to the sunrise..trying to get back to base camp..suddenly the light and heat of the sun was overwhelming..they got sick..thier very flesh seemed to sizzle as if they were in the worlds biggest oven..after the shock and confusion..they felt the "burn" that all vampire do when they are first born..before they realize that they are now creatures of the night,,squinting painfuly and hot they got into the van that they had all driven there in and made thier way back to base camp..most of them in shock and pain.. ramirez finaly saying something..."were fuked"
 
teresa was in the trees observing..she had been a vampire for a long while now and was accustomed to sunlight..she knew of her cousins feeding habits and just was observing.allthough originally from puerto rico..her family was forced out to flee from the island..the legend of "la chewpacarbra" was from her family line.of her aunts and uncles who decided to start feeding on humans instead of just cattle and soon had the locals hunting them down..with the white witches of the island (santeros) identifying them and hunting them down..allthough the vampire were strong theses santeros had the gods working with them and many vampire were slain so teresa and her family were forced to return to europe to belaris where thier family lineage had originated from....and that one night at the castle..when she was hunting romero she looked into his eyes right before feeding on him and felt something.and as she wondered what it was his friends were approaching so she left him..she felt a desire for this man that she could not explain..just by his eyes,,he was human but had the killer instinct.she was curious about him..and now she watched..what he would become knowing one of her cousins had fed on him and the transformation.born into "the thirst"
 
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Bayshore..(present)...to a somewhat normal world or is it??..freckles and torres are in front of alpha lead(ramirez)..he turns to them and says " detectives..how nice of you to come...do you know whats happened here?..torres says "yeah..some of youre guys got waxed by x man"....ramirez looks at them and says " yes thats the rumor..twelve highly trained operatives of a special team you know nothing about.." but let me just say..'not your ordinary $4.50 an hour security gaurd.he took out an elite black ops team..with no problem..by himself...what do you know about him?..freckles sayS "we just know hes "the assasin" for hire..alpha lead "well obvisouly you know that hes more the an assasin for hire",,"no normal assasin would make it out alive from whats happened here"...hes a renegade from a branch of government that doesnt exist gentlemen,,,how did you guys come to be aware of him? torres says "just the street"..the street.. ramirez laughs.the street..you have no clue ,,just then an agent burst in.. we have a contact!!!!!!..romero just killed four officers in the city then vanished!! ramirez shouts "get the bird up and ready".."you gentleman come with me..ill need all the help i can get..i need to kill this insect!!!"...
 
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Umh umh umh my hats off to the story tellers.. You guys rock😉!
 
At Fransisco Rauls apartment..................

Fransisco is in the shower and as he watches the blood fall from his body from the shower down the drain he is thinking to himself. "Was that some kind of beast that did this to me? What the heck is going on in this city this is like a freaken nightmare. Crap I have to check on Daniella I wonder if she is ok....

Fransisco finishes showering.....................
 
Outside the residence of Theresa Nomechaves(the Countessa). The friendly neighborhood just got a whole lot unfriendly! Cop's are shooting and people are running for their lives as as inanimate object's have come to unholy life and are attacking the people. A street phone that grew teeth and eyes and legs is Chasing Dona Lengualarga and is try to smack her with it's phone line! The woman is running for her life and will think of phones differently after this! Metal abstract art statues have seriously injured some residents and are headed towards the cops. The statues have become quite sharp on the edges and point's and appear to have sets of glowing eyes and keep saying over and over in a chillling voice "More Blood, more blood, more blood!!!" A clown statue has come to life from the childrens playground and is chasing children and grabbing things and throwing objects at them all the while laugh out loud with the evilist of laughs. The cops are trying to contain the situation but are failing and things are getting quite chaotic and they call for backup. They think to themselves how are they going to explain this on the police reports without people thinking they are crazy. This night has become a real nightmare indeed!
 
Outside the residence of Theresa Nomechaves(the Countessa). The friendly neighborhood just got a whole lot unfriendly! Cop's are shooting and people are running for their lives as as inanimate object's have come to unholy life and are attacking the people. A street phone that grew teeth and eyes and legs is Chasing Dona Lengualarga and is try to smack her with it's phone line! The woman is running for her life and will think of phones differently after this! Metal abstract art statues have seriously injured some residents and are headed towards the cops. The statues have become quite sharp on the edges and point's and appear to have sets of glowing eyes and keep saying over and over in a chillling voice "More Blood, more blood, more blood!!!" A clown statue has come to life from the childrens playground and is chasing children and grabbing things and throwing objects at them all the while laughing out loud with the evilist of laughs. The cops are trying to contain the situation but are failing and things are getting quite chaotic and they call for backup. They think to themselves how are they going to explain this on the police reports without people thinking they are crazy. This night has become a real nightmare indeed!
 
Grrrr I made a mistake on this one!! I typed out my scene and I made one little mistake word wise and the download was taking forever so I tried to fix it before it went through but.... it didn't work!! The first version has the word mistake the second is the right version! I tried to delete the first but I can't. Can someone Help!?! Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!:face
 
*The scene in the living room is meyham. Our four heroes have destroyed all of the extra "dark angels" summoned by their new leader. Bodies are everywhere. Evil Antonio is standing in front of Carlos, Rico, Marisol, & X-Man. They glance outside and see the havoc that Evil Antonio is creating!*

(Rico) "This is madness! We stand here and do nothing, while this monster threatens innocent lives???"

(Carlos) "Antonio is innocent too! I can hear the good in him crying out for help!"

(X-Man) "Amigo, I think you are the only one!"

(Rico) "Innocent or not, the good of many outweigh the good of one. Attack!"

*Rico has almost become full wolf, and lunges, Marisol runs behind him, ready to use her new telekenisis power. X-Man follows, carrying explosives, and Carlos is last, hoping for the best but preparing for the worst.*

(Evil Antonio) "Fools!!!!"

*Evil Antonio waves his arm, and a shock-wave of energy is released. The four heroes are thrown against the wall where they land in a heap. Before they can get up, they look to see Antonio, advancing towards them.*

(Evil Antonio) "Did you all think you could even slow me down? You dare to presume that you will stop me? Don't make me laugh. I have not even completed my third step, and I'm more powerful than you all. I will be taking my leave of this place, and wait until my child is born. Then, I will hunt down and kill Taina, and become a full Dark Angel. My son will come with me, and rule by my side. I've planned this all out, and left nothing to chance! I have overlooked nothing. I..........uhh!"

*The group of people are now at their feet. They stare at Antonio, who has a very surprised look on his face. A cross between confusion and pain. He looks down and sees a point sticking out from his heart, and his shirt is starting to turn red from blood. Coming out from behind him is something that Evil Antonio did overlook.....Angelique. In his destruction and ranting and raving, he never saw her grab one of Carlos' arrows, with the consecrated host on the tip. He never heard her sneak up from behind. Didnt' sense her presence as she raised her arms and thrust the arrow with all her strength, through his back and through his heart. Evil Antonio falls to his knees, shakes, and falls down on his back to the ground. Angelique approaches Carlos.*

(Angelique) "I'm soooo sorry Carlos. I thought it was very admirable that you wanted to see the good in Antonio, but it was buried too deep, and too many people were at risk to let him live. I know you wanted him back, but I don't believe it was possible to ever see him again."

*The group approaches Evil Antonio, who is quickly dying. As they look at him, his features soften. A weak smile appears on his face. It is the Antonio that they knew before.....before the madness. Before everything.*

(Antonio-whispering) "Carlos........."

(Carlos) "I'm here. What is it?"

*Antonio reaches up and grabs Carlos' shoulder and looks at him with a smile.*

(Antonio-whispering) "Thank you.....for trying!"

*With that, Antonio dies. There is a flash of light, and he is gone. Angelique, who was too tired from saving Javiar, has no energy left to save Antonio. Carlos begins to cry, and Javiar comes to him and holds him. Everyone else looks out the window to see the amount of work and explaining to do, and is very surprised. Without the Dark Angel's energy to sustain them, all the evil work he was doing is undone. All the statues and figures bought to life are once again inanimate. The wounds they inflicted on people are healed. In fact, people's memories of the events are erased, and no one, with the exception of the people closest to the action remember what exactly happened. The victims no longer remember why they are running, and the police no longer remember who they are chasing. The massacres along the way suddenly become "unexplained mysteries" that in telling will turn into urban legends. Later that evening, the group sits at the kitchen table.*

(X-man) "So...what happens now?"

(Angelique) "Your identity is safe for now X-Man. I destroyed all evidence of your little "adventures".

(X-Man) "I appreciate that."

(Taina) "I'd like to think that you'll be staying here awhile. You've got two daughters to get to know, as well as a grandchild in the near future."

(X-man) "I can't speak of what the future holds, but it may be nice to stay here for a while."

(Marisol) "And I would like to figure out the extent of our powers."

(Angelique) "All in good time. I will be spending time with you. You both must be trained to take over your mother's work."

(Marisol) "What kind of work?"

(Angelique) "That is best saved for another day. Between me and Carlos, we should be able to fill you in on the story."

(Marisol) "Another day, well, that allows me some time to see Rudolpho in the hospital. I have some loose ends to tie up there. I've gotten him a pair of leg warmers to wear.

(Carlos) "I can't speak for anyone else, but this experience has taught me that I don't want to be dancing as Chiquita anymore. I need more for me than that. I also don't want to be alone anymore, so Javair, will you be my husband?"

(Javiar) "Yes! Papi, I love you." *Leans in and kisses Carlos*

(Rico-in human form again) "I also don't want to spend my life alone. Taina, do you love me?"

(Taina) "I need time Rico. So much has happened now. I need to learn of Mama, and my father, and my powers, and become self-reliant. I do know that I feel better when your around. Let's wait awhile, and take it day by day."

(Rico) "Well, I know I love you, and if being around makes you happy, you know I'll be around, every day! I would wait forever for you."

(X-man) "So to answer my own question, I guess we just go on living."


*And above them all, Antonio & Teresa look down, and smile!*
 
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Who woulda though Angelique would be a semi hero! :lol Thank you Chuck!

This was fantastic but it looks far from over soooooo get to writin people! 😛
 
Meanwhile as the heroes rest and slowly heal their battered bodies a few drops of blood left from the body of Antonio's demon form begins to evaporate into a dark mist and travels down the hallway moving through the shadows and goes into the Now stone form of Henry the Gargoyle. As we pull away from the stone figure a slight red glow flickers in the eyes of the gargoyle.
The heroes are now rebuilding the damaged house and are looking are enjoying the warm sun of the new day. The are looking to a hopeful and positive future for their lives.The Nightmare is finally over or is it?
 
After Fransisco Raul gets out of the shower and gets dressed. He calls his sister Daniella. The answering machine picks up and Fransisco leaves a message saying: " Daniella I love you always know that. Always keep me in your heart. If we don't see each other again don't ever forget me". Fransisco hangs up and walk toward his walk in closet. To the left of him is a key pad. He punches in his code. The wall in front of him slides open and another wall comes foward. A wall display of all types of Ammo Guns grenades machine guns you name it it was there. Fransisco grabs clips for his .45 the two that he carries. Then grabs about ten grenades and an oozie with plenty of ammo. Two small knives strapped to his legs. And a cross. Fransisco goes down to the garage gets in his car. Puts on his shades turns on the car. As the garage doort slowly opens Fransisco pops in the TKA greatest hits cd. The garage door fully open and skids out on to the street and speeds off to the highway..................................
 
MARISOL GOES TO THE HOSPITAL WITH SOME BLUE LEG WARMERS FOR RODOLFO. ON HER WAY THERE SHE IS CONFUSED ABOUT WHAT JUST HAPPENED. ANTONIO IS GONE THAT BASTARD GOT WHAT HE DESERVED. BUT MY MOTHER MY REAL MOTHER IS GONE AND AGAIN I DIDN'T GET TO SAY GOOD BYE. WIPING THE TEARS FROM HER EYES. SHE HEARS THERESA SPEAKING TO HER ~MAMITA DON'T CRY I WILL ALWAYS BE THERE WITH YOU AND TAINA. I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOUR SIDE.~
MARISOL: PERO MAMI HOW WHAT? ~SOBBING~ OH IT DOESN'T MATTER RIGHT NOW. I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU AND TAINA. I WILL BE THERE FOR MY SISTER. I WILL NEVER LEAVE HER SIDE.~
THERESA: I KNOW MARI. I KNOW. THERE IS SO MUCH THAT YOU GIRLS WILL LEARN. BUT FOR NOW VETE CON ESE HOMBRE QUE TE ESPERA. TODO A SU TIEMPO. (GO WITH THAT MAN HE WAITS FOR YOU. EVERYTHING WILL BE COME TOGETHER WITH TIME)
MARISOL: SI MAMA. ~WHISPERS~ I LOVE YOU MAMI
THERESA: Y YO TAMBIEN TE QUIERO. (I LOVE YOU TOO)

MARISOL ENTERS THE HOSPITAL WHERE SHE SEES THAT RODOLFO IS ON HIS WAY OUT.
RODOLFO: MARISOL WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN. I'VE BEEN WORRIED ABOUT YOU.
MARISOL: IT'S A LONG STORY. RIGHT NOW I JUST WANT TO GET YOU HOME. I NEED SOME COMFORT AND JUST SOMEONE TO HOLD.
RODOLFO: OK BABE. LETS GO.
THEY CATCH A CAB TO RODOLFO'S HOUSE.
AS THEY REACH HIS HOUSE. MARISOL GRABS HIS HAND NOT WANTING TO REVEAL WHAT HAPPENED IN FRONT OF THE DRIVER SHE SMILES AT HIM LOVINGLY.
RODOLFO FEELS HER HANDS THEY ARE COLD AND SHE IS TREMBLING. BUT HE SAYS NOTHING. HE KNOWS THAT SHE WILL TELL HIM SOON.
THEY GET OUT THE CAB AND GO INTO HIS HOUSE.
MARISOL COLLAPSES IN HIS ARMS.
RODOLFO: MARISOL! MARISOL! ARE OK?
MARISOL: OMG RODOLFO! ~SOBBING UNCONTROLABLY SHE TELLS HIM EVERY THING THAT HAPPENED. RODOLFO WITH HIS ARMS AROUND HER HOLDING HER TIGHTLY LISTENS IN SHOCK AND AMAZEMENT AT WHAT HE IS HEARING.
HE KISSES HER FOREHEAD AND TELLS HER THAT EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OK. HE WILL BE THERE FOR HER.
SHE KISSES HIM BACK. SHE HASN'T KISSED ANY ONE IN A LONG TIME.
RODLOFO SLOWLY RUNS HIS HAND DOWN MARI’S BACK AS HE SLOWLY KISSES HER LIPS
FROM HER LIPS HE MAKES HIS WAY DOWN KISSING HER CHIN, HER NECK AND FINALLY PULLING AWAY AT HER BLOUSE . SLOWLY HE TAKES THE TIP OF HIS TONGUE AND
SENDS SHIVERS DOWN MARI’S BACK ‘AHHHH RODOLFO SHE EXCLAIMS PLEASE DON’T STOP
RODOLFO THEN TELLS HER "MI PRINCESA I HAVE WAITED FOR THIS DAY FOREVER, TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT AND I WILL GIVE IT TO YOU
TELL ME, SHOW ME WHERE YOU WANT ME TO TOUCH , TO KISS. MARISOL NEVER HAD FELT THIS WAY FOR ANYONE. YES RODOLFO IS DEF HER SOUL MATE.

MARISOL RESPONDS BY TAKING RODOLFO INTO THE BEDROOM. SHE CLOSES THE DOOR. (OK I COULD HAVE PUT THE GRAPHIC VERSION OF THIS, BUT FOR NOW THIS WILL DO.)


GRANDE YOU ARE THE BOMB MA! LADIES AND GENTS THIS WAS WRITTEN by lamasgrande!😛
 
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romero thinks..his life will never return to a normal life until ramirez is dealt with and now he has another incentive besides revenge..his first family was taken out by this man..he cannot have whats left stolen too..if ramirez finds out about his new family they will be harmed also.he sits quietly and meditates..katana in his lap..made of silver..thirsting for the blood of ramirez..he whispers into the darkness..all these years hiding and running..now i will be the hunter,,its been a while my old friend..but now one of us must die..and if it saves my family now..so be it..he thinks of his son and sophia..and as the anger builds again..a tear rolls down his cheek.it should have been me..
 
as ramirez.freckles and torres.made thier way into the city in a black hawk..ramirez told them of most of what romero was about..only left out the part of him being a "half breed"..and him also being one.."this man must be taken out.my friends"..'very dangerous as you allready know..but also a national security risk!!".torres bought the story..but freckles had his doubts..he did not trust ramirez..just a gut feeling he had..and his gut never let him down..in checking romeros history and body count..mentally..he never killed anyone who didnt have it coming,,the list had mostly terrorist..thugs,,drug dealers.and white collar assholes who thought thier money could make the judical system go away..if he was the monster ramirez said he was..then innocent marks would be on his record,,and there werent any..in his assesment romero was a hero not a cold assasin..he looked up and ramirez was looking at him as if he were reading his mind..
 
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