Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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on long island freckles and torres had arrived...about two blocks from the bayshore marina near the motel..press everywhere with thier vans and satellite poles extending into the sky..and sticking thier mikes in anyones face including the two new york city detectives..asking questions..the detectives pushed thier way through a wall of microphones and cameras...yellow police crime secne tape and baricades.. suffolk county police cars everywhere ..despite flashing thier badges they were refused entry into the crime secne area..this is not your juristiction gentleman said the two men in black suits with ray bans on..freckles said " i wanna talk to whos in charge..and gave his name a shield number..the men in black.talking into thier little wrist mikes..the bigger of the two who looked like he forgot to put his neck on before leaving his house said "stand by one" listened to what was being said to him on his earpiece..responded "yes sir" then said to them "alpha lead will see you"... freckles says "alpha who?" torres said "the emperor will now see us lowly peasants" sarcasticly..just then torres cell went off..he saw who was calling and thought (shit not good timing fransisco) ) freckles said " who was that"? torres " uh just some informant..ill call him back later"
 
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romero got about twenty blocks before he spotted what was inevitable..a new york city crown victoria patrol car..which imediately put the flashers and sirens on as he passed them doing 90 weaving through cars and passing red lights.."here we go he thought..new yorks finest"..in the patrol car the officers radioded pursuit and description..and requested backup..having no idea that the crazy man on a speeding bike was the same man at the center of a new york manhunt * Dan hartmans "the name of the game"" plays in the background soundtrack while the wailing of the sirens and the roaring of the bike shifting gears and the sound of squealing tires of vehicles applying brakes to avoid romero mixes in*....from under his trench coat he pulls out a sawed off shot gun..and says "game time"
 
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one intent in mind..as the speed was overwheleming and the danger.. one thing motivated him..not losing his other family and .. as he was racing his mind went back to europe..to the days when he was a young operative..to teresa.the memories played in slow motion,,,he could not tell his team members that he had been overpowered by a young woman the night he first encountered her.. so he lied and said ..it was two terrorist,which started a chain of events that would lead to love..betrayl.destruction and a conflict which would outcast him from the agency.. and make him a target instead of part of the team ..and would lead to the death of his family in the states.and him becoming an asasin for hire..leading to the present..where old scores were to be settled..from the days where ramirez was one of his best friends to now...where he must kill or be killed ..funny how through time your best friend could evole into your worst enemy..for now he must get to his daughter.. one of who he never had spoken too..then a sudden wake up call as he realized a police barricade was set up in front of the speeding bike about a thousand yards with all firearms locked and loaded and trained on him.........
 
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*Meanwhile...Antonio with his fellow minions...are in a dark alley.*

Antonio: I don't even have the strength anymore to fight. I need to see my love.

Dark Angel Solider 3: Master...we will help you get there!

Dark Angel Solider 2: Yeah!

*All the minions applaud.*

Antonio: :lol FOOLS!!!

*With one swip of his right hand...all the heads of the minions fall to the ground. Leaving a gush of green goo and headless demonic bodies scattered all through the alley.

Antonio: Antonio walks and fights alone! I'm a loner!!! :mad I must go see Taina and get something off my chest.

*Antonio...tired and weak...closes his eyes...and smiles. A soft breeze wind reveals itself unto him...and Antonio spreads out his arms...as if he were a plane...then...closes them...and points his hands towards the sky...and smirks...then suddenly...he bends knee...and shoots up like a rocket...going to reach a destination he never thought he would place feet and ground again.*

*Moments later...as he is up at the sky...down below he sees two souls. Taina and Rico.*

Antonio: This should be very interesting.

*Antonio dives down below fast...and lands right in the middle of Rico and Taina.*

Antonio: (Pointing) Yoouuuu...who are you?!?

Rico: (Speechless) U u..u..uhh uhh

Antonio: What's the matter cat's got your tongue Romeo?

Taina: Leave him alone!!! :mad Please!

*Antonio looks back and smiles at Taina. Taina instantly recognizes that beautiful smile...how much she missed it...you can see the saddeness in her eyes. Reminising all the great moments...in less than a minute.*

Taina: Antonio why? Why did you play me...like a harp from hell?

Antonio: Taina...I came here tonight to apologize in person. I'm sorry things turned out that way...but I...I don't want to see you hurt. 🙁 Also...before I go...cause I won't be back in a long time...I wanted to tell you I will be there for our child.

Taina: (Crying) You got some nerve!!! I hate you Antonio...(runs to him with her fist in air and bangs his chest) I hate you hate you... hate you.

*Antonio stares into her eyes...and is reminded of the time when they first made love. He will never forget the moment he place fingers on her body...how they squirmed all the way to her inner soul...how that one night...she gave herself to him. This was Antonio's true love...Taina.*

Antonio: I will never forget your eyes. Your eyes allowed me to love and to realize what is love itself.

*Suddenly Taina holds Antonio...they both embrace as Rico watches. Then out of the blues...they both passionately kiss!*

Rico: Taina...you are making a big mistake...this man does not love you...why you allow yourself to be hurt! Taina listen to me...my words will never stir you wrong!

Antonio: Excuse me Mr. Rico if you don't mind...

*Suddenly Antonio out of the rotten blues punches the lights out of Rico! Rico flys about 40 feet back and crashes on a wall...and a flower pot from high above a window; falls and lands on his head.*

Antonio: Guess someone doesn't need to bring flowers to his funeral.

Taina: (Crying) Why must you always be so malicious? WhY? Why? Why don't you love me? (She gets down on her knees...puts her hands on her face...and starts to cry hard)

*In a blink...Antonio is gone.*

Taina: Antoniiooooo (Crying) whyyy Anto? Where <sniff> are you?

Antonio: Right behind you...always got your back. (Grabs her...and they kiss)

*They always say the second time is a charm...and tonight there was proof of such a phrase. Quite clearly they still love each other...but what to make of the girl that awaits Antonio? Is Antonio deceiving both girls? Was _____ Antonio's real true love that hurted Taina in the first place enabling him to leave that one night as he packed his stuff and left away?*

Antonio: Im so confused.

Taina: Follow your heart.

Antonio: My heart tells me to stay...and my mind tells me to go.

Taina: So your heart tells you the truth...as it spoke first.

Antonio: Yes. Yes indeed.

*As the night continues riding...the full moon shines upon these glamorous creatures of the night. Antonio slowly removes his clothes...and places Taina's hand on his chest. Taina takes Antonio's hands and places them on her chest...and then Antonio dives for her neck..and sucks her tender skin. Her moaning penetrates Antonio's hormones and he then picks her up...and she straddles him.*

Taina: OH MY God!! Papiii <stuttering> ppa (As you don't hear the clapping of hands...but much rather...other body parts)

Antonio: (Breathing a bit deep) You are just as good as the day we made love.

Taina: (Breathing hard) M..M.ss...

Antonio: Hahaha (Realizing she never can talk...when Antonio drives all his engines right through)

Antonio: (Breathing hard) I love you.

Taina: (Breathing hard) I...love you too.

*Jumping hours ahead..morning came...and Taina naked..is found alone on a bed. Antonio...gone. Her neck and shoulders...with the marks of that glorious night. A night to remember. Will Antonio return once again?*
 
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At the hospital Marisol is at Rodolfos side and Rodolfo is a little sleepy and looks at Fransisco and says " Que carajo why you here?" Fransisco replies listen I come here to apologize I didn't know the whole story between the both of yous. I heard about what Carlos did. Look I got so much crap going on now that I have to take care of thing now. I owe you one Rodolfo. I don't know if you are cool people with Carlos but I am gonna go after him. Fransisco turns to Marisol and says sorry but Marisol replies get the F'Out with your bull GET OUT!
Fransisco begins to leave the hospital room and Rodolfo yells out wait......................................................
 
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WOW...GREAT STORYLINE! 😀

Ant -- very vivid!
Tae -- dude, your awesome!
Chuck & El -- you guys ROCK!!
Freestylegod -- welcome to the story!
Krystal -- ma, GO ON WIT YA BAD SELF!!! :lol

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
 
EL_BORICUA_72 said:
I heard about what Carlos did. I don't know if you are cool people with Carlos but I am gonna go after him.
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What did I do??? I didn't do nothin'.......

Nya....help! El is after me!
 
ChuckD said:
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What did I do??? I didn't do nothin'.......

Nya....help! El is after me!
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sorry chuck couldn't think of another name so I used urs. Plz someone change the name so we don't get confused....
 
ya better leave my chucky/carlos/chiguita alone!.lol I shall be back to write my ending as soon as I get back from doing the COMPRA! talk to ya in a little while.
 
That very same morning a figure stands next to the window looking in on the sleepy beauty that is Taina. It is Rico. His heart is torn in two. Although he was barely conscious from Antonio's assault he heard enough before he fully passed out.
Rico upset and angry still injured from the nightbefore but somewhat healed look's at her and then think's to himself.
"That damn demon Antoinio has ruined everything!!" I don't understand!!!" "I thought Taina and I were ment to be??" "Damn Antonio, damn him!!" "I will make him pay!!"
At that moment Rico grasp's an amulet he was wearing for some time. He look's at it obbserving the the grren jewel at it's center and the mystical ruines written around it's golden frame.
"These ruines, these encantation's etched into this amulet is what helped me control the beast within!" Last night wasn't a complete full moon but tonight it will be!! "I'm sorry Taina! I wish we could have been together!" I would have taken care of you and give my love! You are special darling! I will miss you so!"
"I'm am very sorry about the pain I will give you. I must stop and Antonio!" I will get him tonight and this time I will hurt him!! "It's payback time for all the suffering he has caused!!"
"This time dark one you will face another creature of the night!" "The beast inside sleeps no more!!"(He rips the amulet of himself full of anger and throws it to the ground) "Tonight you will face a WEREWOLF and I will tear your black heart out of your chest!!"
Rico looks one last time at Taina on her bed She seem's to be stirring in her sleep. Does she sense Rico? Does she sense what might come to be? Rico touches the window gently looking at her and then lowers his head with a look of sadness. He leaves. That amulet was the mystical item that prevented his werewolf transformation during lunarcycles. He doesn't care anymore. He lost the one thing that finally came into his troubled life that seemed right, that seemed good and perfect. Now it is gone. The beast will have control tonight and will hunt it's prey!
 
OH DAMN! We got werewolves too? FREAKIN AWESOME! :yeey

Sweetie! Thank you! LMAOOOOOOO Where you at though? In the window observing? 😉
 
Dona Lengua Larga is observing everything from inside her window. Just too much weird stuff goin on here in Brookleen.

*thinkin to herself

Creo que voy a visitar a mi hermana en Puerto Rico... si dame llamarla para decirele que voy! (I think im going to go visit my sister in PR... yes, let me call her and tell her that im coming)
 
Heh heh heh thank's Krystal darlin!! Yeah Rico was there checking in on her. He tracked her down. He's an excellent tracker!! Here's alittle bio on Rico!!

Rico🙁last name unknown)

Eyes: green Hair: dark brown
Height: 5'10" Weight: 175lbs

Ethnicity: PuertoRican/Native American

Status: Single

Social status: Nomadic, makes good friends, travels alot, made many connections underworld, military, occult.(in part due to extensive Nomadic travels)

Family: Father(marine,Puerto Rican), Mother(native, grandfather was a shamen)

Skills: some hand to hand combat training. prefers swords and blunt weapons. Apperantly has a collection of medieval weapons as well as native weapons and talisman's and charms and keeps this secret from friends

Curse(?): At some point in his life was afflicted with Lycanthropy (Werewolf-ism) has tried to cure himself. Instead throughfriendly sources aquired a mystical amulet that helped him control transformations from lunar cycles.
 
Thanks Krystal! Thanks MyonlySweetie!! Just glad to contribute to this excellent story!! When this story is done someone should print it! It's too good and must be preserved!!

Oops I put a sad face on the bio by accident! Doh!!! Oh well.
At least theres some info to flesh out Rico alitte more. LOL!!!!😉
 
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