Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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Fransico Raul calls headquarters to call Detective Torres. (come to find out Fransisco is undercover) Phone rings..............Waiting for Torres to pick up..............more to follow.........
 
torres is fiddling with a pen when the phone rings..he picks it up.."detective torres..yeah what you got?....he notices a woman walking by..and admires her legs.."um sorry say again... freckles is on the computer trying to get some info on antonio..wondering whats taking carlos so long...
 
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in the cover of shadows certain creatures dwell..and while carlos was changing he could not see the dark man about only four feet from him..the x man thought how simple it would be to just snap his neck right now..just grab the pantyhose wrap it quickly around his neck and crack it..he resisted the urge..he needed this drag queen to lead him to his prey..as carlos jumped into his car..looking in the rear view for any sign of ping and pong..the bad ass detectives who he so easily escaped from..he could not help but laugh...and as he pressed the gas..another car followed.the X man too was laughing..this carlos was clever..he wanted to see the detectives faces when they realized he/she whatever was gone.. he would make sure they never got a chance to talk to carlos again.."come on carlos..take me to your daddy"
 
Fransisco: Torres what ya got for me?

Torres: Carlos is saying that some hitman is after Antonio, plus Carlos disappeared.

Fransisco: What you mean disappeared? Just like that in thin air!

Torres: He went to the bathroom and never came out. But he did take a bag in the bathroom with him.

Fransisco: You idiot! He played you guys big time!

Torres: Who you calling an idiot?

Fransisco: You want to know how he got away? He's a MARICON you stupid @$$!!!!!!!!! He changed in the bathroom into womens clothes and probably walked right by you. You better find him and find him NOW!!!!!

Fransisco hangs up gets in his car and drives off..................
 
LaNenaDeOro said:
feeling like :crap taina wakes up to someone yelling outside....

*looks through the window* ay bendito esa mujer no se cansa (its ashame how that woman doesnt get tired)

MIRA DONA LENGUA!! ASOMATE (COME HERE)

she walks toward taina with her rollers, pink fluffy chancletas and old pijamas....

dona:que esta pasando(what is goning on)
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Dona: Que pasa muchacha??? (whats wrong girlie?)

Taina: Que esta pasando (whats going on)

Dona: Tengo un gran pasimiento que algo malo va pasar (i have a bad feeling something is going to happen)

Taina: Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?

Dona: Mire, dejeme pensar...(hey, let me think)

Dona: Donde se fue la loca de tu madre?? (where did your crazy mom went) Yo la vi salir de aqui de noche otra vez (I saw her leave late at night again) Yo creo que tiene un jevo por ahi en Queens (I think she got a man out in Queens)

Taina: No se ( I dont know *with a smirk on her face)

Dona: Ju no I heard sumpthin about the mysterioso man .. he is around here somewhere. Y mija, que te paso con Antonio? Te dejaron??? (Girl, what happened with Antonio, he left you?)

*with a concerned look on my face

Ju know, tu marido esta en peligro!!! ( You know your husband is in danger!)

If i waz ju, I would have kicked his naglas pa fuera muchos meses ante (i would have kicked his ass out many months ago)

No se como tu nunca supiera de la otra (I dont know how you didnt know about his mistress)

But I'm not one to gossip! Y Rudolfo, ese hombre esta enamorado de tu prima, Marisol? (and Rudloph, he's in love with your cousin Marisol?)

Yo creia que estaba con la Daniela del otro bloque? (I thought he was dating Daniela from the next
block?)

Pero mirame estoy hablando y hablando .. me tengo que ir nena.. mi novela ja comienza.. ciao!!! Te hablo contingo manana....

(But look at me talking and talking, I have to go nena, my novela is going 2 start.. bye! I'll talk to you tomorrow)

*hurries back inside the apartment to turn on the tv

Taina walks back to her apartment....
 
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*Carlos gets into his car and drives, as he drives, he thinks to himself.*

"He thinks he's soooo smart, that mystery man who is following me. I'm not a betting man, but I will bet that the sedan belongs to "Mr X-Man". He thinks to play me for a fool, and have me lead him to Antonio. I have a plan, but first, I must make a stop."

*Carlos stops at church and runs in. He quickly returns, with a bottle of Holy Water, just in case Mz. Tereasa Nomchaves decides to show herself. Carlos gets in the car and drives off. He notices the sedan following, keeping up with him, but keeping enough distance to remain unnoticed. Carlos picks up his pace and makes an unsignaled right hand turn. While the sedan is out of sight, Carlos jumps from the car and rolls into the bushes, hidden in the dark. The car crashes into a deserted building and bursts into flames. Just as the car explodes, the sedan turns the corner. Although Carlos can't make out the features, he can see "Mr. X-man" pound his fists into the dashboard in anger.

"Hmmmmm.....either he's angry for losing his leader, or he's angry because he knows he's been found out. I'll have to be very careful."

Carlos watches the sedan pull off, and stands up. As he stands, he hears a stick snap behind him. He turns, and stands in shock grabbing his necklace and blessed crucifix, he's standing in front of Tereasa Nomechaves!
 
mr x was following..i see you looking at me...i want you to beleive you are out smarting me you fairy fool..suddenly he sees the car turn.."what is this maricon doing?. then as he makes the turn he sees the crash and the fire.. "dam it"..hitting the dashboard with both fist.."thats what is about women drivers"..he was about to get out and check the car..when he heard the sirens coming up the block..he made a quick u turn and got out of there..well this fairy is either dead or good,,
 
Hello Carlos, so we meet again my old friend.*smiling very evil*

no wonder I haven't been able to find you, you've been dressing in drag..*walks around Carlos eyeing his nervousness*

Carlos " what do you want Teresa? or should I say Countess Teresa"?

Teresa "you know exactly what I am here for Carlos, it took me a while to find you, but now that I have it's time to pay back".

Carlos " your daughter doesn't know does she?...

Teresa "Who was that guy following you? and why?"
"Carlos you were supposed to protect my daughter from little bastards like that husband of hers! Do you know how long I have fought to protect my daughter from people like "X-Man"? Give me all the information I need, and prepare yourself, you brought me back out, now you will walk alongside me for the final retribution.

Teresa starts to think to herself... All these years of pretending, all these years of secrecy, secrets that dies with Tainas father, are now forcing themselves into my life again...
 
After Rodolfo found out from Taina who the mystery girl was, Marisol, He decides to pay her a visit.

*knocking on the door,
"Who is it?" a voice says. He stays quiet. As the door opens he here's "I said who...." a moment of silence. A long pause as Rodolfo is caught in the moment of the emotions felt, when a man sees a woman, who's beauty captures every part of a his being. Rodolfo says..."Hello." Marisol tries to close the door on him. He stops the door from closing and he says "Wait, why you do that for?" Marisol says, "I heard about you.....getting a woman pregnant and walking away....and now I here you are interested in me....please" Rodolfo says,"Look I know that you heard many things, but they are not true. Daniella and I had many problems behind closed doors that I never discussed with anyone. Out of rage she goes around blaming me, and her family does the same." Daniella was standing there with her head sticking out the door and the rest of her body in the door. Suddenly she opens the door and shows the rest of herself.....is this a sign that she is going to open the doors of trust to Rodolfo.......stay tuned
 
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*Carlos begins to tell Teresa what he knows....*

(Carlos) "Contess Teresa, if I had thought that Antonio would betray your daughter...."

(Teresa) "I don't have you here to think, I have you here to protect. I want Antonio and "Mr. X-Man" away from Tiana. What do you know?"

(Carlos) "To be honest, I thought you were behind it. Someone has hired "Mr. X-Man" to take care of Antonio. I was trying to stop him myself, but was arrested by two detectives trying to get info from me. I was able to get away from them muy fácilmente (very easily)."

(Teresa) "Why did you destroy your car?"

(Carlos) "I was being followed by su amante viejo (your old lover) and rather than lead him to Antonio or Tiana, I let him think I was killed in the accident.'

(Teresa) "muy bueno, mi servent(very good my servent) It seems that it was smart on my part to keep you around. I will have to work at keeping him away from my family. I have many skeletons in the closet that I'd prefer stay there."

(Carlos) "Coming out of the closet can be a good thing, Contess."

(Teresa) "Maricon, you may entertain lesser forms of life, but not me, remember that!"

(Carlos) "yes Contess."

(Teresa) "I have much to do, so I must leave. Do what you must."

*Teresa then flies into the night sky, leaving Carlos alone. Carlos puts a firm grip on the bottle of holy water, the weapon he never let Teresa know he had......*


"Now I have ninguna idea lo que pensar (no idea what to think)! Now that Teresa has said she's not behind "Mr. X-man's" appearence, I don't know who would be........"

*Carlos walks home, thinking of what his next move should be, walking through people's backyards, rather than be on the street, where he could be seen. One thought rings through his mind.....*

"Antonio.....dónde en el infierno es usted (where in the hell are you)?"
 
as freckles and torres where checking the crash site..fransisco pulled up in a unmarked..and screams out "heeeey detectives ..spic and span.." job well done.. torres .."kiss my ass" ..freckles said nothing..just looked towards the bushes.."well carlos definetly not in the car" looks like he went through those bushes" but why would he just drive it into a wall? why not just keep going?..freckles then turnd to fransisco.."where do you think our boy is now?" fransisco "fuk if I know..hes in the wind now..he knows youre looking for him plus the boogey man..who knows who else wants him..you guys had him..its not going to be easy to fimd him again"
 
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