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CivicTR

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Call it what you want
Do you know what the meaning of love is?
Do you know what love really is?
So why you still playing with my heart girl?
So many questions I can’t deny.

Please tell me why, are you still playing my heart? Please tell me why?
Did I do something to you girl, please tell me why?
This time I’ll try make thing right between you and I.
Even the stars in heaven I’ll give to you

Can you forgive me what I did to you?
All the love in my heart I’ll give to you
To see you by my side I’ll be alright
Please forgive me and don’t be so cruel
Because this time I promise to be true

I had a hard time sleeping last night so I drove around the city. Ended up watching some people drag racing and on the side of the road So I wrote this "thing." I don't street race but i enjoy the import scene alot because it is one of my hobby. I'm just an amatuer at this but we got true professional around here just as Joe, Crystal2001, mzcrazybtch, Orgntr1, and many more talented people out there.
 
wow, thanks Civic that's sweet of you...

Your poem was heartfelt. I enjoyed it. Make sure u are not a stranger to the poetry thread forums. I'm sure u have more to write about😉
 
Thank you for the support and inspiration all of you. La Mas Grande,CoOl_AL_FrM_qNs, mzcrazybtch, and
JOEDOCPA. Here is another I just wrote:


Life is like a box of chocolate
You never know what you going to get
Every piece chocolate is special in its unique way
Some are dark, some are light, and some are in between but they are alike
We are yet made from the same creator on that day
He use the best ingredient(s) on that day and night
Yet we are here complaining, nagging, and dreaming that everything is our way
You talk about love but you don’t even know how he fought for your life
Feeling hatred, betrayed, hurt, pain, and many more for you to have this day
When your day is about to expired, he promise he’ll be with you on that flight
Yes the world is full of evil but there are still goodness left
Everything that comes out of your mouth is full of frustration and sadness but yet there’s still daylight
There are people who are working for peace, love, justice, moral, and the rest
Some of us have the best attributes but doesn’t mean we’re second best
You accused, spit, talk behind my back and punch me in my face
But friend, I’ll get up and turn my face the other side to you if you want to use mace
Through this world, I have found out what I am
I'm not a spam, ham, clam, dam, but I am who I am
No matter what, I will still be your friend
Yesterday, today, tomorrow, and till the end
 
Thank guys for giving me support, just want to express some feeling before going back to school it so stressful sometimes.
 
Thats beautiful hun. Thank you for sharing your work with us, I enjoy reading them. And thank you for all your kind words! They really do mean a lot..:dwink
 
Yes life can be stressful but there's nothing like venting it away in a beautifully written poem.
 
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