where we going? can i drive?

[dirtymind21]

i'm steady running through life looking over my shoulder
nothing seems to change except for me getting older
and every single day my feelings seem to get a little colder

i never thought i'd put myself in this position
either i'm gonna melt away or become a muscian
whats success and whats your deffination

is it money glory and fame
or is it respect pride and a good name
what ever it is i hope you like what you became

does anybody no where there really going
we just travel along and keep on growing
we all got feelings inside in out lyrics its showing

 

[dirtymind21]

does anybody get where i am comming from with this one?
is it good or does it suck?

 

[Taz X.T.R.]

I get it bro. No , it doesn't suck, nothing here sucks. We all have different ways of expressing ourselves. We all submit beautiful pieces. This poem reminds me of this song by the deftones. I don't really know why? It's called "Be quiet and drive (far away). It's actually one of my favorites. Keep posting man, your way of rhyming is cool.

 

[dirtymind21]

thanx dude.i will keep up the good work.