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I can understand you'
But you can't understand me'
and all this time i've been there'
BAck then you never even cared'
It's like i was never even there'
I was there only when you needed'
Iwas there to cook and to clean up'
TRied to show you all my love;
But you just turn my life to shrubbs'
hurting me you could never see'
my love inside my heart ached so much'

What happen to us'
Years go by i'm getting older'
I've learned so much so fast'
I finally knew why at last'
I"ve been young and nieve'
Doing what ever i could to please you"
I never thought about my self'
I just thought about you'
How if only you knew'
How deep love ran through my vains for you"

What happen to us'
We used to be so tight"
Here i 'Am cooking and cleaning'
Making sure my kids are eating'
Feeding the family taking care of there needs'
going to work and school trying to hurry'
I hurry'd back home to you'

I just had your son'
boy was he a big one'
looking like his daddy'
big brown eyes and a lil fatty'
Thought it was time to make up my mind'
I got Tired of Lonely nights'
trying to talk to you '
and it'll end up in a fuss and then a fight'
All because i wanted to talk'
But you 'd never listen'
Now I let it get me and now i've been hissing'
What happen to us...

But the women you see now'
is not the same one you knew so well then'
This one has just adapted to your game'
it's driving you insane'

You need me now"
you missed me how Much?
The spot on the bed where i used to rest my head"
is it empty at night?
how does it feel to be far gone'
Though i'm not that far'
I"m just a few inches from you"
I"m on the computer writing poems'
CAuse now that's just what i do beside me going to school'
or doing the regular routines at home that we women do'
I know your a hard working man'
but where is are family time plan'
Your never home things just ain't right'
to many lies and then another fight'

I"ve tried to tell you through and through'
I tried to talk to you too"
But you never had time'
So don't be jealous because i've made mines'
It's a nice tool to have when Your feeling down'
with no friends around he is here all the time with a shoulder to lend'
Don't hate on my poor dell Friend'
He just sits their and displays the screen pages'

if i ever need to cry out'
My new friend he listens and he sends'
sends me feed back till the end'

what happen to us you say'
you took me for granted and i went my own way'
I live in one world '
You live in another it's better we take some time '
time out to spend with eachother'
what ever happens to us'

I'll love you till the end'
just don't pretend to be my fake listening friend'
but really what ever happen to us.....
tilll next time but for now it's the end'
Hope you have enjoyed my crazy wives tale It's a blend.

lol


Another poem bye ME Musiclady2424:
I tried my best to make it ryhme. It's just a deep lil story time.... hope yall likes.
 
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sometimes in life you feel like you've done everything you could. and sometimes you sit back and try to see what you did wrong. what went wrong. But in all when you really sit and look who's to blame you or him. How did it get to the point where you feel lost, alone, and unwanted. many times even though we see the errors that the other person did, we don't see that it's our fault that it happened for letting it get to this point.
All I can say is don't give up, if the love really exist you can work things out.

Nice poem.
 
Thanks girls. La Matrix. This was Something i Wrote from FEelings that i had when i was like24 years old. AND my feelings are different now.I just wrote a poem Trying to describe it somehow. But MY relationship is cool now. all good Right now.I"m just saying What ever happen to us.lol as in damn from here to now we've come so far.How can you communicate with someone If he never listens (hearing and listening). like back then what ever happen to us.sometimes i reminicse and it take me back.So i write like i was 24 again. But this is not the case today.I just write for soul..OLd FEeling came to typo.lol No BIggie ..but thanks for the advice.BUT I'm good. That was nice of you . And it's not our fault how someone treats us.it never is. Sometimes we Can't help who and why we love who we love. But i understood .Your point of view. Thanks for reading all that. it was a long poem.
 
Thank you sweet Heart. Much Apreciation to you and every one else who takes time to read my very long poem for days lol. Thanks Chuck D You're right it is Very long lol. I"m Crazy I just Had a lot to write about lol. BKlyngrl.. Thank you very Much I"m glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read it. When i wrote it I put my feelings in to it to try and Let the reader Feel what i Felt ANd experienced. Thanks again. Thanks for reading it all of you.Again Most people will just pass up a long poem like this... lol so i wanted to thank every one again for reading it. It was feelings from the past. Glad yall enjoyed it. I guess i REally made the topic DEEP THOUGHTS AND POEMS WITH THIS ONE>
 
Hey girl I loved it.I enjoy reading your poems.They are so well written and heart felt.I am glas all is well now I can relate to this one alot.
 
Thank you Melissa figueroa I"m glad you enjoyed reading it.Thanks again i appreciate it.I write about different time zones well .that and the things i've experienced in those times.But thanks again. Muahz mama.
 
Thank you Bullboykennels.I appreciate you taking the time to read my long poem.lol. There true and really old feelings from 3 years ago. Thanks you again.
 
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