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nampunk

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Feelings that can only be described by the guitar.
These feelings are the greatest by far.

Emotions and actions
only caused by beauty.
Fingers on the strings
express what's in the heart.
Pain, sorrow, joy, happiness.

He spoke of wisdom,
he spoke of pain,
he was a burning flame.

He spoked of fame,
Little did he know,
he always had it.

She stood at the door
and stared at the floor
weeping no more
sleeping much more
her health was poor
her legs were sore
soul beaten to the core

The lights that stay still at 3am give chills

Six months couldn't make you the greatest.
six years couldn't make you the greatest.
It's born in you.
Born in your mind.
Born in your eyes.

Monkeys hanging on closet doors.
Don't go out onto the moores.

The life i'd be happy with, i've missed.
Missed by about three years.
So far away.
Wheres my love?

That would be the best day of my life.

The evil dead has stained my unconsience mind.

Drive me home.
Away from Super Bad Ass
sweet daddy jones.
Away from tweezers,
micro-waved CD's.
away from the cops,
hot wheels, and the doors.
Away from Marilyn Manson,
broken beer bottles and assholes.
Take me far away
from !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ing panic buttons.

The shit that numbed
my sould and !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ed my mind

Love my system,
Hate those mother !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ers.
Hated that night
Hated that next day.

Drive away,
far away,
please.
Take me away
to crime-free, sunny days.
With all the love I need,
and all the words for me to bleed.
 
Wow...I love this, and considering I know exactly where you coming from, this poem hit me deep. Just like nirvana hits me deep when i write..LOL..keep them coming, your style of writig is diffrent..it reminds me of all the things I have been trying to say, all the words I hear in my favorite songs..:dwink
 
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