~*~ Take Control ~*~

[Mystical4U]

Ok let me know if you get sick of my poetry ......
This one I wrote when I was married. I was abused and that inspired me to write this:

~*~ Take Control ~*~
My life is in shambles
It's time to take a gamble
on life's choices
My heart has been broken
Pieces scatter the earth
My tears flood the rivers with pain
The sky turns black
and the clouds hide my heart
The sun will never shine on a broken love
It's time to take control
No more hurt, no more pain
Time to get away

 

[Desejo]

thats a real personal poem i can tell... isnt it hard to put yourself up there like that??? i cant put all my poems up for peoples to see all the time... there are some things in my life i can write down but i dont want everyone to see it... maybe its cause it hurts so bad i dont know what heads would say if they read it... that and i always have had this problem for people feeling bad for me and all....
~Desejo

much luv

 

[Mystical4U]

I don't want people to feel bad for me. Thats not why i display this... I just let people know whats behind the poem.... That wasn't it at all... I ain't gonna put no more up

 

[Desejo]

why does everybody on this site take shit the wrong way???? maybe i shold stop responding to shit... jeeesh.... i was just saying in my personal opinion why I DONT post personal shit up.... you can do what you want... i liked your poem and I love your poetry... i just thought that one in particular was personal.... wasnt it?
~Brett