subliminal (just something I wrote)

[mzcrazybtch]

Yet how can you
Overcome and
Undo the pain that
Always arises when
Reality comes into full focus?
Excrutiating
Agonizing
Lonely days and even nights
When all is still
And calm
You sit and
Silently reflect
Letting your mind wander
Over and over trying to fill
Voids that you believe
Exist - yet not even in
Death do we ever know what could've been.

 

[Dayer]

wow...that sounds familiar 😉

 

[La Mas Grande]

Very nice
🙂

 

[sweetheart]

NICE...MAKES YOU THINK!

 

[Angelino]

very nice.....

 

[mzcrazybtch]

😉 D........thanks everyone

 

[ChuckD]

nice!

I like it.

 

[mzcrazybtch]

thanks Chuckie 🙂

 

[LaBettyBoop]

How true! Great poem! 🙂

 

[Diamond Girl31159]

I like it......

 

[Lpenguin]

Very Nice...It's thoughtful, yet simple like good Haiku.

 

[mzcrazybtch]

thanks

 

[musiclady2424]

nice and true. I'm feeling this.

 

[mzcrazybtch]

(bump) it's funny, looking back at this one I don't know if any of you saw the hidden message. 😉

 

[La Mas Grande]

ahhhh just got it. thanks ma, sometimes we really need to hear that.

🙂

 

[mzcrazybtch]

your welcome. 🙂