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Your silence is more powerful than any word spoken

Back and forth
You pass me
And I pass you
This is our day to day

Your silence is cold and unforgiving
How can we continue living
This way

Back and forth
You pass me
And I pass you
This is our day to day

Your silence is my greatest pain
We have nothing to gain
Living like this day to day

Our loss is much greater than any words could say....
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Ok this my first time posting a poem. I don't write usually but I needed to release myself somehow. Anyway I hope you like it and even if you dont be nice because because Im only a beginner LoL 🙂
 
For a first time Vicious it's so heartfelt. 🙂

Very nice work!!!

~Antonio 😀
 
Nessa..girl...I love ya!!!...LOL...That poem was your first!? Ma, that was BEAUTIFUL...I made a poem like that..it had to do with silence between 2 friends..I hate silence like that..gets me nervous..LOL...And what I hate even more..Is peeps passing me by like they dont know me!! I love this ma!!:hearton
 
🙂 Thank you Enigma!!!

Yes Crystal this the first poem I wrote because I wanted to and not because I had to LoL. Thanx for your nice comments. I hate getting the silent treatment from people I love so hopefully it will end soon. 🙁
 
Whos been ignoring you ma??..Dont make me kich there asses..LOL!!!😛 ..Keep written babes..you also have talent..😉
 
AWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SOOOO SWEET AND LIKE ENIGMA SAID VERY HEARTFELT.....IT WAS SIMPLE AND YET STRAIGHT TO THE POINT .....GREAT JOB MAMA!!!! :yeey

Btw.....We all here have been beginners....with practice you will be great....🙂
 
"Silence Must Be Heard...or diamonds will burn..." -Enigma4
 
Awww I luv ya people!!!!!!
Thanx Heaven!!!
Crystal, no ass kickin required. Its my dad thats giving me the silent treatment and the lil biotch that I am Im doin the same thing to him :stoned It will pass....
 
You never know 😀 I have alot of time on my hands now so maybe 😛
 
HIT ME OVER THE HEAD.

:read CHICA,,I MISSED YOUR PREMIERE..IM SO SOWY.

I LIKED IT...WE HAVE GURLS HERE THAT ARE SUPER TALENTED...BUT WHERE ARE THE FELLAS? HUH?

I KNOW THE FELLAS CAN DITCH GOOD STUFF...COME ON FELLAS...LET US HEAR YA...

AGAIN, AWESOME WRITING..WAY TO GO FIRST TIMER...SEND US MORE STUFF.:yeey
 
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