Shots of Brandy

[Crystal2001]

Six shots of brandy,
Still five more to go,
Im thirsty for something,
What it is.. I still dont know.
Is it the need for the energy?
Or just something to keep me up?
Then I told myself,
Phuck the shot, give me a cup.
Maybe Im just upset,
Cause you are such an ass,
Im drinking away my problems,
Wondering how long this will last.
I dont care anymore,
Cause you are such a loser,
Keep doing what you do,
Find a bitch and cruise her.
Ha ha... who am I kidding?
If I find out your screwing around,
Ill cut your dick off,
Without even makin a sound.
You dont want to upset me!
I think Im already there,
Dammit gimmie another drink,
Like I said...I dont phuckin care.
Youre such an idiot,
But look at the shit I do,
Look what you did,
Its all your fault so..phuck you.
Im all alone in this place,
Its so dark, empty and cold,
Now Im wishing you were here,
So it would be me you are to hold.
Six shots of brandy,
Five more I added to the list,
I feel like I just rather die,
Please help me get though this.
Im sorry for all the shit and pain,
I have put you through,
No more shots of Brandy,
Im doing this for you.

 

[Lamatrix]

😱 HOLY SHIAT DON'T LET ME HAVE TO KICK YOUR ASS FOR BEING AN ALCKY! LMAOOOOOOO. NICE AND STRONG. GOOD ONE. AS A MATTER OF FACT LEMME GET A SHOT OF THAT BRANDY TOO!

 

[Krystal]

LMAO Lala! Don't encourage her! 😛

Just kidding! 😉

LIL MA!!!!!!!! This was was off the hook! Very strong in it's message! I LOVE IT! 🙂

 

[Crystal2001]

Im really glad you loved this one..I had some coffee yesterday so I started this poem origanlly with "Cups of Coffee"..But I was like..what the hec...This gotta be STRONG ya know?..LMAO! Plus this is reality...shit like this happens...thanks again mi amigas!..LOL!

 

[Enigma]

wow wow wow!!!

:hohsit

OMGGG Im at a loss of words by this amazing work...how everything falls into place how the words flow from you placing yourself in someone's elses shoes...may the lord bless you lil one...you are one of God's amazing creations!!!!!

-antonio

 

[Crystal2001]

WOW...Just your words of praise get ME speechless..LOL!..😱 Thank you so much...:sniff sniff..LOL! I love youuuu and im glad you really liked this one, you know I try to put myself in someone elses shoes in most of my poems just because it IS reality. Shit like this happens all the time and yet at the end of the poems it teaches a lesson. This is why I love writing..to help others and to help MYSELF when I cant seem to express what i feel in any other way. Its a way to vent and Im glad you guys are here to read it and respond to it...makes the venting worthwhile.

 

[Enigma]

This is why I love writing..to help others and to help MYSELF when I cant seem to express what i feel in any other way.

And because of that...that more than qualifies you to be an angel...which you already are 😉

You welcome bebe and thank you so much for being an inspiration to us all! :hearton

-ant

 

[Crystal2001]

Oh stoppp..Im emotional ant...Ill start crying..:lol

But thank you again...and shhhh..we all know Im really the devil..dwink..LOLOLOL

 

[Enigma]

Oh stoppp..Im emotional ant...Ill start crying..:lol

What are shoulders for? 😉

But thank you again...and shhhh..we all know Im really the devil..dwink..LOLOLOL

No matter how hard you try...deep down inside...we all know what is inside is sweet...beautiful...and so tender.

Yes you can strike fear and be evil...but that applies to all that is dark...and fears the light of love. 😉

-antonio

 

[mzcrazybtch]

WOW! LIL MA THAT WAS A DEEP HEARTFELT POEM...MUAH!
(and u know how to reach me if u should ever need to talk about anything under the sun) EXCELLENT WRITING!

 

[Crystal2001]

AWWWWWWWWWWWW thanks you guys..:hearton

 

[MARYSOL787]

I like ur character writing great flow 2 ur words!

 

[poisonbabe]

Good poem girl!

 

[clubfossil]

WOOT

😱 CORRECTION!!!!! THIS POEM IS DEFINITELY YOUR BEST TO DATE..LOVE IT..AWESOME FLOW MY LILONE..TRULY A MASTERPIECE.. 😛



:mad DON'T LEMME FIND OUT U SPIKIN YOUR COFFEE..:nono

 

[Crystal2001]

OMG tio! Did you know I made this poem after I got off the phone with you? I told you I was making coffee remember?..😱..LMFAOOOO..Thank you and Im glad you liked this one best!

Thank you Marysol and Poisonbabe!..😀

 

[clubfossil]

HEY

😱 DO YOU SEE NOW HOW MY INSPIRATIONAL TALKS WITH U GET YOUR POETIC JUICES FLOWING..:stoned OR IS IT THE GOSSIP..LMFAOOO.. :lol

 

[Crystal2001]

It could be BOTH..:lol..Love youuu!..LOLOLOL

 

[mzcrazybtch]

you guys are too much, just go easy on that coffee.

 

[clubfossil]

Ummmmmm!!!!!!!!!

:blah COFFEE..GREAT IDEA..BRB... 😛