she takes

[Desejo]

breathless i pause
a raindrop falls through the frozen winter
touches my lips as sweat
from my sensual dreams
to soothe my eager requests
she takes
the raindrops glides down my neck
touches my soul as sweat
she takes
the raindrop slivers past my hip
touches my thigh as sweat
she takes
the raindrop sweats her every move
and her and i stare
we become one
one breath between clocks, as time stops
the raindrop touches my toe
melts my heart like sweat
breathless i wait-
for her
still.

This poem can aslo be found with other I wrote under POETRY.COM , if you want to see things i wrote, search under Gibson, Brett P.

Peace and Love~
~Desejo

 

[Spiral]

I like the title..."She Takes"😉

 

[Enigma]

Desejo that was nice 😉

Wow you're a very good writer! 🙂

~Antonio

 

[taezee]

she takes..and she takes..and then when the divorce comes she wants half of everything..that miserable susia..que no me hode ma na!!!..oh wait got lost for a sec...nice poem ..lol

 

[MIDNIGHTeternal]

nice bro, very nice.
One

 

[Crystal2001]

That was beautiful..Really beautiful...🙂..Thanks for sharing it sweety

 

[Desejo]

lol @ taezee.... hehe... thanx for lettin me know how you liked it guys... i got more if you want to hear more...
~Desejo aka Brett

 

[SolMarYLuna]

INCREDIBLE...😉

Elizabeth

 

[MIDNIGHTeternal]

that was really good.... much props bro...
One.Luv

 

[DESTINY11]

That was great.. I think it was very romantic, alot of us associate the rain with sensuality,, I wrote something with rain, but it's hard to get. I'll post it and see what you think🙂 Keep writing-- me likes.

 

[Desejo]

thanx for the reply... i have a lot of poems with an essence of rain... the wet dripping feeling of love makes the poem become alive... thats what i tend to think... water, rivers, sweat.. it all resembles passion... dont ya think... ill go check out your poems too... peace kidz!!
~Desejo

 

[DESTINY11]

Bam that's exactly it Desejo... It makes it a little more intimate..
I agree with you on that😉