Remember part 1

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FreestyleChulo

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my sweet sweet lover.....sit back as i will tell a story of the million roses......there has never been a love so powerful that can erase all the painful memories of the past........that was my first mistake my sweet sweet angel......my second mistake was not letting my emotions out completely....as i am a man of many characters.....you shall never know which character i will play....am i the sentimental man who wants to love you....am i that psychotic lover who wants to steal ur precious treasures and hide them in the sea of malcontent.......who am i.....answer me that question my love...

remember part 1

as i sit back and write this song
i remember those words that i spoke long ago
about those times wen i said i would never leave your side
about the children we would have
we would talk through the nite
now i walk and i think
if all my words were true
if the life i meant to love from now
was meant to be with you
or if everything and anything is a coincidence at birth
but it hurts to even think that you are with someone
and i am alone
and i can try to have relationships
and i am workin so so hard....
but it just seems that i want to hide myself
in a mask of lonesome health
every moment.....every breath
that i take is not my own
early morning conversations with a lover that was torn
every piece of my virginity ripped in pieces your souls
every name that comes accross is only pain in future terms
i wish my words had meaning
i wish my life was sweet
and that every one who crosses me
i wish that they could see
the little tears i cry
inside my little mind
wen little problems happen
i am little.....i will hide
i wish i couldnt remember this past that haunts me to this day

**no se porque pienso en estas cosas......prefiero morir en soledad que pensar en ti**
 
:sosad

I wish this girl wouldnt haunt u..I can tell how much you hurt just by writing about it into so many other words...I cant wait for the second part..this is so deep just like the others you have written...just beautiful..:hearton
 
Your strong..cause if I was to write all about how many times ive been hurt and why..I wouldnt even be able to do it...and if I do..I dont use myself in the character of my poems...I dont think i would be able to just yet.

Ill be waiting for what you have in store for us..and no need to thank me baby..I am here to enjoy the poetry..and be a friend..😉
 
wow.that was beautifully said..damn boy..lololol..much love to u..🙂
 
oh damn..look what chulo did..lololol...ya see baby?..Your writing touches our hearts....
 
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