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Hey guys...Today I recieved an e-mail from a good friend talking about a Poetry Contest...As you know..We have the best poetry peeps up in here..LOL..And if you havent entered one already..you should..I decided that I really want to..but I have NO clue what poem I should use...So I was wondering if you guys could help me out with choosing the bbest poem Ive made so far...And if any of you guys want to enter as well..hit me up..or..hit up the person who gave me the link...KRYSTALLLL...LMAO!!😛
 
LMAO Lil ma! Yes if you'd like the link to read about/enter the contest then PM me or IM me at the name below in my signature!

As for you entry lil ma...its a tough choice...if it were me i'd go with the Holocaust one or the MYSTERY MAN! hehe 😉
 
Ya really think so ma??? Imma really have to think bout thins one..Can I send more than 1?? The one with 8th sounds really good..and if I win..I owe it all to him..LOL!!
 
Yeah I'm really sure LOL and I didn't read the rules or anything cuz like i have NO talent when it comes to poetry LOL

As for you owing 8th! NO WAY! That's payment for all the stress you have on trying to figure out the man behind "THE EYES" hehe 😛
 
LMFAO!!! Well look at it this way..If I wasnt curious about 8th..and if I didnt know about the eyes or him..I would not have made the poem..LOL!!!
 
hmmm okay you gotta good point there! 😛

Good luck with any one that you decide to enter! 🙂
 
This is hard. 😛 The "Mystery Man" poem was off da-hook! It left me speechless. Im gonna have to dig into the "Crystal Poems CF Archives" and really see if "Mystery Man" took the icing on the cake...which I think it did. 😀

~Antonio
 
I really loved the one about your grandmother... the one that was really emotional, and it said how you hated how she treated your mom. It was posted a long time ago, a few months back, but i really liked it..... consider it.
😀

bai babe..
one.luv
-midnight
 
Hey Crystal..good luck with it! Wish you the best! I entered a contest last yr and I got published for it. So I don't know what link/site Krys gave you, but I have a few as well. I'll email them to you. If you need anything, or if I can be of help in anyway, please let me know through email or something.

~Meg~
 
hey guys..Im kinda stressed out here..I went to submit MYSTERY MAN...But the poem is TOO long!!! I tried diffrent ways of writing it, but it just wont go through! I have to submit a poem..Up to ONLY 20 lines..Can ya guys help me out???

The one I have under 20 lines are...

1) We sit in Silence
2) Angel
3)I spoke to god
4)When your gone
5)Another
6)Love maker
7)The Holocaust (part 1)
8)Let you go (havent posted yet)
9) Goodbyes (havent posted yet)

But those are the only ones..If ya dont know any of them..Check it out and browse for it..If ya cant find one..Ill go back and post them..PLEASE help!!..LOL
 
Oh dayum! 🙁 Mystery Man is phat! Oh well. I will look into these tonight lil one 😉

~Antonio :texican
 
HEY GUYS JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT THE HEAVENLY POWERS THAT BE DID SOME REARRANGING TO MAKE IT WORK....BUT DIDN'T CHANGE NOTHING ON THE POEM....SO ITS STILL A CRYSTAL ORIGINAL!!! 🙂

CRYSTAL SAID SHE WILL USE MYSTERY MAN NOW.....SHE HAD TO GO BUT WANTED ME TO LET YOU GUYS KNOW!!

THANKS FOR YOUR HELP!!!! 😀

GOOOOOOOOOOOO CRYSTAL :yeey
 
Oh chit a short remixed version 😉 lol

~Antonio 😉
 
WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Heaven! Thanks for helpin her out! That poem is really something else!

Lil Ma! Let us see it! 😉
 
The re-make..LOL!!

Eyes as blue as the open sea
I wonder who this mystery man could be
One who's name is unknown
A man in pain and all alone
The beautiful eyes I have ever seen
I wonder what they say and what they mean
Eyes as blue as the sky
A man whose eyes can get you soaring high
Eyes intense and yet so deep
Tells a story that I long to keep
Full of love, full of pain
Eyes that can make you go insane
He could be short or tall
and yet his eyes tell it all
He could be light or tanned
His blue eyes tell the story
of a MYSTERY MAN!
 
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