Poem "Silence"

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Fernanda

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Hello my love! (I'm smiling)
As I watch the love of my life walk towards me,
while my heart jumps with endless joy.
I watch,
as his grace comes towards me.
This angel of a man,
heaven sent!
I wonder?
How it can be possible that someone like me has been gifted
with such elegance.
He comes closer and my body yells "EXSTACY!!"
Now we are face to face,
and I hear the words that will forever change my life.
"IT'S OVER!"
I slowly wither and fade as the wind blows me away forever.
All that's left is "Silence." :sosad
 
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Awwwwwwwwwww mamita 🙁

So sweetly written girl. :hearton Yet...inner heartbroken pain...silently.

~Antonio
 
Enigma said:
Awwwwwwwwwww mamita 🙁

So sweetly written girl. :hearton Yet...inner heartbroken pain...silently.

~Antonio


Awww thanks Antonio, that was sweet of you. I guess this poem would be anyone who is deeply in love nightmare. I don't wish this on anyone. Hope all can find true love, cause true love never dies.
 
FreestyleGod said:
Awww another beautiful poem!! That was great Fernanda!!! Truly touching!! Much nub!!!😀

Thanks sweetie! Just felt in the mood to write a poem. I also just finished a spanish love ballard. It's funny but you always write your best piece of work when you feel the most depressed. I guess I'm in that mood right now. I have to take advantage before I become happy again. Thanks sweetie for the support. Mush nub to you too!!
 
Originally posted by Fernanda
It's funny but you always write your best piece of work when you feel the most depressed.
In most cases yes 😀 Due to the fact that we remove the depressing burden on our shoulders through the way of writing.
. I have to take advantage before I become happy again.
lol Heheheh 😀

~Antonio
 
Awwwww anytime Fernanda darlin, anytime!!!! Good luck on your ballard!!! Yeah strong emotions will bring out strong thought's!!! Strong happiness can work that way too once you get through the blissful soaring that numbs your thought's at first. Once you really think about then all the adjective's come out. If all else fail's I go to the thesaurus! Again best wishes to ya darlin!!! LOL!!!😉
 
Originally posted by Fernanda
to hell with the fake people. [/B]

I'll drink to that Fernanda! (Coca-Cola of course 😛) Like FreestyleGod says..."Keep It Real!" 😉

Nite nite nena and FreestyleGod 🙂

~Antonio
 
Sounds good...ready? >touches glass to glass< *Clang!* 😉

~Antonio
 
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