my mistake with you....

[dark_phantom_2k3]

i sit here from time to time
trying to think about what caused the pain
from this game, between you and i nothing
was gained. to me it was just another image
of self control, yet i sit here all alone,
day by day i am growing cold, with no one to
hold. i guess this time in the end i am alone.

NOW i'm wishing i hadn't shouted back, i should
have kept my act. WHY DID I GO OFF LIKE THAT.....?
your worth more than what meets the eye, i cant deny.
i should have known your love was all for me, but i questioned
your loyalty and i put in my authority. this fool i was,
a man who just didnt understand. blinded by pride, pierced
by stubborness out of all this maddness i just wish i could
have you back by my side.........




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[tita]

It really touched me. (tear) Nice writing 😉

 

[dark_phantom_2k3]

thanks tita i am glad you liked it. thanks again.



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[Shorty3869]

I LOVED IT ...

 

[1sxychica]

Nathan that was sooooo good!

great writing pa 🙂

 

[La Mas Grande]

That was very good, keep on writing and POSTING them up so we can read them

😀

 

[ted]

well written keep going.

 

[dark_phantom_2k3]

thanks shorty3869 i am glad you loved it.....thanks again.



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[dark_phantom_2k3]

thanks 1sxychica, i am glad you liked the writing. thanks again.


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[dark_phantom_2k3]

thank you la ma grande, you can bet that i'll keep writing. thanks again.


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[dark_phantom_2k3]

thanks ted, i am glad you like the writing, thanks again.


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[Nyasia]

very nice and touching.

 

[Cheryl phillips]

NICE WRITING...AND YES KEEP POSTIN SO WE CAN ENJOY!!!

 

[NOBL]

STR8 AS HELL.LIKE I SAID KEEP IT UP . NICE

 

[dark_phantom_2k3]

thanks Nyasia, i am glad you like the writing. thanks again.



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[dark_phantom_2k3]

thank you cheryl phillips, i will keep posting. i hope you enjoy them. thanks again.


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[dark_phantom_2k3]

thanks NoBl i am glad you like the writing. i'll keep it up. thanks again.


(until next time)