Love is a treasure C,P, 2003

[mannyriv]

Speaking to someone I know about love and how hard it is to find it, I was inspired with the following:

LOVE IS A TREASURE C,P, 2003, M. Rivera Music

Sometimes love seems to be,
Like a treasure in the sand.
Searching endlessly.
To hold it in your hands.

Fighting night and day,
Getting lost along the way,
Many chances we must take.


But it's worth every moment,
Now that I have you here to hold,
Baby I know that,
You are a treasure of my own...........

 

[ted]

Sound excellent Manny.
must have been a good long conversation 😀

 

[Krystal]

WOW Manny! Lemme find out you were inspired from the Flirt's Nook! :shush

heheheeeeeeee!!!!!! Just kidding!

I like this! 😉

 

[LaNenaDeOro]

lol krystal manny that was really good...are u gonna make a song out of it? it would make a great song. keep up the good work!

 

[Edalgiere]

manny me think u have what the makings of a good song

 

[La Mas Grande]

That was awesome manny, keep on posting baby

😀

 

[Enigma]

That was beautiful Manny! :cool

-antonio

 

[Shorty3869]

I like it !

 

[mannyriv]

Thank you Shorty3869, Enigma, La Mas Grande, Edalgiere, LaNenaDeOro, Krystal and Ted.

Picture someone telling you they feel like giving up on love because they have been hurt. Sometimes we fail to see that love is found in so many other places. Love is like a treasure hidden in the sand. It is there, but we can't see it. It is buried beneath many things like fear, loneliness, anger and sadness. But sometimes if you stop a minute and look around you, you begin to see love in so many other things and you learn where to find the love you need, just like discovering a treasure. I must say, you guys are definitely part of that treasure. Thanks

Peace,
Manny

 

[myonlysweetie]

Awesome work there, Manny!! 😀

 

[mannyriv]

Thany you very much sweetie!!!!!🙂 😉

 

[Lamatrix]

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL MANNY I LOVE IT!

 

[NOBL]

THAT WAS DA SHITZNITZ ITS STR8 MANNY

 

[mannyriv]

Thank you Lala and NOBL

 

[musiclady2424]

Damn Manny.you Like A Navigator Taking Us All On A Story Ride.or Is It Called A Narriator.oops.what Ever .damn I Like This .it's Hot. You Always Write Them Good Touchy.catchy Poems. I Love It. Leave To You ...you Got The Skilll And Experience.

 

[mzcrazybtch]

awwwww....that's beautiful....(all mushy and stuff) 😉

 

[JOEDOCPA]

good Job manny sounds like something that could make a good freestyle jam.

 

[Crystal2001]

Manny manny Manny..You deserve several slaps on the back. Very nice! :nutz

LOLOLOL

 

[mannyriv]

Thank you Musiclady, Mzcrazy, Joedoc and Crystal!!!! *ducking from Crystal so I won't get smacked!!!!!

 

[Crystal2001]

Not possible honey. Dont fight the slap! LOLOL