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In order to show you how I feel,
I would have to shoot my self…
But dont worry I did that a while ago,
It didn’t work.
I tried and tried,
But I failed miserably,
Every where I look,
This evil is chasing me…
Where can I run?
The demons are still inside me,
and they will not leave.
The took a little vacation,
but still they came back.
Confusion, are they really demons...?
Is it really the evil...?
Or is it my tears, fears, depression, life,
anxiety.
Better yet could it be the hate, insecurities,
the mocking, the names, or the words of the past just haunting me?...
I just dont know...:realsad


I was trying to go to sleep, but the thoughts, about school, work, life, past, present, future that are in my head wont let me...Piece of shit anxiety...So of all the things I decide to do...I decide to get on CF at 2:10 A.M. and post a poem........try not to read it with that whole typical poem rhythm...

OK...I believe, that was my last poem to be posted...I feel as if though I've lost my touch, therefor I wont post anymore...I'm sorry but I had to get this off my chest.
 
Raven,

hey enough of that. Please continue posting here. Your poem embodies a feeling many people go through, an emotion often visited. The best works are the ones that releases what we are going through. We all have been there and will come back, that is the cycle of life. So , please don't feel the burden of not being able to create, because in our worst moments, we create our best work.
 
Raven..papi...Dont go saying that..

One..your poetry is beautiful and heart felt..to say that youve lost your touch..is a lie...You maybe going through some problems...your poem reflects that..and as you read mine..Im going through the same thing..Sometimes..Id wished I could kill myself so I wont have to worry about another day..but thats not the way things go babes..Think about it..and remember..keep writing...I love your work..its true feelings..🙂
 
WOW....people are still responding to this sh!t?!?!?....hmmm...well thanks for all the replies....I know I haven't been on CF since I broke my leg....man all I kept thinking about when I turned 18 is 'mann finally I could cruise this summer and blast freestyle all day' but no...I guess I have to leave it till next summer...peace....w0rd
 
I liked it Raven, so it's a different side, Don't think about not posting,, Thats what were here for...Post up, Post up 🙂
 
what the he## multiples
I'm Sorry this problem with this computer
is pissing me off (Sorry)
 
wow, i really can relate to that one! lol

Good job, and like the others said, dont stop posting!
 
lol... w0rd? ha...

but yeah that piece was good... bring up some mo.
 
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