King..queen ..and The Castle

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in her eyes the stars at night..in her smile ..the sunrise...on her lips the sweet taste of love..in my arms i long to hold her..in my heart she sits and reigns as queen....in my dreams shes haunting ..in my thoughts shes the constant..in my desire shes the object..in my pride ..she humbles ....in my pain she soothes....in my strength she follows ..in my weakness she understands..in my faults she looks the other way..how my life was before her..i do not care to remember....just thank god she came and took the path with me...where we could hold hands and walk...through this thing we call life...in her voice the angels sing..in her thoughts i wish to stay...in her tears.id be the one to take them away..in my way as a gentleman..would she see im the only man who could ever bring her to a peace...to a place without confusion or games but just a pure love..no questions asked..no critisisim..just love..despite all...i want to be that for her...so that i too can sit and reign in her heart..as king...noblity of the hearts on both sides which will lead to a kingdom which could never be layed seige too..in which any looking to conquer would realize a campaign that was lost before begun...and in my love for her and her love for me.....a bright castle sitting by the sea...:hearton :hearton
 
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omg, how excited.

Im the first to post, yet the 8th to view...oh well,,that's okay with me.

Corazon,,muy lindo lo que escribiste. If ever your kingdom should fall, come to me and together we will pick up the pieces for others to rejoice.

keep writing.

besitos 4-ya.

lou-lou
 
lou lou..thank you that was sweet..freestylegod..thou art funny..lmao..thanks man
 
Now that was the bomb about to go KABOOM!!..lmao!! Great one sweety!!..😉
 
crystal where you been baby?..i had put some new pics up last week like you asked..and havent hears from you since..😛 and thank you also
 
Awesome poem Taezeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! 😉

Words can not express how impressed I am with all the writing goin on here! Sheesh...makes me feel inadequate and stuff! 😛
 
devious witch.just to let you know ...i do a little somethin somethin when im not countin beads..He he he.glad you likes...im not a tough guy all the time sometimes my sensetive side comes out....and sometimes my heart comes out in words..thank you baby..nite nite..JAVI😛
 
IM with the witch LOL
hey devious hi sweetie
I was so impressed with your poem. it touched me.
all jokes aside i think you are very talented and i hope you
do something with that my friend 😉
Keep the pen flowing
i cant wait to read the next one.
take care
Yours,
N. Colon
 
thank you very much nick colon..first time im hearing you..nice to meet you..🙂listen deep to your heart and the words will follow..no talent in that ..just saying whats real out loud...is the hard part..its not really talent but courage.always say whats in your heart..for to do otherwise is a waste!!
 
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>Gasp< you do more then count beads?!?!?!? 😛

Keep doin your thing papi! I look forward to reading more from you!

Nick!!!! I've spoken to you before in Freestyle Lover's famous buddy chat rooms on AOL! LOL I'm looking forward to the release of your cd. Tell Pete he still hasn't responded to my mail that I sent him! 😉
 
Wow Taezee, I love this poem it is very beautiful 🙂
 
tazxtr thank you..vicious!!whats up ma..thanks....BABYBETTY!!!🙂
 
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