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YOUNG MEGATRON

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So now what do I say
Speachless
breathless
I did it again
the exact way it was done only weeks ago

so now what do I say
Im out of "im sorrys"
Im out of "forgive mes"
and "Please, Just one more chance"

Your Sick? Im sick
I discgust my self
my 9th live was spent 3 excuses ago

so now what do I say
youve cryed your last tear
and your heart has stopped beating for the last time
You think I dont love you

Oh Lord God Please forgive me
Im a fool, I desearve hell
Ive destroyed her innocence and charm
her fun laughfter is a distant memory, all caused by my endless love
for my self.

so now what do I say...............Im sorry.

Im new to poetry, but this ones from the heart.
 
Well Young Megatron What Comes Straight From The Heart Is Usually Your Best Work. This Is Really Impressive. Please Continue To Share You Work With Us.

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myonlysweetie said:
Straight from the heart.. good job, Young Megatron! 🙂
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Damn Girl!! Whare the hell you come from? I aint heard from you in a while!! How are you? and thanx for the compliment! Why dont you keep in touch? 🙂
 
Good job for a first try! Thumbs up my friend!



YOUNG MEGATRON said:
So now what do I say
Speachless
breathless
I did it again
the exact way it was done only weeks ago

so now what do I say
Im out of "im sorrys"
Im out of "forgive mes"
and "Please, Just one more chance"

Your Sick? Im sick
I discgust my self
my 9th live was spent 3 excuses ago

so now what do I say
youve cryed your last tear
and your heart has stopped beating for the last time
You think I dont love you

Oh Lord God Please forgive me
Im a fool, I desearve hell
Ive destroyed her innocence and charm
her fun laughfter is a distant memory, all caused by my endless love
for my self.

so now what do I say...............Im sorry.

Im new to poetry, but this ones from the heart.
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YOUNG MEGATRON said:
Damn Girl!! Whare the hell you come from? I aint heard from you in a while!! How are you? and thanx for the compliment! Why dont you keep in touch? 🙂
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Hey man!!! I've been here and there! I'm good .. how u doin? Your welcome .. your writing is good!!! If you need me, IM me @ yahoo... name: Launicasweetie

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