here's another untitled poem

[freestylevet]

Sometimes --------"Edited "here's another untitled poem

I find myself thinking of you again
For some on known reason I feel no pain
You were there not long ago
Nothing but a friend but I want more
But in my heart I was not ready to grow..
I find myself a brand new girl
The one you let go
With so much to show
If only I could see you again
I cry no more tears, I have no more pain..
Sometimes I miss you
Sometimes I smile
Sometimes it feels I've walked a thousand miles..
I want to give it a go at the old game
To make sure I feel not for this man
Time will be my friend
I know our roads will cross again
It has been proven the gain with the loss
It is not only for mua..
Sometimes just sometimes I think of what we had
Sometimes the friendship is not enough..
Why, I ask the questions
Why, I not get the answers
You were a lesson to learn
The one I still want but can't hold

 

[Krystal]

WOOHOOOOOOOOOO LouLou! I like it! Good job! :yeey

About a title...why not "Sometimes" 🙂

 

[freestylevet]

I did think of that,,BUT

Since there was already a poem on here titled Sometimes, I did not want to duplicate the name...TAZX has it on first...🙂

Thanks for your suggestions,,,so perhaps I shall change it.

 

[Krystal]

Hmmmm okay I just realized that too! What about...Why? Or "Thinking of You" 😉

Regardless of what you decide to call it...you did a fantastic job with it!

 

[freestylevet]

AWWWWWWWWW..thanks baby

I was feeling weird, Again, today..hehehe

 

[taezee]

she does it again!1 lou lou you know im youre #1 fan in here..love it ...more more!!..lol🙂

 

[precious one]

Nice poem FreestyleVet!

 

[Heavenly]

DAMN I LOVE IT VET!!!! That was soooo beautiful and I know where you are coming from. Seems like you are healing and thats a good thing. YOU GO GIRL!!! NUB YA MAMA!

 

[freestylevet]

Thanks friends

Heaven...MUAH

Taezee - HEHE,MUAH

P-1 - THANKS SWEETIE

D-WITCH - YOU ARE SO SWEEEEEET,,,THANKS GIRLEY FOR YOUR COMMENTS.

THAK YOU ALL FOR YOUR COMMENTS.

AND THANKS THE CURIOUS PEEPS WHO READ IT BUT DID NOT POST ANY COMMENTS...I'M GLAD THEY WERE CURIOUS ENOUGH TO READ IT...

BESITOS AND HUGS 2ALL
VET