Group needs help!!!

[~*Dream_Angel*~]

Hey, I have this group called Eternal Moon Glow. K? (hey. if you peeps don't like it, I'll cry. I'm only 12 years old.) and I've made some lyrics, but I'm not really for sure about them. We've got this song called, "Dark Side of the Moon" But none of our lyrics fit exept a few I've got. Could any of you guys out there help a poor little girl and tell me how the hell to make lyrics?! K? I'm Outtie!

 

[andrea2001]

Hello,

My name is Andrea and I am an aspiring artist. I am 23 and I have recorded many jams.First for writing a song, think about telling a story.You don't have to rhyme every single word too. That's something that many people don't realize.

Plus if there is something that happened in your life, good or bad, use that to help you write. Freestyle is about feeling. So keep that in mind as well. I can give you a sample of how I write my songs.I sometimes change it up though that way my style doesn't get boring.

verse 1

bridge (or build up into chorus)

chorus

verse 2

bridge ( you can change the lyrics in the 2nd bridge to fit the 2nd verse, or keep the same as the 1st. This is a part of change I am talking about).

chorus (repeat; sing twice)

breakdown (beats)

bridge 1 or 2 (I usually go with the second one if different then the first, or I combine them, or make a totally different one)

chorus x2 or x4

I hop I was of some help. E-mail me @ freestylerandrea@yahoo.com. Check out my web page too.
http://www.websitegalaxy.com/andreasfreestylefantasy

Andrea

 

[~*Dream_Angel*~]

Wow! thanks! That really helps. Can you give me some tips on how to make the music? Am I able to make samples of music for the songs over the computer?? Thanks!

 

[Desejo]

LOOKING FOR BEATS BABE?????
I am willing to give you couple beats if you want em... just email me lataz... wurd
~Desejo

 

[Armani]

advice

Hey you,
I am glad to hear you have such a beautiful dream. Do not be discouraged by anything or anyone and follow your heart and keep reaching out there is help out there. I just wanted to let you know that your groups name is awesome and original. But, I thought you should know that "Dark side of the moon" is a song done by Pink Floyd. I am sure it has nothing to do with your music, since it's rock music. but you could run in to future road blocks by using that title. Good luck Armani