GONE(copywritten 2003)

[lonely4eva]

Where did u go, where could u be
I turn around and there's only me......

I look around but cannot see
I look some more still only me......

I Just want 2 let u know that I still care
and if u still need me then I'll be there....

2 comfort u when times r bad
and 2 dry your tears when u r sad....

Even though I have'nt seen u in a while I want u 2 know
that your still special 2 my heart and I can't let go....

So girl when u think of me or at least I hope u do
remember the special times we shared that's all I want from u.....

All I ask is at night u look up at the brightest star
and that will be me looking down upon u wishing 2 be with u from afar

Till I know 4 sure that u want 2 carry on
my heart and soul won't accept the fact that your gone....:realsad

 

[DESTINY11]

Aww that is the sweetest poem Lonely 🙂

 

[JOEDOCPA]

another one i can relate to.

 

[La Mas Grande]

GOOD ONE LONELY.
😀

 

[clubfossil]

WOW!!!!!!!!

REALLY NICE WORK..LONELY...FREDDIE😉 😉

 

[~GoT[-_-]RiCe~]

Beautiful!

I can truly relate to this poem! It seems that despite the bad things that happen in a relationship. In the end, when the anger is gone and the sadness has subsided, you only hope to remember the good times. That's when you've got your closure. I think that I'm there. I'm finding my silver lining again. I only wish that I could express myself this eloquently as you have. Great poem! If she only knew....

 

[ARTISTDLA]

the poem was great.....i feel you on this peom...i've been that way before....well thats how i thought....bt now i use my head differently....i've changed alot....muazzzzz

 

[JOEDOCPA]

to me when people leave u means they really dont like u . i can relate keep up the good work.

 

[lonely4eva]

I want 2 thank everyone who reads and supports my poetry. U people r truly great...........

 

[myonlysweetie]

That was beautiful!!! Good work!!