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That was great guys, i love it u guys are da best.

And i'm here left all alone
But i'm not gonna cry
For all i know
I will only get stronger
And i'm not gonna cry....
 
for the day will come
a clear recognition
something you felt.. like a bad preminiton
that the one that you loved
the one that you need
was i here for you
now you do see
i wouldnt cry for you but at what was lost
a love that left slowly and pain was the cost
I cry now for you reaching in those shadows for me
and something that hides there never again will we see
 
GDamn Taezee That was hot... Does it get any better..Come on CF!!
 
for the day will come
a clear recognition
something you felt.. like a bad preminiton
that the one that you loved
the one that you need
was i here for you
now you do see
i wouldnt cry for you but at what was lost
a love that left slowly and pain was the cost
I cry now for you reaching in those shadows for me
and something that hides there never again will we see


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so you see my love that as much as I hurt I will not cry
I will grow stronger until the day that I die
 
Wow papi taezee u were great i have no words to say u finish the poem babe... how about this one guys lets do another one im hoock..

This tears i shed
Are all because of u
The pain that u have cause me
Has left me so confuse...

come on guys lets do it again Taezee,Cristal n Destiny..
 
no offense and i know where you going with this but can we have a happy poem..its just sometimes i feel freestyle died out of the main for just such sort of writing..every song saying she left me this ..he broke my heart that..i lost a love this and she ran off with her babys daddy that.lol..i like to stay more positive..its so easy to write about the blues of love..but how about the singing from ones heart that comes when youre in love..and all the great things about that..and on that note i just hit 1000 post!!!:yeey :yeey but you know what im gonna start another thread just on that subject!!🙂 "look under broken hearts tears and freestyle" in the freestyle music talk section!!
 
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Ok sweety but what can we do when they leave u broken hearted, but i do understan what u mean! i just love writting about love n yea maybe one day i'll fall in love again n i will star writting only about how great it is 2 be in love. U must be there ha?!... muaaa
 
yeah i am there big time..lol but i still remember what the other side is like..thats why i cherish what i have now more😉 🙂 🙂
 
Wow..that was awesome SexyMamma..Destiny..tae and lamatrix..😉..Thank you for continuing this thread. So tae..u want a happy one?..Ill start it...

Today I wake up,
To find you by my side,
God how I feel so happy,
Our love could never die.
 
it then came to me i was dreaming
you werent really there
reaching for you but my hands came up bare
but i wasnt troubled for im counting the days
when i awake with you ...feel you ..in my heart a song plays
 
It plays n it says
That will b together one day
Till that days comes
Im still here dreaming.....
 
I love the way it feels
When your body is next to mine
Let me show you my love is real
And I want you for all time
If the sun stopped shinning tomorrow
And the world was cold as ice
Nothing could ever match the sorrow
Of not having you in my life
You've been the strength to guide me along
Through the darkest of my days
And with your love you keep my strong
And that is why I say
You mean so very much to me
More than you'll ever know
And all I need is for you to see
That I will never let you go
 
Today I wake up,
To find you by my side,
God how I feel so happy,
Our love could never die.
it then came to me i was dreaming
you werent really there
reaching for you but my hands came up bare
but i wasnt troubled for im counting the days
when i awake with you ...feel you ..in my heart a song plays
I love the way it feels
When your body is next to mine
Let me show you my love is real
And I want you for all time
If the sun stopped shinning tomorrow
And the world was cold as ice
Nothing could ever match the sorrow
Of not having you in my life
You've been the strength to guide me along
Through the darkest of my days
And with your love you keep my strong
And that is why I say
You mean so very much to me
More than you'll ever know
And all I need is for you to see
That I will never let you go
Dreaming of being with you
is all that I can do
oh how i fantasize your warm sweet caresses...
Oh how I love you.
So if this dream,
was to end,
Let this be reality,
Let us be more than friends.
 
Lamatrix said:
Dreaming of being with you
is all that I can do
oh how i fantasize your warm sweet caresses...
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my lips to youres the beauty it blesses
and like a man reborn .torn from mortal pain
im finally with you ..here to remain
now in reality no dream can compare
of tasting your breath knowing that your there
and when dreams come again the whole night through
ill love them even more.because with the dawn
ill wake up to you:hearton
 
i apologize crystal i think we posted at the same time..i didnt mean to cut your verse off 🙂
 
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