Eternal Tears

[crazygirl]

AS THE CANDLE LIGHT SLOWLY DIES
THE FEAR I HAVE GROWS MORE AND MORE
THIS CLODNESS THAT I FEEL
THIS PAIN I HAVE SEEM SO UNREAL

ALL THIS SADNESS ALL THIS HURT
THE WORDS THAT WERE SAID
IT'S SEEMS MY WORLD JUST BROKE

MY MIND FILLED WITH CONFUSION
ONE DAY HAPPY
ONE-DAY SAD
WHAT HAPPENED 2 OUR LOVE
WHY DID IT GO BAD

AS I SIT HERE LISTIENING 2 THESE
SONGS THAT BRING ETERNAL TEARS 2 MY EYES
EXTREME PAIN 2 MY HEART
THAT MAKES ME WANT 2 DIE

WILL I EVER B FREE AGAIN
WILL I EVER KNOW LOVE
WILL THIS LONG ROAD TO NO WERE
EVER COME 2 A HALT

WILL THIS PAIN BECOME
JOY ONE DAY
MY TEARS BECOME A SMILE
WILL THIS MAZE EVER HAVE A WAY OUT

 

[Crystal2001]

Ma..That was BEAUTIFUL!! And if you made that poem for your own experience..let me tell ya..SCREW HIM...Dont let any guy make ya feel that you wont be able to find love again..Dont find it..let it come to you..🙂

 

[crazygirl]

THANK U LIL 1
IT IS KIND OF FROM EXPERIENCE
BUT I'M NOT THAT SAD
I KNOW LOVE WILL COME 2 ME
EVERY THING I WRITE HAS SOME OF MY TRUE FEELINGS IN IT

 

[Crystal2001]

I know what you mean..exactly how I write..🙂..You keep doing what you doing ma..you got talent as well as every other writer up in here!!..😀

 

[crazygirl]

thank u ma

 

[precious one]

That poem was beautiful CrazyGirl!

 

[crazygirl]

THANK U PRECIOUS 1

 

[freestylevet]

My friend!!! that was incredible. Like Crystal said, screw him..ROCK ON BABY GIRL...YOU ARE TO PRECIOUS.

 

[crazygirl]

THANK U MA

 

[tiger3229_99]

the only thing u forgot to say
is ur still here this very day
what u dont c is that ur still sombody
by that i mean ur still loved so dont forget
that with each day u can learn to forget
i no its hard and i no its tough
but one day soon u will have made it threw the ruff
ill tell u what u can do
u can get a piece of ice and let it sit in a cup
leave for a while as it sits there and melts
look at from time to time and rember how it was
and look at it after it melts and water is what it should be
and rember this that what ur heart is if u can c
how heart becomes hard and somtimes it is crushed
but its still the one we were given on this earth
just like ice beccame water one again
so will heart it will to will mend

 

[crazygirl]

😱 WOW THANK U FOR U'R SWEET WORDS
:1luv

 

[Taz X.T.R.]

Very nice piece. I love the title.

 

[crazygirl]

THANK U TAZ
LOL

 

[LOUISA]

this was a very sweet poem alot of feeling ran in it real good drop feeling it ~ONE~

 

[DreamGirl]

Ok I'm replying a lil late, cause I missed it when you first put it up, but anyway...I loved it ma...truly heartfelt...amazing job. I really liked it a lot.

~Meg~

 

[crazygirl]

THANK U