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have u ever thought if dreams come true
i just ask cause im still not with u
i lay at nite with u on my mind
wondering if u will ever be mine
i c ur smile with every flower i c
makes me want u next to me
i hear ur voice when the birds sing
how i wish u were closer than a phone ring
i feel ur presence everytime the wind blows
i open my arms and smile as to what no one knows
as the nite falls and she sky turns black
all i can do is think back
think of the time we never had
think of the time that i could have been glad
as i lay my down and rest
i still think of u and lay my arms across my chest
i slowly close my eyes and the darkness sets in
i can only imagine where u have been
ill go to sleep and dream of u
wondering if my dream will come true?
 
I always like your writing cause you got a flow...great job tiger!!!

-antonio
 
tiger3229_99 said:
have u ever thought if dreams come true
i just ask cause im still not with u
i lay at nite with u on my mind
wondering if u will ever be mine
i c ur smile with every flower i c
makes me want u next to me
i hear ur voice when the birds sing
how i wish u were closer than a phone ring
i feel ur presence everytime the wind blows
i open my arms and smile as to what no one knows
as the nite falls and she sky turns black
all i can do is think back
think of the time we never had
think of the time that i could have been glad
as i lay my down and rest
i still think of u and lay my arms across my chest
i slowly close my eyes and the darkness sets in
i can only imagine where u have been
ill go to sleep and dream of u
wondering if my dream will come true?
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i 'm feeling this poem bro.....yo tiger is poem is GRRREEEEEAAAATTTTT!!!!!!!!!!
 
give a word and ill give a story
could b of pain or could b of glory
u tell me whats on ur mind
and ill tell u a story in a very short time
 
well nice is that word that came first
it sounds good cause i can think of many that sound worse
but with word i c ur name
it can really drive a man insane
i say that in a good way not bad
cause ur a sweetheart that we all wish we had
we wish we had u here to hear ur voice
that would b my first choice
we wish we could c ur smile but we do everyday
that what makes the sun come out and play
to look into ur eyes would be such a treat
that alone would make a grown man fall at ur feet
if i were with i would want to live with u more than twice
cause my dear to me that would b NICE
 
tiger3229_99 said:
well nice is that word that came first
it sounds good cause i can think of many that sound worse
but with word i c ur name
it can really drive a man insane
i say that in a good way not bad
cause ur a sweetheart that we all wish we had
we wish we had u here to hear ur voice
that would b my first choice
we wish we could c ur smile but we do everyday
that what makes the sun come out and play
to look into ur eyes would be such a treat
that alone would make a grown man fall at ur feet
if i were with i would want to live with u more than twice
cause my dear to me that would b NICE
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SPEECHLESS.......SERIOUSLY AM!!!!!!!!
I'M BLUSHING RIGHT NOW!!!!!!
 
SPEECHLESS is what u make me
ur have more beauty than everything in the sea
as u no the ocean holds many wonderful things
but compared to ur beauty they r nothing more than toy rings
u no what ur BLUSHING really does
it colours the flowers all over the world so that the world may share in ur worndfull love
 
tiger3229_99 said:
SPEECHLESS is what u make me
ur have more beauty than everything in the sea
as u no the ocean holds many wonderful things
but compared to ur beauty they r nothing more than toy rings
u no what ur BLUSHING really does
it colours the flowers all over the world so that the world may share in ur worndfull love
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FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU ALREADY!!!! LOL!!!!!!:bayum
 
u cant fall in love with me that aint ment to be
im full of sin im very sorry sweety
im not a bad person or anything like that
just done some things that i cant take back
to my love is just an illusion
so sweety dont love me ull just cause urself confusion
ur wonederful for me but i guess u cant see
i no this is true cause at nite i have dreams of u
i dream of how ur touch would fill
gives me goosebumps makes my mind want the thrill
i dream of running my fingers threw ur hair
as i tilt ur head back and place my lips on u everywhere
i dream of lookin into ur eyes
but c ur beauty would only make me cry
i wont ever have this thing u call LOVE
so all i can do is dream of u cause ur as pure as a white dove
 
beautiful poetry?
i dont no what that means
the words i write r words with feelings
u say im on a roll not all my dear
i can make u laugh or cry, or even put u n fear
i have an old soul that has lived for an eternity
but have real love would bring me such serenity
all i can do is think of u
thats the only think that makes my life feel somthing true
i walk this earth day n nite
searching for each n every day with or without sunlite
to put me at ease with be such a treat
but that would only come true when i get to hold u when we meet
to say i write poetry i would have to say no
i just write what i feel when i think of u and the words just flow
 
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