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I saw her on the train..we made eye contact briefly..her beauty was overwhelming..she smiled and i looked away..surprised in my shynessI caught her reflection in my window..and i saw her looking up from time to time..as if trying to get my attention..the train started moving..I continued to stare at her..or rather at her reflection..as far as she could see I was staring out the window with not one second thought of her..I
thought to myself how clever I was in my deception as I stared at her in secret I began to wonder..where was she from?..where was she going?..I had a strong feeling that I knew her..but from where?? had I seen her here on this train before? I doubt it for I would have remembered.. I fantasisied how it would be to kiss her ..to hold her..it felt familiar..as if I had done this in another life time .. what it would be like to make love to her..to hear her voice softly in my ear..her breath..lost in my thoughts i didnt realize I had missed my stop...I just thought ill wait two more stops then get off and take the next train back..more time to look and wonder and dream...I still could not look directly at her for it would be obvious what was in my eyes ..curiosity.. lust.. longing..all in one look ..the train stopped and I got up and took a quick glance up..sure enough she was looking right at me she had a strange look as if to say "where are you going?".. I shifted my eyes from hers and as I stepped off onto the platform.. I turned for one final glance..as the doors started to close she mouthed my name with her full lips and I saw a single tear travel down her cheek..I tried to run and catch the door but i was too slow.. our eyes locked..and as the train started moving we just looked and wondered..what each others destination was..where was she going..where was I? I felt a pain in my heart as I knew her destination was with me..and I had been foolish and missed her..the one chance of a lifetime..her face faded away and soon the train was gone..all I could see was the red lights dissappering..along the horizon..I would never see her again..I was surprised at the sudden flow of tears ..as a stream..I then heard a voice and was confused..I felt cold hands grabbing my face..an echo asking me .."whats wrong"?"why are you crying baby?"..I awoke..she was there the girl from the train..it was my baby..her destination was after all with me....
 
im glad you liked victoria..now where have you been/ i havent heard from you?
 
OoOhhhhhh proper names Javier? 😛

I like this one just as much now as I did when I first read it! Excellent work papi! 😉
 
hehe Jav, hmmm I've been busy with exams... but i took today off so i'm just chilling here.. u know... 🙂 reading posts and everything.. how u been?
 
It's official Im turning gay! j/k

HOT Tae HOT!!! :yeey

HOT-TAE! 😛

-antonio
 
e nigga..stop!! lol you know you my boy here but dont start no rumors bro..you know we gots to much "machismo"
 
Good Gosh, Great piece.. I to would like to know who the lucky girl is 🙂
 
DESTINY!!!!!!!!!!! Hola mama! Good to see you! It was nice meeting you a few weeks ago but ummmm you disappeared on us! 😛
 
taezee said:
freakin comedian😛

*Points to himself* >mute..no words just lips moving< >slowly< Me? Me? >wets finger tip..points to himself again< Me? Me? Meeee? *hot look*

-ant 😛
 
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