"death"

[Shorty3869]

"DEATH"

Doesn`t have a favorite taste,flavor,color.
Isn`t picky with race
spanish,white,black.....doesnt matter.
Doesnt care about gender
male or female .....doesnt matter.
Comes and goes as it pleases.
You may see it coming or you may not
but either way it`s coming.
Its something we can`t stop.
We can only hope to accomplish what
we want before our time comes.
The minutes tick tock away until the
clock strikes midnight and our time is up.

Question:
How many minutes do you have left???


*** By My Brother wrote after his friends passed away ***

 

[musiclady2424]

DAYUM, DAYUM,DAYUM, i THINK ABOUT THAT EVERYDAY. MY FATHER IS IN THE HOSPITAL AND DON'T SEEM GREAT. HE LIVES HIS LIFE , HE LOOKS BETTER EACH DAY THAT I GO TO SEE HIM .I TAKE ADVANTAGE TO TELL HIM HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM ..I TELL HIM EVERYTHING I FEEL INSIDE I LET IT ALL OUT ..I HAVE NOTHING TO HIDE..FOR IF HE EVER DIES AND DEATH IS COMING HIS WAY SOON..GOD FORBID .BUT IT'S TRUE. EVEN AS HE FIGHTS FOR HIS LIFE I KNOW WE ARE ALL GOING THERE ONE DAY.SO I TELL HIM MY FEELING AND HE GETS BETTER EACH DAY..I NEVER LOOSE HOPE BUT STUFF LIFE THIS HERE MAKES ME THINK TWICE..DEATH IS COMING.IT'S ON;Y REALITY. IT'S BEST TO LOVE INSTEAD OF HATE EACH DAY SHOULD BE TREATED LIKE YOUR LAST DAY ON THIS EARTH..CAUSE DEATH COMES AT YOU WHEN EVER WHAT EVER .EVERY DAY IS A CHACE TAKEN AND RISK GIVEN.....i like your poem it was hot.

 

[atx]

That Is So Truthfully Sad! Well Written!

 

[JOEDOCPA]

so true good Job shorty.

 

[ted]

now that deep.

 

[SONYA]

That is so true...and I can relate cuz my sis died unexpectadly at a young age a couple yrs ago...very well written

 

[La Mas Grande]

Nice but very sad.......