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i wrote this poem a while back. and posted it on here under my other name shakespeareinluv. it's about a girl i used to date. her birthday is coming up soon. my question to all of you is, should i send this to her as part of her present? it's her 21st bday. and she has a boyfriend. she knows i write, and she's seen some thing i've done. but this one is specifically for her, actually most are, lol. but with her name in the title, she SHOULD know. anyway, if you get a chance, read this and tell me what you all think and if i should send it to her. thanks everyone.

Dear Amanda,

Tonight as I thought of you
I felt the need to cry
Let me tell you what went through my head
As tears fell from my eyes
I was thinking about the times we shared
And the talks we used to have
And the feeling of love within my heart
And how I wanted you so bad
Do you remember when you once told me
That our love was destiny
Who would have thought we’d end up like this
Soul mates turned enemies
Can you recall our very last night
When you laid so close to me
I told you fate had played its part
In bringing you back to me
We didn’t have to say a word
We could read each other’s minds
We felt the same and cared the same
Until the day you said goodbye
Funny thing is you never said
The very word goodbye
Instead you felt the need to leave
Without a reason why
Isn’t crazy to think about
The way things used to be
And how we thought that we could love
For all eternity
I still regret our last phone call
And how you left me here this way
I never knew how much I’d hurt
With every passing day
Now the very thing that I miss most
Is the smallest of all things
Like the way you smile and the way you laugh
And all the joy that you would bring
Even if we were never one
It felt that way to me
I was yours and you were mine
And that’s all that I would need
I think what hurt the very most
Is you leaving without a trace
You left me here in total darkness
In a cold and rainy place
My nights are now filled with agony
I’m tormented by all this pain
I wake to the silence of an empty home
And you’re the one to blame
When I see you now, I die inside
More than you’ll ever know
To see you laugh with another guy
Hurts more than it shows
I sometimes get the courage to call
But you are never there
You never return any messages
Which shows that you don’t care
It’s not that I think I’ll never find
Someone to replace you
What you don’t seem to understand
All I’ll ever want is you
But I promise you this very much
One day you’ll come to find
That when I’m gone and I’ve moved on
That’s when you’re out of time
Cause you will never find another
Who will love you the way I do
Believe in me, you’ll one day see
How good I was to you
I’m sure I’ll cry here and there
And I’ll hate that we’re apart
But I will never stop thinking about
How many times you broke my heart
Just keep in mind that I was true
With all the words I spoke
But now there’s nothing left to do
We can’t fix what we have broke
So that completes my letter to you
You’ll never hear from me again
I wish you the best with all my heart
But you lost my love and you lost a friend



Goodbye

mkz
 
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I missed this when it was originally posted. Although it's a sad poem I think its beautiful and if you still feel this in your heart and haven't shared it with her thus far, I think it's okay to send this to her... MKZ you write so beautiful and most of your poems hit that sad spot for me.. I'd like to know what your story is...
P.S. Keep posting your an awesome writer🙂
 
Let It Go....Let Her go....

Firstly, THE POEM/LETTER IS VERY BEAUTIFUL BUT...
Tough call, I've been reading your work since you started to post here! You have a beautiful talent and it should never be hidden! Unfortunately, I don't believe that you should send this or any of your work to her. Why? 'Cause if the chance ever presented itself to you, then you should not force it by sending her your poetry. I sense that you haven't had closure with this person...I believe that your closure is poetry you share with us.
What could you possibly gain by giving her a letter like this? If she has a B/F then let her to her new life. The memory of your time together should give you solace in the pain you feel. After all, the woman you were once with, is not the same person you will be giving the poem to. Just remember, she may accept this poem, then again, she may not. How would you feel if she didn't react to it the way you'd hope?
Brother, don't set yourself up for another fall. Just let her go, wish her a happy B-Day but let someone who you know would truly appreciate your poetry read and appreciate it.
Otherwise, good luck!
Once again you and your poetry are too good for someone who has broken your heart already once. Why share it with someone who didn't appreciate you and it (your poetry) when they had both?
Hang in there!
 
wow. thank you all 3 of you. each comment i hold true and dear to me. this is exactly why i posted this. i've been conflicted about it. it's true, i never had the closure. i dont' think i ever will. my heart and mind are at war right now. my heart wants her. but my mind knows better. i don't know. but thank you for the advice.
 
OMG...this is truly so beautiful and pino is so right. you have a talent just like many people do here...Regardless..you should send this to her..its BEAUTIFUL...
 
hi,

why give it to her? It's beautiful writting, shes already gone and moved on..I know i may sound harsh but thats reality...your poem should go to someone who appricates your writting and to someone who cares...what are you trying to gain by giving this to her? closure? wouldn't you be more hurt with the words she has to say then the words she doesnt say?...I say just wish her happy birthday..but whatever you decide to do just dont regret it..
 
hey 🙂

i love that letter, it's so deep and meaningful.
only i would think twice about giving it to her... seems like she doesn't appreciate you the way that you do her. this will just show her that althought she moved on--you didn't.

keep that letter to urself, or throw it in the water in a bottle... just so u know u sent it 🙂

very beautiful writing!!! thank u for sharing it.
 
i don't know morod. i would sent it to be honest. if you did, and she didn't come back, you would know she will never be coming back. if you don't send it, then you might regret it. but the only thing is, you have to be prepared, can you handle it if she doesn't call you or come back? cause if you can't, you might be setting yourself for one hell of a ride
 
don't send it sweetie. you're setting yourself up for another heartbreak. trust me i know. i've been in that situation. i know it's hard to let go, but that is what you have to do. i'm sorry to be the one to tell you that. but it's over with her. let her be. find someone who deserves you. (maybe me?) lol
 
hmmmmmmmmm.......this is a tough call. but you know how i feel morod. I CAN'T STAND AMANDA. AND LIKE I ALWAYS SAY, FORGET ABOUT HER, SHE'S A LOSER ANYWAY! sorry, don't mean to be cruel to your feelings. but i hate her so much. she never brings you any joy anyway. you seem to so easily forget what that girl has done to you over the years. FORGET HER MOROD! IN FACT, THE NEXT POEM TO HER, I'M GONNA KICK YOUR AZZZZZZZZZ....... luv ya bro. be good.
 
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