Chapter II- "God Loves, Man Kills"
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hehehe..I love it!!!
Krystal
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oh sit!!!!!! Never expected that turn Taz!
Awesome though! 😉
As I told you at Blis...you need to publish this! :yeey
Awesome though! 😉
As I told you at Blis...you need to publish this! :yeey
Taz X.T.R.
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Lord Thanos returns this time, but not to speak with Lord Sarus. He comes for his son.
(walks into 8th Sins Chambers with Monica and Macionia)
Lord Thanos: I can see you still haven't learned.
8th: What do you want?
Lord Thanos: I am here to offer you a place by my side.
8th: Is that right? What made you want to do that? You seem you have everything under control.
Lord Thanos: I do. However, you are my seed.
8th: I almost forgot. I am surprised you would refer to yourself as my father.
Lord Thanos: I have come here to you to offer one thousand five hundred of my warriors to lead into battle.
8th: You think that will be enough Father? No, it will not. This war will be won in other ways. Not in a head on collision with the humans.
Lord Thanos: Thats what you may think son, but look at the facts. Look at what's around you. Look at the carnage they have created.
8th: (getting up) Father. YOU have put us in this war. YOU wanted this conflict! YOU want to rule the humans!!
Lord Thanos: YES I DO!! Don't you see!! They are CATTLE!! They are beneath us! I am giving you the choice to be a prince in this new kingdom, OR DIE AT IT's FEET!!!
8th: So, you are saying that you will destroy me, your own so-called son. Destroy me like you destroyed MY MOTHER!!!!
Lord Thanos: (seething with hate) You bore me, son.
8th: Make no mistake Father, I will be on the battle field leading this army. I WILL NOT TIRE IN DEFENDING THIS NATION. I will not however JOIN YOU!!! NEVER!!! I would rather die!!
Lord Thanos: Then I should just end you now.
(Lord Thanos cluchtes his fist, causing pain to 8th Sin. Nyasia runs in with Angela and attacks Lord Thanos from behind knocking him down.)
Nyasia: IF YOU WANT A FIGHT, YOU GOT ONE!!
Monica: Really, sister dear should we dirty our hands?
Macionia: Lets dance to this death.
Angela: Bring it on , bitch.
They fly at each other locking horns in the air. Monica and Nyasia both ram up against the wall shaking the coven. Angela picks up a desk and throws it at Macionia who catches it and throws it back. Lord Thanos rises from his feet only to be met by a charging 8th Sin. 8Th grabs Lord Thanos and throws him against the wall. Lord Thanos then emits a bolt of light at 8th blinding him.
Lord Thanos: You are no match for me!!
Nyasia see 8th down. She uses her weight to flip Monica in the air and fly toward 8th. Macionia catches Monica in the air. Angela then flies at both of them and rams them up against the wall.
Nyasia: 8th!!!!!!!
Lord Thanos sends a sonic wave at Nyasia knocking her straight into Angela. They fall to the floor. 8th picks up a table and throws it at Lord Thanos. Monica flies in and catches the table and cruches it.
Monica: You've been a bad son.
Lord Thanos then starts waving his hands. He creates this static cloud bursting with electricity. He then sends it toward Nyasia and Angela. When all of a sudden a wall of white light stands in front of Nyasia and Angela protecting them. It's Lord Dhuckc.
Lord Dhuckc: ENOUGH!
He sends the cloud back at Thanos.
Lord Thanos: Ah, yes. Lord Dhuckc. I am glad to finally meet you.
Lord Dhuckc: You have over stepped your boundaries, Lord Thanos. Leave this place.
Lord Thanos: Really, and whom will make me? Certainly not you, Warlock.
Nyasia, Angela, and 8th Sin stand behind Lord Dhuckc. Monica and Macionia stand along Lord Thanos preparing to attack when.
Lord Sarus: There will be NO BATTLE within this coven.
Lord Thanos: Lord Sarus, how pleasant of you to come.
Lord Sarus: Leave this place Lord Thanos. Do not return. You have once again divided us.
Lord Thanos: THEY HUMANS WILL DESTROY ALL OF YOU!!! YOU WILL ALL BOW YOUR HEADS!!!!!!!
Lord Thanos then waves his hands in the air in circular motions.
Lord Thanos: SANCTUM SANTORIUM
Lord Thanos and Ladies Monica and Macionia then vanish.
Lord Sarus: Is everyone okay?
Nyasia: I'm fine. MAD but fine.
Angela: That bitch just made me crack my nail.
8th Sin just looks at Lord Sarus and leaves in a hurry. Nyasia just stares at Lord Sarus. She then runs after 8th.
Nyasia: 8th!! Wait!!
8th: No, just please go!
8th crashes through a window and flies out into the night. Nyasia chooses not to follow. Lord Sarus then walks and puts his hand on Nyasia's shoulder.
Nyasia: So much hate. He fills the bowl of his soul with it.
Lord Sarus: That's what happens when you deal with fathers & sons. Fathers & sons.
(walks into 8th Sins Chambers with Monica and Macionia)
Lord Thanos: I can see you still haven't learned.
8th: What do you want?
Lord Thanos: I am here to offer you a place by my side.
8th: Is that right? What made you want to do that? You seem you have everything under control.
Lord Thanos: I do. However, you are my seed.
8th: I almost forgot. I am surprised you would refer to yourself as my father.
Lord Thanos: I have come here to you to offer one thousand five hundred of my warriors to lead into battle.
8th: You think that will be enough Father? No, it will not. This war will be won in other ways. Not in a head on collision with the humans.
Lord Thanos: Thats what you may think son, but look at the facts. Look at what's around you. Look at the carnage they have created.
8th: (getting up) Father. YOU have put us in this war. YOU wanted this conflict! YOU want to rule the humans!!
Lord Thanos: YES I DO!! Don't you see!! They are CATTLE!! They are beneath us! I am giving you the choice to be a prince in this new kingdom, OR DIE AT IT's FEET!!!
8th: So, you are saying that you will destroy me, your own so-called son. Destroy me like you destroyed MY MOTHER!!!!
Lord Thanos: (seething with hate) You bore me, son.
8th: Make no mistake Father, I will be on the battle field leading this army. I WILL NOT TIRE IN DEFENDING THIS NATION. I will not however JOIN YOU!!! NEVER!!! I would rather die!!
Lord Thanos: Then I should just end you now.
(Lord Thanos cluchtes his fist, causing pain to 8th Sin. Nyasia runs in with Angela and attacks Lord Thanos from behind knocking him down.)
Nyasia: IF YOU WANT A FIGHT, YOU GOT ONE!!
Monica: Really, sister dear should we dirty our hands?
Macionia: Lets dance to this death.
Angela: Bring it on , bitch.
They fly at each other locking horns in the air. Monica and Nyasia both ram up against the wall shaking the coven. Angela picks up a desk and throws it at Macionia who catches it and throws it back. Lord Thanos rises from his feet only to be met by a charging 8th Sin. 8Th grabs Lord Thanos and throws him against the wall. Lord Thanos then emits a bolt of light at 8th blinding him.
Lord Thanos: You are no match for me!!
Nyasia see 8th down. She uses her weight to flip Monica in the air and fly toward 8th. Macionia catches Monica in the air. Angela then flies at both of them and rams them up against the wall.
Nyasia: 8th!!!!!!!
Lord Thanos sends a sonic wave at Nyasia knocking her straight into Angela. They fall to the floor. 8th picks up a table and throws it at Lord Thanos. Monica flies in and catches the table and cruches it.
Monica: You've been a bad son.
Lord Thanos then starts waving his hands. He creates this static cloud bursting with electricity. He then sends it toward Nyasia and Angela. When all of a sudden a wall of white light stands in front of Nyasia and Angela protecting them. It's Lord Dhuckc.
Lord Dhuckc: ENOUGH!
He sends the cloud back at Thanos.
Lord Thanos: Ah, yes. Lord Dhuckc. I am glad to finally meet you.
Lord Dhuckc: You have over stepped your boundaries, Lord Thanos. Leave this place.
Lord Thanos: Really, and whom will make me? Certainly not you, Warlock.
Nyasia, Angela, and 8th Sin stand behind Lord Dhuckc. Monica and Macionia stand along Lord Thanos preparing to attack when.
Lord Sarus: There will be NO BATTLE within this coven.
Lord Thanos: Lord Sarus, how pleasant of you to come.
Lord Sarus: Leave this place Lord Thanos. Do not return. You have once again divided us.
Lord Thanos: THEY HUMANS WILL DESTROY ALL OF YOU!!! YOU WILL ALL BOW YOUR HEADS!!!!!!!
Lord Thanos then waves his hands in the air in circular motions.
Lord Thanos: SANCTUM SANTORIUM
Lord Thanos and Ladies Monica and Macionia then vanish.
Lord Sarus: Is everyone okay?
Nyasia: I'm fine. MAD but fine.
Angela: That bitch just made me crack my nail.
8th Sin just looks at Lord Sarus and leaves in a hurry. Nyasia just stares at Lord Sarus. She then runs after 8th.
Nyasia: 8th!! Wait!!
8th: No, just please go!
8th crashes through a window and flies out into the night. Nyasia chooses not to follow. Lord Sarus then walks and puts his hand on Nyasia's shoulder.
Nyasia: So much hate. He fills the bowl of his soul with it.
Lord Sarus: That's what happens when you deal with fathers & sons. Fathers & sons.
freestylemeya
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Weeeeeeeeeppppppppaaaaa...go girls kick some a$$. I love these action packed scenes.
ChuckD
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Woooo whoooooo!!!!
I see some battle time!!!! Love it!
I see some battle time!!!! Love it!
Krystal
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DAMN!!!!!!!!! I am truly LOVING this story! :yeey
When's the next installment? 😉
When's the next installment? 😉
Taz X.T.R.
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The sun. It has been so long that I haven't seen the shine. Early evenings , the mix of light and dark. Isn't that the way every soul is. We all have a darkside as well as a light. I have slept so long without you. Mary walks into the room, her presence is one I haven't felt in ages. However, I never have forgotten it.
Mary: I love the way you look at the sun. So appreciative of it. It's humbling to see someone admire something as simple as the sun.
Rocker: Sometimes we take that which is simple for granted. When you lose it, you regret not enjoying it in the first place.
Mary: Why you? How is it you can survive the sun? We can't find anything in the tests that distinguish a difference between you and previous samples.
Rocker: I can't explain to you. You may not even believe me. It's another part of this world, another realm of reality.
Mary: (unbuckling straps) Listen. I am letting you go. They will be here tonight to destroy you . You must leave this place.
Rocker: (shocked) Why? Why are you putting yourself at risk?
Mary: Because I see a soul in you. I hope it will appreciate this gift. You must tell your people to spread out. Do not stay bunched up. That's how they are finding you.
Rocker: I understand. Thank you.
I look into her eyes and melt therein. I don't want to leave her. Afraid I won't see her again. So I kiss her gently on the lips and embrace her.
Rocker: (sadly) Thank you.
As I make my way out to a window , Mary stops me one step short.
Mary: Wait. Please, here's my number here in the city. Call me. Let me know you are safe.
Rocker: I will Mary. Thank you.
I fly out the window and climb as far as I can. I feel weak but I ascend . She released me. I am so touched. She has given me a reason to this existence. I will see her again.
USS ENTERPRISE
General Thompson arrives with his command staff. He has been pushing the issue if Vampire control and eradication with the Senate and House leaders. The President who is still divided on the issue, is leaning toward signing a possible executive order on the construction of more attack drones.
General Thompson: As you can see, our attack drone clearly executed it's mission. It captured a Vampire whom can withstand light. We brought it here and ran tests.
Admiral Jones: General. I am truly pleased with this news. I cannot wait for another attack run.
As they make their way to the main communication room. A Lt. Commander runs to hand the General a message.
Lt. Commander Hadrey: General Thompson.
General Thompson: Yes Commander.
Lt. Commander Hadrey: Sir. We have news that the Vampire has escaped the center.
General Thompson: WHAT!!! THAT VAMPIRE WAS SUPPOSED TO STAY SEDATED!!! WHERE ARE THE SECURITY TEAMS??!!!
Lt. Commander Hadrey: The civilian security said they went it for the routine round and the Vampire was gone. The window was opened.
General Thompson: Get all our radars to monitor the skies. I want him captured or destroyed.
Lt.Commander Hadrey: Yes sir.
General Berkley: A vampire outside in the sun? Am I hearing correctly.
General Thompson: Yes. One that we know of. We have run tests and haven't found a genectic distinction between this one and other Vampires. He may just be the only one. We either re-capture him or destroy him.
Mary: I love the way you look at the sun. So appreciative of it. It's humbling to see someone admire something as simple as the sun.
Rocker: Sometimes we take that which is simple for granted. When you lose it, you regret not enjoying it in the first place.
Mary: Why you? How is it you can survive the sun? We can't find anything in the tests that distinguish a difference between you and previous samples.
Rocker: I can't explain to you. You may not even believe me. It's another part of this world, another realm of reality.
Mary: (unbuckling straps) Listen. I am letting you go. They will be here tonight to destroy you . You must leave this place.
Rocker: (shocked) Why? Why are you putting yourself at risk?
Mary: Because I see a soul in you. I hope it will appreciate this gift. You must tell your people to spread out. Do not stay bunched up. That's how they are finding you.
Rocker: I understand. Thank you.
I look into her eyes and melt therein. I don't want to leave her. Afraid I won't see her again. So I kiss her gently on the lips and embrace her.
Rocker: (sadly) Thank you.
As I make my way out to a window , Mary stops me one step short.
Mary: Wait. Please, here's my number here in the city. Call me. Let me know you are safe.
Rocker: I will Mary. Thank you.
I fly out the window and climb as far as I can. I feel weak but I ascend . She released me. I am so touched. She has given me a reason to this existence. I will see her again.
USS ENTERPRISE
General Thompson arrives with his command staff. He has been pushing the issue if Vampire control and eradication with the Senate and House leaders. The President who is still divided on the issue, is leaning toward signing a possible executive order on the construction of more attack drones.
General Thompson: As you can see, our attack drone clearly executed it's mission. It captured a Vampire whom can withstand light. We brought it here and ran tests.
Admiral Jones: General. I am truly pleased with this news. I cannot wait for another attack run.
As they make their way to the main communication room. A Lt. Commander runs to hand the General a message.
Lt. Commander Hadrey: General Thompson.
General Thompson: Yes Commander.
Lt. Commander Hadrey: Sir. We have news that the Vampire has escaped the center.
General Thompson: WHAT!!! THAT VAMPIRE WAS SUPPOSED TO STAY SEDATED!!! WHERE ARE THE SECURITY TEAMS??!!!
Lt. Commander Hadrey: The civilian security said they went it for the routine round and the Vampire was gone. The window was opened.
General Thompson: Get all our radars to monitor the skies. I want him captured or destroyed.
Lt.Commander Hadrey: Yes sir.
General Berkley: A vampire outside in the sun? Am I hearing correctly.
General Thompson: Yes. One that we know of. We have run tests and haven't found a genectic distinction between this one and other Vampires. He may just be the only one. We either re-capture him or destroy him.
OMG!!!! Taz you are my dealer!! I feel like a junkie waiting for the next fix! There are only a few books that I have read where I couldn't put it down till I read it whole. Your story is the same, except I have no choice but to wait since you only post once a day or so. You are a very impressive writer. I love the characters and my girls naya and angie kicking ass every which way! 😀
freestylemeya
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I love a good love story :1luv
Krystal
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I 2nd what Jade said! LOL
>waiting patiently< for now! 😉
>waiting patiently< for now! 😉
Taz X.T.R.
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It has been hours since I released him. I am worried. I hope me made it okay. He was feeling a little weak but I know he was well enough. He was fed right before I came. I wait by this phone like a little girl for her first crush. I shouldn't act this way. I am a professional. I need to act like one. What I did today wasn't me.
Mary: And I wish he would call already.
I head to the bathroom to shower. I take off my clothes and just as I am turning on the shower.
(knock on the window)
The window. It's him!!! I wrap around a towel and run to the window like a girl about to see her favorite rock star.
Mary: DIEGO!!!
(opens window and hugs Rocker)
Mary: I am so glad you are safe.
Rocker: I decided to drop by before making my way to my friends.
Mary: How did you find me?
Rocker: Verizon
Mary: You never cease to amaze me.
(noticing towel around mary)
Rocker: I am sorry if I caught you in a bad moment. I can leave.
Mary: No please, don't be silly.
I see he glances at my feet. He breaks into a smile.
Rocker: You have cute toes.
Mary: (laughing) I do!!! That's the first time anyone has ever said that to me. Thank you.
Rocker: Maria had nice toes, it caught my attention. Reminded me of her. Many things about you remind me of her.
He glances in my eyes, melts me. He craves me, I know he does. I feel a want from him like never before.
Mary: I really remind you if her?
Rocker: Yes you do.
Mary: Do you believe in reincarnation?
Rocker: I believe that even though the body dies, the soul returns to this earth. I believe the soul I have searched for is standing right in front of me.
He softly hold my hand. I feel a warmth from him. God, please don't fall, please don't fall.
Rocker: I can't help but feel love for you Mary. You saved my life, kept me safe from harm. I was sad when you let me go. I would have been happy to die if you were the last thing I laid eyes on.
Please don't fall , please don't fall. He kisses me again. I can feel him breathing me in. He inhales my soul.
Mary: Diego, I don't know what to say.
Rocker: I do. I love you Mary.
I fell. He grabs me and kisses me with such passion. My towel falls off leaving me naked in his arms. I open his shirt and run my fingers up his chest. Then I feel my feet not touching the floor anymore. We are floating in air. He undresses while we gently float to the bed where he lays on top of me. He slowly tastes all of me, so gently. My heatbeat races, my legs quiver. I then feel him inside me, feel him soooo deep inside me. He kisses me in such a way, I now know what it means to be made love to. He truly loves me, like no man has ever. I am his.
Mary: I will love you Diego, Now and Forever.
Now & Forever by Nyasia
Oh with just one touch I can feel my body give in, now is the time, I cannot hide the desire I feel inside.
Won't you take all of my love and stay the whole night, now we're two hearts two hearts that were made as one, there's no one else I want.
baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
your the one, that gives one touch and I can't let go
Baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
I'm the one that gives one touch and you can't let go..
Hold me in your arms can't you feel my hearbeats rapid pace
This room feels so hot, as if the fire keeps burning and never stops
Won't you place your hand in mine and never go away
Show me all of the passion you have inside, take your own stride and love
Baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
Your the one that gives one touch and I can't let go
Baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
I'm the one that gives one touch and you can't let go.
Mary: And I wish he would call already.
I head to the bathroom to shower. I take off my clothes and just as I am turning on the shower.
(knock on the window)
The window. It's him!!! I wrap around a towel and run to the window like a girl about to see her favorite rock star.
Mary: DIEGO!!!
(opens window and hugs Rocker)
Mary: I am so glad you are safe.
Rocker: I decided to drop by before making my way to my friends.
Mary: How did you find me?
Rocker: Verizon
Mary: You never cease to amaze me.
(noticing towel around mary)
Rocker: I am sorry if I caught you in a bad moment. I can leave.
Mary: No please, don't be silly.
I see he glances at my feet. He breaks into a smile.
Rocker: You have cute toes.
Mary: (laughing) I do!!! That's the first time anyone has ever said that to me. Thank you.
Rocker: Maria had nice toes, it caught my attention. Reminded me of her. Many things about you remind me of her.
He glances in my eyes, melts me. He craves me, I know he does. I feel a want from him like never before.
Mary: I really remind you if her?
Rocker: Yes you do.
Mary: Do you believe in reincarnation?
Rocker: I believe that even though the body dies, the soul returns to this earth. I believe the soul I have searched for is standing right in front of me.
He softly hold my hand. I feel a warmth from him. God, please don't fall, please don't fall.
Rocker: I can't help but feel love for you Mary. You saved my life, kept me safe from harm. I was sad when you let me go. I would have been happy to die if you were the last thing I laid eyes on.
Please don't fall , please don't fall. He kisses me again. I can feel him breathing me in. He inhales my soul.
Mary: Diego, I don't know what to say.
Rocker: I do. I love you Mary.
I fell. He grabs me and kisses me with such passion. My towel falls off leaving me naked in his arms. I open his shirt and run my fingers up his chest. Then I feel my feet not touching the floor anymore. We are floating in air. He undresses while we gently float to the bed where he lays on top of me. He slowly tastes all of me, so gently. My heatbeat races, my legs quiver. I then feel him inside me, feel him soooo deep inside me. He kisses me in such a way, I now know what it means to be made love to. He truly loves me, like no man has ever. I am his.
Mary: I will love you Diego, Now and Forever.
Now & Forever by Nyasia
Oh with just one touch I can feel my body give in, now is the time, I cannot hide the desire I feel inside.
Won't you take all of my love and stay the whole night, now we're two hearts two hearts that were made as one, there's no one else I want.
baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
your the one, that gives one touch and I can't let go
Baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
I'm the one that gives one touch and you can't let go..
Hold me in your arms can't you feel my hearbeats rapid pace
This room feels so hot, as if the fire keeps burning and never stops
Won't you place your hand in mine and never go away
Show me all of the passion you have inside, take your own stride and love
Baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
Your the one that gives one touch and I can't let go
Baby now & forever won't you stay with me always
I'm the one that gives one touch and you can't let go.
freestylemeya
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I'm melting :1luv
ChuckD
The Gay Lord of Freestyle
I check this forum all day to make sure I don't miss anything! I'm soooo lovin' this! Waiting for the big bang! War is brewing, I can imagine an explosive finish, and wonder who will survive and who won't. Hmmmm..... who will we be saying good-bye to?????
By the way, Nyasia's song was the PERFECT way to finish today's installment!
By the way, Nyasia's song was the PERFECT way to finish today's installment!