Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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Hey MyOnlySweetie!!! I am really glad you are enjoying!! Your printing it out? Cool! Oh and thank you for being a fan!! Okay folks when this story is done we must work to get this on tv! Imagine if this was a television show? That would be awesome!!!! Till then take care and LOL!!!! :heee
 
Heaven can sense the energy flowing from the baby to her. Finally, she thinks, I will have the soul I desire.

Suddenly, as she leans in to drain the baby, Heaven is levitated a way from the table. She tries to resist, but can't. She is tossed to the far wall and held there.


(Tobias) "What is going on??? What is happening?"

(Brenda) "I don't know, Milord?"

A shimmering white energy leaves the baby, and the baby begins to fade away.

(Tobias) "The baby!!!! Heaven must drain the baby!!!!!"

The robed vampires who have been caring for the baby rush to the altar, but are unable to pick up the baby. It is now transparent, and not solid enough to be touched. All attempts fail, with the vampires' hands passing through the baby. Finally, it disappears. The energy of the baby's soul continues forward, and ends up passing into Heaven. Brenda looks, amazed, and turns. She sees figures at the far window and she motions with her hand. The window crashes in towards the warehouse.

(Luna) "Now!"

The Chosen Ones jump from the window to the floor below, and Brenda and Tobias realize what has happened. Marisol and Taina used their powers together to trap Heaven, and keep her from draining the baby. Heaven is now slumped on the floor, dazed. Luna runs to her side.

(Heaven) "Luna, what are you doing here????? What happened???? I feel strange...."

(Luna) "Sister, we stopped them from tricking you. If you had drained the baby, you would've been evil."

Heaven grabs Luna and flies to the other side of the room, and joins the Chosen Ones.

The two sides face each other....for the first time, again. On one side is Tobias, Brenda, Patch, Hot Stuff, Onji, Jaques, Remy, Garrick, Glen, Lila, and the assorted vamps and demons. Across the room is Andreus, Heaven, Luna, Angelique, Carlos, Javiar, Rodolfo, Marisol, Rico, Taina.....


(Tobias) "You all have interfered for the last time! Tonight you die!"

(Angelique) "You have tried to rule the world for the last time! Tonight, YOU die!"
 
Holy sh*t what the hell have I been missing?????? I just checked this thread out damnnn.......
 
The two sides charge at each other quickly, and the battle begins.

Garrick and Glen (the human mercenaries) charge forward. Suddenly, they feel a tugging at them, and feel their load "lighten". They look around, and see that their weapons are floating away, and they disapppear into the zombie pit. Glen looks to see Taina and Marisol staring at them. The twins used their powers to levitate all of their weapons away. While they are well trained in hand to hand combat, they are also skilled at weapons handling, and they are now weaponless. Rodolfo and Javiar charge at them, and the four start hand to hand combat.

Patch (werewolf) runs forward, and during his run, transitions into his midpoint form of a wolf-man hybrid. From the opposite side of the room, Rico does the same thing. The two meet in the middle, and let out piercing battle howls. They are both in a blood lust, and the battle is fierce.

Onji (teleportation demon) charges forward and grabs Taina. This was planned. It must remain a secret that Onji is on the side of good for now, and is staging a mock battle with Taina for a number of reasons. First, this protects Taina, and her unborn baby. Second, It allows both Taina and Onji to keep their eyes on the other Chosen Ones, and if help is needed, they can assist.

Lila (enhanced human) and Marisol are fighting off to the side. Lila continues to rely on her enhanced skills, and weapons, but is having difficulty. Anything that she tries to use against Marisol, Marisol simply focuses her telekentics against them, and they are repelled by her.

Jaques & Remy (vampires) are challenged by Angelique and Luna. While Angelique is not usually involved in battle, she is here today, to make sure that her "family" stays alive. Since Jaques and Remy are so well trained, they are giving both Angelique and Luna a workout.

Hot Stuff (fire demon) is met by Carlos. He is aware of the fire breath she has. He is able to dodge it easily. With Hot Stuff's thick skin and flight ablility, Carlos is having a difficult time with this battle.

Tobias is met by Heaven and Andreus. Tobias is a formidible vampire, and is wearing the "Red Eye Diamond", which makes him almost indestructable. However, Heaven is the Queen Vampire, and did not get that title by being a softie. She and Andreus lash out at Tobias.

Off to the side is Brenda. She is watching the whole episode, not certain where the plan went wrong, and how to help. She can see that, while her "Anti-Chosen" are well trained, the "Chosen Ones" are just as well trained. the battles are a draw. She decides she needs help, and cancels the "suspended animation" spell on the zombies she's created. They begin to move. Onji sees this, and reaches into his cloak, and finds the detonation device he has for the flame throwers he's placed around the zombie pit. With one push of the botton, flames jet into the pit, igniting all the zombies, and causig them to die. Brenda screams in surprise, her army destroyed.

She moves to a far wall, by a large pile of garbage. Just above her is the window where Daniella, Aurora, and Francisco are. The three of them lean in on the window, to see more of what is going on, and the window gives away. The three of them fall into the warehouse basement, next to Brenda. Francisco get up, and grabs his weapon, and charges into the fight.


(Brenda) "YOU!!!!! This is all your fault! You got involved, and destroyed everything!"

Before Aurora can react, Brenda is on her, starts to strangle Aurora. Suddenly, Brenda sees psychic images. Her contact with Aurora is allowing her to see what the future will be like if the side of evil wins.

And around them, battles wage on.
 
Chuck awesome work!!! Very exciting!! Okay peeps sorry I have been away but it wasn't my fault! My internet access was down for 5days so when I had a chance to write I couldn't. It is finally taken care of so I will be writing on monday. I promise to write alot!!! Stay tuned and LOL!!!!!
 
Outside down below where the soldiers are fighting there is a small bunker set up for the highest ranking military officials available. Xman and his old crew are there too. They have set up some computers and are overseeing what is going on so far and are trying to guide their military forces efficiently. The Black hawk is up in the air and it's radar has picked up one of the large fire breathing flying demons. Xman is standing there observing and suddenly hears a beeping sound. He knows that is the alert to head on in. He now must try to get inside and hopefully Brenda can sense him when he is near enough inside the fortress to then teleport him to the battle scene. Xman then looks at his former comrades who he is working again with and they look at him. He then grabs from his back from their sheaths special swords for the fight ahead. He then looks to them and the other military officials to say something But Blanco then steps in to speak.

Elsewhere inside the fortress Antonio and the others have made it through the lower lackeys of Tobias. Now they are at the door of the temple and they stop before entering. Antonio looks to the others and say...

(Antonio):"Well everyone this is it. We are here and well there is no turning back."

(Fr. Daniels):"Blessed father thank you for getting us this far!! Thank you for protecting us from all these hellspawn and keeping us alive!!!"

(Dona and Blanca):"Amen to that!"

(Alberto):"Man I can't believe we are here! I can't believe I'm a werewolf too! To think that all those movie and tv show monsters are actually real and now I am one! I am also fighting to save the world too!"

(Antonio):"Yes we are fighting to save the world, but we're not done yet. Once we walk through this door things are going to get very dangerous and scary. There are individuals in there that are trained very well and will be trying to kill us. We can't let them. These beings will be the likes of which you have never faced. Only Brenda and I have the true experience of that kind and we will do our very best to help you when we can."


Simultaneously faraway in a ruined building Ophelia floats in the air sitting yoga style and has just observed Antonio and his crew. She then looks to Taina and Rico and they then float to her. Ophelia reaches her hand out to Taina. Taina then looks to Rico and then he nods as if to say okay. Taina then touches Ophelia's hand and then suddenly Taina see's all that Ophelia just saw. She see's Antonio again and his fight to help save the world. The man she onced loved is now fighting on the side of angels to hopefully save his friends and loved ones and to redeem his soul so that he can move onto the paradise of heaven.

Back inside...

(Brenda):"Antonio are you sure we can do this?"

(Antonio):"We have too."

(Brenda):"Well I have some of my most powerful magicks with me and my abilities I have gained as a witch. The others have their new abilities. You have the spear and a feather. So far so good. What else can you do?

(Antonio):"Well I am alive again. I also have some enhanced strength and reflexes and I am tougher than a normal human. But when I face Gargdaemonus that won't help much. That is why I have the feather of MichaEL the most powerful of the archangels which I will use at some point.

(Alberto): "Well that should make you invincible right?"

(Antonio):"No."

(Alberto):"What?"

(Fr. Daniels):"Huh??"

(Antonio):"It will make me very powerful but not invincible.It is a fraction of his power but it will be enough on this plane of existence."

(Brenda):"Why don't you just use the feather now and make our jobs easier?"

(Antonio):"I can't."

(Brenda):"Why not??"

(Antonio):"It's not the right time. I have to use the feather when our most deadly enemy becomes more powerful."

(Fr.Daniels):"More powerful?? Dear lord save us!!"

(Brenda):"More powerful? Um okay. Is this some sort of destiny thing?"

(Antonio):"Yeah it's a destiny thing. Gargdaemonus will become very powerful once he merges with the dark half of my soul. He will become pure evil and power encarnate. The only way to stop his terrible power is to use the power of the heavens which is the feather and the spear which has the the blood of Christ, he who is pure good."
 
Inside the temple Tobias and his forces stand ready with weapons in hand. Each of his elite has special abillities and formidable skills. Some are there because it's their job and they enjoy it. Others are there for the glory of working with their master Tobias and the thrill of battle. They all stand in their own special battle stances while Gargdaemonus stands on a high pedestal with arms folded observing what will happen and to assist if need be.

Suddenly the large doors to the temple explode inwards with great force. The main elite manage to dodge to flying debris but three vampire warriors don't manage to dodge and get killed by the crushing impact and severing shards.
Then they observe the smoke from the explosion and then there are shadows in that smoke as it settles. Some arrows are fired from Tobias's men and then shadows drop. They are dead warriors of Tobias and they were used as targets. Then there is a blast of magical energy that hits Tobias back but he is unharmed because of the armor he is wearing. The blast was from Brenda and the magical eldricht energy appears as purplish blue fire that burns from her hands.
Then one by one they appear through the smoke. A witch, a werewolf, two telekinetics a priest and a lost soul who has found a great purpose and they are the new chosen ones!

Suddenly all of the elite are around them. The elite are composed of the remains of the anti chosen and the two special hunter assasins. They are HotStuff an atractive flying fire breathing demoness with incredible strength, Lilah an enhanced human warrior with physical abilities to rival a slayer. Patch a werewolf mecenary, Onijiko a deadly ninja shadow demon who was a rival to Onji who has the ability to shadow teleport. Tauros an armored skin demon minotaur with great strength. Then there are the many specially trained top warrior vampires of Tobias. Brenda then looks to Antonio and tells him she has an idea to help even the odds more. She tells him it was a trick she used before. Brenda then grabs from her bag the amulet of Osirus and speaks the special encantation and the dead warriors of Tobias that were in the hall begin to rise up and take arms. Brenda then speaks to her zombie warriors and then tells them "Zombie warriors your enemy is Tobias's forces destroy them!!" The zombies then enter the room and begin to attack. The vampire warriors then divert their attention to the zombies. Gargdaemonus just laughs at what he is seeing. Brenda then sends a magical blast towards Gargdaemonus. Gargdaemonus just raises his hands slightly and creates a magical sheild that easily diverts the energy away from him.

(Gargdaemonus): "Nice try witch."

(Brenda):"Huh you haven't seen anything yet!!"

(Antonio):"Okay everyone this is it! Fight with all you got!! Thank you Brenda for all the special help you gave us now we truly have a chance. Here we go guys!!"

(Brenda):"Yeah lets go kick ass!!"


Elsewhere in the dark realm the other half of Antonio begins to rise up even further to the opening that is growing larger still. This opening or doorway will lead him to another piece of himself that is waiting on the other side. Very soon he will be more whole and unleash his great power with unfettered fury.
 
Okay peeps that is all I can write for now.I have to work tuesday morning and I have other stuff later. I will write some more on wednsday afternoon before work(I have late shift instead of early shift). I promise!!! I'm glad you enjoyed Krystal! Take care and LOL!!! Stay tuned my peeps more coming soon!
 
omg we are page 47? i got alot of reading to do and i am waiting for a certain individual to print it out for me ~ahemchucky~
 
The Final Battle......Part 1

Garrick and Glen VS Rodolfo and Javiar


Garrick and Glen are standing still, slightly confused. When they reach for weapons, no weapons are found. Taina and Marisol psychically removed all of them, and tossed them into the fire pit with the burning zombies. Bullets and grenades are exploding from the heat. Rodolfo and Javiar charge.

Garrick moves towards Rodolfo, and gives a high kick to Rodolfo's chest. Rodolfo grabs Garrick's ankle, and twists it, causing him to fall. Garrick gets up and charges Rodolfo, and punches his face and stomach. Rodolfo loses his footing and falls back, and Garrick jumps on top of him.

Meanwhile, Javiar leaps at Glen. Glen throws his arms up in defense, and falls back as Javiar lands on him. Glen rolls, and flips Javiar on his back, against a nearby wall. Glen runs toward Javiar, and jumps towards him, but Javiar rolls to the right, and Glen's blow misses.

Garrick advances towards Rodolfo. Garrick has found a pipe, and swings it at Rodolfo. Rodolfo jumps over the swing, then ducks under the next swing. While on the ground, he finds a brick. Garrick swings, and Rodolfo throws his brick. It strikes Garrick's head, causing him to drop the pipe. Rodolfo jumps on top of Garrick, and the two begin beating and wrestling on the ground.

Glen rebounds from his miss, and leaps at Javiar. Javiar gets to his feet, and runs from Glen. As Glen gets close, Javiar turns and kicks with all his might. He strikes Glen's face, and Glen falls back. Javiar notices something against the far wall, and formulates a plan. He reverses his stance, causing Glen to have his back to a wall, and Javiar leaps at him.

Garrick and Rodolfo continue to struggle. Garrick has found a small piece of brick, and is beating Rodolfo with it on his face and head. Rodolfo is beginging to black out...but looks to his left. He gets an idea, and forces Garrick into a "roll"...the two men start rolling to the left. Rodolfo knees Garrick in the stomach. Garrick looses the brick, and starts gasping for breath. Rodolfo leaps towards Garrick, and shoves him with all his might. Too late, Garrick realizes that Rodolfo had "rolled" him over to the edge of the pit where the zombies were, and is now a raging pit of fire. Garrick tumbles into the pit, and screams.

Javiar is in mid air, and Glen grabs him, and flips him into the wall. Javiar crumples and falls into a heap. He looks dazed, and confused. Glen looks towards his left, and sees Garrick's death at the hands of Rodolfo. Glen flies into a rage, looses his concentration, and leaps at Javiar. Javiar turns slightly, and turns up a weapon. Too late, Glen realizes what happened. Javiar had Glen purposefully throw him against this wall. It was the wall which Daniella, Auroroa, and Francisco fell through. There are large shards of glass everywhere. Glen lands on Javiar, who is holding a large, jagged piece of glass. Glen falls on it, and it pierces his stomach, and goes all the way through him, coming out his back. Javiar then grabs a second shard of glass, and uses it to slice open Glen's throat. Glen turns on his back, and dies.

Meanwhile, Brenda is still holding on to Aurora's neck. She sees the future, the death of the Chosen Ones, and her turn to the side of good. Heaven rising to Tobias' side, and the threat of Gargadeamous. She let's go, and turns and looks at the battles. She turns to Aurora and Daniella, and smiles. She looks at Javiar and Rodolfo, who are both beaten and bloody. Brenda raises her hands, and a yellow light bathes the two of them. Aurora and Daniella see that the men's wounds are healing, and that Brenda is helping the right side now.
 
Tobias gets up off the floor and is quite angry at the witch and her traitorous attack. He gets into his battle stance with his two most prized swords. He then raises his vampiric chi near its maximum to raise his strength without going into full blood lust. The armor protected him as it should for it was forged of special materials to protect this vampire lord of noble blood. He then calls out to his enemys.

(Tobias):"Insulent curs you will pay dearly for such an affront!!! You will suffer most painfully!! Especially you traitorous witch!!!"

(Brenda):"This is your fault! You used me and when I wasn't useful to you anymore you cast me asside and forgot about me!"

(Tobias):"You served your purpose and I let you go to do as you please. I had more important things to do than be buddy buddy with an employee."

(Brenda):"Well I gave you the chosen ones and that's how you repay me. Well here I am giving you the New Chosen ones!!"

(Tobias): "Yes you gave me the chosen ones but you also wanted more. You wanted to be by my side but that spot was reserved for the vampire queen.
Speaking of her...

Suddenly from up high a figure does a dive and a flip and lands right near Tobias. It is Heaven.

(Tobias): "My queen will you do the honors of destroying this traitor?"

(Heaven):"Yes. I will take care of this jealous low born."

Heaven then launches herself towards Brenda at great speed with a sword attempting to impale her. Brenda puts up a mystical defense sheild barely in time to block the sword. "Nice block." Heaven says. Brenda then reaches her hand inside her bag of tricks and pulls out the sword that once belonged to Rico the sword he never really got to use. It's the enchanted sword Darhk Glaive a sword forged for slaying any type of creature of the night. Onji found it and left it behind with the new chosen when he went back in time.

(Heaven):"Is that??

(Brenda):"Yes it is! Rico was quite resourceful he wasn't just a warrior who was also a werewolf. He had alot of weapons and had some knowledge of magick. He had alot of potential. Now I am going to use this sword to kick your undead ass!!"

(Heaven):"You can try you wicked bitch!!"

(Brenda):"Arrrrrr that's witch!!!!!!"

The two are now locked in battle and from a distance there is a cloaked vampire staying hidden in the shadows.

Meanwhile some lower vampires have entered the temple and are getting close to Fr. Daniels. He is keeping them back with a large shiny cross and then he pulls from his back pack a super soaker. The vampires laugh and say you are going to use a childs toy on us? You want to die faster?!" "No you will die!" says Fr.Daniels and then sprays them soaking them and they begin to writhe in pain and burst into flames. "That was holy water you idiots!!" says Fr.Daniels. Then some more vampires are coming in and Fr.Daniels takes out two uzis with bullets that were soaked in holy water and doubly blessed with prayers. He then begins to say the "Our father" prayer as he unleashes a barrage of bullets spraying towards his enemies.

Alberto is in werewolf mode is clawing and biting and tearing at his enemies. Dona and Blanca are near him helping out. They figure if they can stick close together they have a better chance of surviving. Unfortunately Tobias's vampire elite warriors are almost done slaying the zombies which they have torn to shreds.
 
Meanwhile Gargdaemonus stands on the pedestal observing the fight and he then looks to the dark priests hidding in a corner and orders them to send up the human souls for it is time to anchor the gate to keep it open. The priest's then nod in agreement and say a few words to make the souls comply. The souls then fly up and take different point's in the nexus they then become bright balls of light and the gate is held open in place. Now even more dark things and hell fire pour through the gate and the city is transforming to reflect the the dark power coming through the gate in the sky. The souls of the original chosen ones look on in horror.

Back inside Antonio is moving in to face his enemy Gargdaemonus. He moves quickly with great speed toward him and jumps high in the air launching himself like a projectile towards Gargdaemonus. Suddenly Tobias jumps at him and deflects him. They land on the ground.

(Antonio):"Step asside vampire! My fight is with Gargdaemonus!!"

(Tobias):"No your fight is with me! To get to my master you must get through me!"

(Antonio):"I don't have time for this crap get out of my way."

(Tobias):"I already told you what must be done."

(Antonio):"Fine whatever."


Gargdaemonus just laughs and then the two combatants begin their fight in front of him.


Antonio vs Tobias:

Antonio then lunges forward and Tobias moves asside dodging the first attack. Tobias then takes two swings with his swords useing a samurai fighting style but Antonio blocks with the spear. Tobias is shocked that his swords didn't cut through the spear.

(Tobias):"How can that be?? How did your spear stop my swords?"

(Antonio):"Take a closer look."

(Tobias):"Is that..? How did you get that??"

(Antonio):"Yes it is the spear of destiny to be used in this time of destiny. I found it in your trophy room."

(Tobias):"Your destiny is to die by my hands!!"

(Antonio):"We shall see."

Tobias then jumps at Antonio with a flying martial art kick. Antonio blocks pushes Tobias sideways and takes a swipe with the spear but Tobias flips out of the way. The two then take turns swinging weapons and throwing punches and kicks. They are quite an even match and this infuriates Tobias. This also annoys Antonio because he just want's to fight Gargdaemonus.

Elsewhere Heaven is unleashing a relentless barrage of attacks on Brenda. Brenda does as best as she could but Heavens vampiric speed is making it difficult to battle her and she really doesn't want to fight her she is saving her energy and power for someone else. Suddenly the cloaked vampire jumps in and Heaven impales it accidentally. The vampire takes his hood off and it was a vampire working for the vampire judge. "I was sent to remind you of who you were, You were chosen to represent the royal blood line not take orders from this insulent vampire Tobias. Remember your love that you lost. Also remember your sister. Heaven suddenly stops and tears begin to fall from her eyes. "My love? My sister? I have forgotten them!!" She then launches herself into the air and flys out breaking through a window in emotional pain. Tobias and Antonio have stopped fighting and observed this.

(Tobias):"What have you done low born creature?"

(Vampire):"I have released her from your thrall. Though she is still like us a dark one she now remembers those she held dear to her and is now gone. She works for you no more. May she find.. peace... one.. day."

The vampire then dies.

Brenda then moves towards Antonio while Tobias stands still in shock over what just happened. Tobias then takes his fighting stance and is furious and is on the verge of blood lust. Brenda then says to Antonio "Take care of Gargdaemonus, Tobias is mine!" Antonio then nods in agreement and now they begin their fight with their true enemies.
 
Okay peeps I will write some more late tonight after work(I get out at 11:00pm tonight). Xman still has to show up and fight Onijiko and also Tauros, Lilah and Hotstuff are gonna be getting into the mix as well as some Vampire elite. Will Alberto, Dona, Blanca, and Fr.Daniels survive? Stay tuned
 
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