Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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FreestyleGod said:
The bad guys finally won!!! Mooah ha ha ha ha(Evil Laugh!) :dgrin
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Not for long! :nah Daniella and Aurora will save them! :losmile

OMG!!!!!! When I read what you posted last night GOD...it was umm 3 in the mornin I think and I almost fainted! :lol
 
this is were we start seeing secnes for the sequel..right before the credits roll..lol
 
FreestyleGod said:
Daniella and Aurora will fail!! Mooah ha ha ha ha!!! Evil reigns supreme!!!!!dsmoke
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If you think I'm about to let Carlos and Javiar die without a wedding night....you are sadly mistaken!


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Daniella and Aurora have appeared outside on the streets. They are confused and scared. They have witnessed their friends murder and it is quite disturbing to them. Suddenly they see zombies moving by and people running. They are frightened and run to an alley to get clear their thoughts and focus on the situation.

(Daniella) I don't get it what are we supposed to do?

(Aurora) I don't know?! Everything still looks the same!

Suddenly a voice is in Aurora's head. "I have taken you close to where you need to be. When the time is right you will have a guide to show you the way..."

(Aurora) Um Daniella did you hear that?

(Daniella) Hear what?

(Aurora) Hmm I guess it was telepathic. I heard a voice saying that we were sent to this area and when the time is right a guide will show us the way.

(Daniella) That's great the world has gone to heck and we have to survive long enough to find some sort of guide?

(Aurora) Yep that sounds like it! I guess we should sneak around carefully and look for clues to this guide.

(Daniella) Yeah I guess so.
 
all the tv broadcast and radio are interupted "we interrupt your regularly scheduled program with a special emergency report" "events are unfolding which cannot be redialy explained in new york city..all police personal are advised to report for duty..all fire and rescue as well..no one other then those will be admited.. all bridges tunnels are closed..all buisnesses are ordered to close..all schools to close..remain in youre homes until further notice.please remain calm...national guardsman are instructed to report to there bases..all military personel on leave are to report as well a state of national emergency has been ordered by washington." on CNN a reporter is on tv in times square "we dont have full details on the emergency state as yet..we have no reports of explosions or terrorist action..we only have reports of a possible gang shoot out at a suspected mob warehouse "...suddenly the reporter looks at something off camera and starts to scream..the video feed is lost and only static can be seen.... on sunrise highway long island.. freckels and blanco are in the car racing east..they are listening to the radio..blanco says ."i told you i hate being right..shit!!"..at the mansion in qouge romero looks at the don and says bring me my swords and open the arsenal room..and call all of youre men..NOW!!!" at the pentagon in washington orders are being given for all military ground.. sea ..and air to scramble....at the white house the president and staff are picked up by helicopters to brig them to air force one..allthough advised by the media to remain calm the U.S. population is in a state of chaos and that chaos is spearding out world wide like a monstorous ripple..silos around the world are put on the highest alert...ports are opened..and the steam rises as missles are fueled..in the blackhawk ramirez is in with the team the radio operator screams to be heard over the noise.." sir weve been ordered back to the city right now!!from cinclantfleet command..priorty emercency codes..shit sir weve never seen this level message since... what the f**k is going on!!??"ramirez replies " i dont know turn the bird around..abort objective..contact cinclantfleet for further details and new objective now!! ramirez thinks to himself as well as his men the last time they recieved those codes was 9 11..what the hell was going on??!!!!....he looks out the window and sees four f fourteens in formation streaking by....
 
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As Aurora and Daniella make there way through the city avoiding zombies, vamps and demons.. other drama is taking place. Tobias and Heaven and Brenda are taking over the city but soon the sun will rise or will it? A lackey has arrived into the main office.

(Lackey)Lord Tobias!! Milord the preparations with the weapons are done. We are awaiting your commands to proceed with operation "the Long night."

(Tobias) Proceed fool and I expect those bombs to wipe out some of the lowly vermin and the mystic smoke from it to block out that occursed sun!!

(Lackey)Yes milord! (the lackey leaves.)

Meanwhile Others are freaking out on the streets about what has happened. Dona Lengua Larga is in her home hiding from the things roaming the streets. She is afraid and hoping her chulo shows up soon to comfort her.

Back at Tobias's office Brenda is excited about her victory and approaches Tobias. She touches his shoulder and he looks at her hand touching him.

(Tobias)What are you doing? You have your hand on me!

(Brenda)Oh I'm sorry milord I was just excited about our victory!
I ment no harm or disrespect.

(Tobias)Accepted.

(Heaven)Ignore her Tobias we have alot of work to do. We have a new world to make and the vampire nation shall be as one under our rule!

(Tobias) Yes the vampires shall rule among thje lowlies and the creatures of the night shall roam free. No more human vermin running things.

(Heaven)Yes no humans running things. We shall rule over them all even the lowly magical ones! (Heaven looks at Brenda and smirks with her remark)(Brenda at this moment is feeling jealous. She did all this work only to have Heaven step in front of her glory and advances to Tobias.)

Elsewhere at a harbor port the weapons Tobias spoke about are about to launch and the city is still in total chaos.
 
Aurora and Daniella have snuck into an abandoned home for the night. Going home would be too dangerous with all the things roaming the streets.They spend the night in an empty room with ragged blankets they found and an old coat as a pillow. They are asleep. Suddenly Aurora see's herself in a beautiful outdoor place and there is some sort of party going on. She keeps walking and just breathes the fresh air and feels the cool dry breeze of a warm and perfect day. She then hears her name being called and she looks to see who is calling her. It is Carlos standing next to Javiar and they are both wearing tux's and they are next to a large wedding cake. All of Aurora new friends are there. She see's Taina holding a baby and Rico bringing a bottle for the baby. Rico puts the bottle in the baby's mouth and kisses the baby on the forehead. Marisol is there with Rodolfo and they are dancing. Francisco is at the bar area and Daniella is taking pictures of the happy and festive event. They mention Angelique and Romero will be showing up later that night for the rest of the reception.

Carlos then calls out to Aurora and tells everyone to join in a group picture. Daniella hands the camera to a man at the party to take a picture. All of them huddle together and await the group picture to be taken. Suddenly Aurora see's the man taking the photo is wearing an Eyepatch. She see's the caterer's face is covered like a ninja and has glowing yellow eyes. She see's a woman at the bar dressed in black and her skin color is red and she has small horns, wings and long clawed finger nails. There is a blonde athletic girl serving drinks and she has a large knife strapped to her boots. She see's two waiters with military pants and a large gun hanging on their backs. The wedding planner is a woman dressed like a gothic witch and a priest is walking slowly toward them but she can't make out his face.

Aurora is frightened and tries to warn everyone before the picture is taken but unfortunately she screams out but there is no sound. Everyone else is all laughing and having a great time and they pay no attention to her. She grabs Carlos's arm and still nothing. She then notices the priest is missing. Suddenly it is dark and cold out and everyone is still partying and the photo's are being taken. Carlos starts to wave his hand and suddenly his chest hurts and a silver point comes through and he is coughing up blood. It is a sword and the priest stabbed him. Also at that moment everyone else is being attacked by the Anti-chosen. The attack is all in slow motion and the photo flashes are causing a strobe light effect. Aurora see's her new friends being murdered again and she see's the face of the priest as he grabs her firmly by her arms. The Priest is Tobias!!

(Tobias) Insulent child!! How dare you become friends with such lowlies!?!!

(Aurora) No father stop this!!!!

(Tobias) Stop what child? It is the natural order! The strong must weed out the weak! Only the strong must survive and the strong must rule the world!!

(Aurora) You are wrong father, you are wrong!! This isn't the way!!

(Tobias) Foolish child you have been blinded by your humanity! Now I will take off those blinders and you will see and embrace your dark half by becoming like your father!

At that moment Tobias's face has transformed to his true vampire face and his fangs stick out. He then bites into his daughters neck and she screams "Nooooooo!!!!!!!"

Aurora wakes up in a cold sweat and Daniella wakes up too.

(Daniella) Are you okay??

(Aurora) Ah... ah... I..think.. so. I ...guess I was... a sleep?! I had the most terrible... nightmare!!!

Aurora is still shaking from the nightmare and Daniella hugs her friend to comfort her. The comfort doesn't last long though.
Outside there are loud noises that sound like explosions and just when the early sun was starting to brighten the skies it is now dark again. Many buildings were destroyed and many innocent lives were lost. An unnatural dark cloud covers the sky and vampires, zombies, demons and other creatures of the night are still running rampant on the streets and the chaos outside is still growing!
 
Elsewhere a the top of Tobias's corporate building Tobias is overlooking the chaos running rampant in the city. He can see the destruction and the fear and he smiles! Inside his chambers there are a couple of guards and Heaven is lounging on a very expensive but comfortable couch imported from spain. She is drinking wine and dressed lavishly. Gifts from Tobias.
Brenda makes her way in.

(Brenda) Milord everything is going according to plan!

(Tobias) Yes I noticed.

(Brenda) The police force is a joke and some have been converted into vampires. The military is trying to make its way in.

(Tobias) Yes I know and they will fail. This place is protected and I have a my forces watching and guarding the parimeters.

(Brenda) Yes all runs well oh wise and powerful master!

Heaven gets up and walks up to Tobias and puts her arm on him.

(Heaven) Yes Brenda as you see all is well here so why don't you run along and play with your friends or just go away.

(Brenda) Hey you don't speak to me that way you bitc..

Tobias covers Brenda's mouth and shoves her.

(Tobias) You dare speak to your future queen that way?!

Brenda kneels down in front of Tobias but says nothing.

(Tobias) I will let that slide.. because without your help all that has transpired would not have been possible. You are forgiven.
Also know your station! Although you work for me and have supernatural abilities your are still only human. So begone until you are summoned again!!

Brenda gets up and bows and walks out of the room. Inside her heart she feels used and feels hatred toward Heaven for taking her rightful place. Brenda thinks to herself "I should be queen!!! Not her!! Just because I'm not a vampire or royal blood, so what!! I did alot more than her for this cause!! I deserve that spot!!"
Brenda continues to grumble down the hall and Onji see's her.

(Onji) Is all well?

(Brenda) No.. not really.

(Onji) What is the matter?

(Brenda) I don't know I am having second thoughts on all this. I don't even feel satisfied with Angeliques death. I miss pestering her! It feels kinda empty.

(Onji) I too feel empty. We killed the chosen kind of easily and there really wasn't any honor in the fight.

(Brenda) A demon ninja talking about honor? I thought only samurai's had honor.

(Onji) you are mistaken. There are codes that even demon ninja's have and I do have my own sense of honor. Maybe my time for battle should have stopped? Maybe it was time to be a teacher of some sort? I guess I wasn't ready to see it. I do feel it now. I guess it is too late now.

(Brenda) Well I suppose it is. I kinda miss the way things were already in a way. I had alot of fun shopping and all my magical pranks as well! Those were fun days. Too bad we can't.... Hmm?

(Onji) Can't what?

(Brenda) Ah... just a thought. I will let you know. I gotta go! I will talk to you soon!

(Onji) Okay.

Brenda then summons her broom and she is off into the darkened skies.
 
*Dona Lengua Larga hides in her apartment. She knows it's morning, but it is still dark out. Something is not right. She waits for Alberto to come over. She invited him over for breakfast, but that was before everything was.......crazy. She hears something at the door, and gets up. Not thinking, she opens the door, and sees two zombies at her door. In the apartment across the hall, she sees her neighbor on the floor. There are 4 zombies in his place, eating him. Dona screams, and the two zombies stagger into her house. She runs to the kitchen, and grabs a frying pan. The first zombie staggers in, and she slams it in the face with the pan. As it falls back, she runs into her living room. She slams the second zombie with the pan, and runs to the door, to shut it before any other "living dead" come in.*

*As she gets to the door, she sees Alberto El Chulo at the door. He is carrying a backpack with him. He looks in and sees the two zombies. He pushes Dona out of the way and runs to the livingroom, and opens the window. As the first zombie gets up, he pushes it out the window. He then throws the other zombie out the window. He turns and runs to the door, and slams it shut. He locks it, and moves a dresser in front of it.*

(Dona) "Ay Dios Mio! What is happening here?"

(Alberto) "I don't know, mi amor!"

(Dona) "This can't be happening.......it's 8 am, but it's dark as midnight.......I don't believe it."

(Alberto) "I don't get why this is going on.....where is my faggy cousin and his 'super friends'?"

(Dona) "Alberto, what are you talking about?"

(Alberto) "I can't get into it here. We need to find out what is going on. We can't do that here."

(Dona) "You're not suggesting that we leave it here.....it's safe here."

(Alberto) "We'll never find out what is going on in here. Dress in any black clothes you have, and put on some religious jewelry."

*Dona goes to her room and changes. When she comes out, she sees that Alberto has changed into all black clothes. He reaches into the backpack and pulls out some of Carlos' old make up. It' is black. He smears it all over his face, and Dona's face, and puts it back. He grabs from the backpack a crossbow. It was Carlos' spare. He also has a lot of the arrows, with the specail tips that Carlos created.*

(Alberto) "Good, we are ready. Stay close to me, and be quiet."

*Alberto creaks the door, and sees that the zombies in the neighboring apartment are gone. There is a bloody mess left behind. They sneak out of the building and into the street. With all the lights off, they are nearly invisible. As they walk through the town, they hear screams and shots ringing out. They reach the abandoned warehouse in the center of town, and they stop.*

(Alberto) "I don't understand why Carlos and his friends aren't stopping this?"

(Dona) "Why would they stop this?"

(Alberto) "It's hard to explain, they were like....protectors.....they watched for stuff like this and took care of it. I helpped them out like two times. Once to distract Maria at the hospital desk, and once to steal some blood from the hospital."

(Dona) "Are you serious?"

(Alberto) "Yes."

(Dona) "Well, call your cousin......maybe they don't know what's going on."

(Alberto) "Ok then, I'll give it a shot."

*as he takes out his soul, he sees a vampire come up behind Dona. As it puts it's hand on Dona's shoulder, Alberto shoots it with the specail arrow. Dona turns to see it get hit in the heart, and disintigrate into dust.*

(Alberto) "It's too dangerous out here. Let's get inside."

*Alberto opens a window to the warehouse, and slides in. He holds the window open, and let's Dona inside. Once inside, surrounded by the darkness, Alberto calls Carlos' cell phone. He holds the phone, and hears another phone ring. He turns in the direction of the ring, and walks towards it. Dona follows. He pulls out a flashlight, and shines it on the floor where the sound of the ring is coming. The light falls on what is left of Carlos' coat. It's covered in blood. The phone is in the inside pocket. Not far from the coat is Javiar, with his throat ripped out. Dona screams, and Alberto covers her mouth. He turns and sees four bodies, burned beyond recognition. He sees one wearing an amulet and realizes that it was the one that Rico would wear.*

(Alberto) "Dona...I think, that whatever is happening out there, started here. And they tried to stop it, but ......couldn't."

(Dona-walking to Alberto) "Oh Alberto....I'm sooo sorry."

(Alberto) "We need to get out of here *holding Dona* if they couldn't stop this madness, what chance do we have?"

(Dona) "We have to do something........"

(Alberto) "We could pray.....other than that.....what else could we do?"
 
Great work Chuck!! Excellent addition!!! Looking forward to others!

Our poor heroes! It's a fight to stay alive till certain individuals can change the tide!Will they make it? Will there be a happy ending? Stay tuned!! A Creative CF freestylers production. Applause to the writers for their awesome writing!!!!:yeey :yeey :yeey
 
nothing .. no comfort.. no denial..no more shield from reality..no more ..every time someone said "same shit different day"..this was the day to change everything..not one major world event could compare to the events going on today.massive looting..zombies ..vampires..demons..killing people on a grand scale...people trampled to death in churches!!..mass transit stopped..fires breaking out with no fire departments responding.all buisneses closed..power outages..all flights grounded..supermarkets the secnes of people killing each other over goods...traffic so bad millions of cars just abandonned..mass crowds just running no where down the highways.or city streets..no law no order..the police force and military world wide being killed by civillians..all comunnications down no cell phones or land lines ..the world stood still ..the government of the world nations impotent...radio..tv..paralized..in a matter of hours the world was back in the dark ages.the strengh and dependency on modern technology all gone..no more class structure..money means nothing on this day..every human being for themselves.apocalypse.the worst parts of the bible where no longer just words in a chapter..but reality not one person on earth would be unaffected by this day..air force one flying at thirty thousand feet escorted by fighter planes while the president is confined due to a "mental break down" reports of abandonned missle silos worldwide........ REVELATIONS chapter 16 first verse "And i heard a great voice of the temple saying to the seven angels ..go your ways and pour out the vials of the wrath of God upon the earth... verse 18 "and there were voices and thunder and lightings and a great earthquake such as was not since men were upon the earth so mighty an earthquake and so great".. it seemed it was not a literal earthquake but a ripple that would spread out and shake and tumble all that was structure..order.. law ..economics.. in the world...for those three where destroyed now shaken to rubble..it had begun......and the dark forces of the world no longer had to remain in hiding..for the very image of god and good overcoming all was gone..how could god let all this happen??
 
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AWESOME! You guys are terrific! :heee

What a way to wake up in the middle of the night! :lol
 
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