Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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Brenda has finished her recruiting and she and her entourage are in an abandoned warehouse that has been set up for training. One side has mats on the floors and two weapons chests. On another side a modified shooting range for shooting guns arrows and even thrown weapons. Also there is a meeting room. Brenda and her crew are in the meeting room and there is a big screen up against a wall and slide images are being projected. She is showing them pictures of their enemies and talking to them of their abilities. Brenda then looks at file made up of her crew and begins a roll call.

(Patch) Male Werewolf mercenary and a weapons expert, very good hand to hand military style combatant.

(Hot stuff) Female demon/human hybrid Thug and killer excellent fighter street fighting and wrestling combat style. Enhanced strength can lift 2000 lbs(a ton). Enhanced senses(sight,hearing). Tough skin. Rapid healing. Flight. Fire breath.

(Onji) Demon hybrid rogue Ninja asassin enhanced speed and strength and can blend into shadows to the point of being invisible. Can climb walls and cielings like a spider and can see in the dark. Sharp asian weapons expert.

(Jaques and Remy) Two brother vampires. Trained heavily in hand to hand combat. They work freelance now. They were away on an intimidation and kill mission when they came back to find their master was slain(Cervantes) and wish to get revenge for their master.

(Garrick and Glen) Mercenaries human. Well trained in hand to hand combat and military weapons.

(Lila) Bounty hunter enhanced human. Enhanced strength and senses and heals faster than normal. Martial arts expert and guns and blunt and sharp weapons. Comes from a mystically enhanced warrior clan.

Brenda looking at her crew smiles in great approval. She then tells them "In a few days you will fight the opponents that I showed you! You will fight them to the death if need be because we are to stall them from interefering in certain plans. You are my chosen, the anti chosen to battle the chosen. You know what must be done so get to work!! Your training begins now!!"
After hearing her words they get up and grab weapons and pair up and the training has begun.
 
Luna has much to think about. Angelique said it would give Heaven back a soul , just not her soul, but then again if that babys soul is part dark what exactly has Heaven to look forward too. If This Antonio guy was really evil, what exactly will Heaven be getting out of this with that babys soul? Will it enhance her dark side if given such a soul, or is she strong enough to fight it? I have to talk to Heaven alone, ater she has fed, and I also need to find out more info on this Brenda Witch and why she is following us, I guess there will be no sleep for me anytime soon.
 
*Carlos and Javiar are on the roof of Javiar's apartment building. It's night, and the sky is filled with stars.*

(Javiar) "It feels good to be close to you again."

(Carlos) "Yes, it feels good for me too."

(Javiar) "What is on your mind?"

(Carlos) "If we are being watched by Brenda, it makes me wonder what her plans are. She can't just be watching us for the fun of it."

(Javiar) "Don't worry yourself. We trained well together, and we'll continue to get ready for whatever happens."

(Carlos) "I know, but after everthing that's happened, I'd like make sure everyone stays well, and alive. Let's get inside, it's beautiful, but dangerous now.....once we deal with what we have to, the night will be safe again."

*Carlos and Javiar go back inside, say good-bye, and Carlos heads home. They are unaware that the whole time, from the cover of the trees, Brenda the witch was watching. What Brenda didn't know was that from a rooftop across the way, Heaven was watching her.*
 
Dona and Alberto were on a date. Dona was taken aback by him. Dona thought to herself "WOW - I hope we end up in bed tonight!!" They had a wonderful time. At the end of the date, they walked over to Alberto's house. He leaned over and kissed Dona and asked...

(Alberto) "Do you want to come in for a drink?"

(Dona) "Sure, why not!!"

Alberto escorts her into the living room and puts on some music.

(Alberto) "Por aqui, sientate - This way, sit down" "What would you like?!"

(Dona) "Some of you -- oops, did I say that out loud, hehehe, anything is fine!"

Alberto did a double take "Well, if it's like that -- here's some of me - Can you handle it?!"

Dona was shocked -- "Come over here, let me show you what I can do!"

Slowly Alberto approaches Dona; he gently caresses her shoulders and kisses her passionately.

(Dona) "Oh, papi!!!"
(Alberto) "Ay mami, vamos al cuarto - let's go to the room!"

* You all know what happens!!!

After their session, Dona and Alberto fall asleep but are rudely awaken by Carlos.

(Dona) "OMG - how embarrassing!!"
(Alberto) Get dressed, I'll call you later"

Dona hurriedly gets dressed and quickly thanks Alberto for the night and passionately kisses him goodbye.

On her way home, she goes over about what happened. Dona has a grin from ear to ear 😀

(Dona) "Ay que hombre, papi-chulo!" "Espero que me llame mas luego"

Dona gets home; takes a shower and awaits her call from Alberto. About an hour passes and she is awoken by the telephone.

(Dona - in a drowsy voice) "Hola, quien es?! Hi, who is it? "

(Alberto) "Hola, es tu papichulo!"

(Dona) "Cual puede ser - hehe! Which could it be?" "Hey sexy man, how you doin?! Did Carlos say anything?!"

(Alberto)"Hehehe -- soy el unico que necesitas, I'm the only one you need!"

(Dona) "Yeah, I'm sure!"

(Alberto) "Sorry about rushing you out pero tu sabes - Carlos anyways - Is it possible to see you later?!"

(Dona) "I know, I was so embarrassed... Hmmmmmmmmm, let me check my calendar to see if I can squeeze you in......yeah, I think I'm free!LOL!!"

(Alberto) "Good -- I'll be there after 7pm - ok?!"

(Dona) "Ok"

(Alberto) " See you there"

(Dona)"Ok, talk to you sexy man" Dona blows him a kiss...

(Alberto) "Adios!"

(Dona) "Adios!"
 
Brenda is amongst the trees spying on one of the chosen Carlos the male slayer. She see's him on the roof top of his apartment with his lover. She's gathering information on possible weaknesses and suddenly senses another presence. She stops and thinks to herself " I gotta get out of here before I am seen." She then gestures and whispers a spell and dissapears from sight. She used a teleportation spell and now she is back at the warehouse. She then walks to her office and sit's down and watches through a window at her crew training intensely for their soon to be battle.
Onji is sparring with Hotstuff. Hotstuff throws a mean left hook but Onji flips back and dodges easily with his speed. Onji then swipes with a short sword towards Hot stuff but her razor sharp and very strong claws breaks his sword. Onji then grabs a few throwing stars from his garb and hurls them at Hot stuff. Hot stuff then takes in a deep breath and then breaths out fire and melts the stars. She then looks to find Onji and he is gone. Suddenly he is above her on the cieling and drops down toward her. She then flies up and clothes line him. He falls back and dissappears into the shadows she cant find him even though she can see in the dark he somehow vanished. She is near a wall and suddenly a bunch of large knives are hurled at her and stab into the wall totally surrounding her. She sees all the knives perfectly aligned around her creating the shape of her body on the wall and she is impressed. They both meet down on the floor and shake hands in respect for each other.
Garrick and Glen are in the Shooting gallery and have shot up a few images of the chosen and even decided to be funny by shooting holes in the shape of a happy face in chest area on the images.
Jaques and Remy are Sword fighting each other intensly. They are both moving around on the ground and through the air fiercely and at some point they stab each other and stop.

(Jaques): Hey you stabbed me?

(Remy): Hey you stabbed me!

(Jaques): Sorry brother!

(Remy): I'm sorry too!

They both look at each other and then nod at the same time and then smile and say to each "Time for a drink!!") They both then leave to get a drink in the storage area of the Warehouse.

Lila and Patch are sparring and patch grabs a flash grenade and drops it near Lila hoping to blind her with the light. Lila closed her eyes and as Patch lunges forward to her with a knife she clocks him one with a vicious right hook. He falls back and drops his knife. He then gets up and wipes the blood from his mouth and says "You draw first blood. Now I won't hold back!"
Lila says "Then don't hold back give me your best shot!" He then suddenly transforms into his transition wolf form and growls and lunges at her again. She then takes a martial arts stance and awaits his attack.

Meanwhile Brenda is looking on and is pleased. She turns her head and looks at a book on her desk. She opens it and see's a photo of her and Angelique when they were friends.Then there is another photo of her and Angelique and a handsome man. She then say's to herself " Why Angelique?! Why!?! Why did he have to love you and not me? He died protecting you. I loved him!!! You will pay Angelique!!!" She then slams the photo book to the floor. She then focuses herself and then begins the spell to keep prying eyes and minds off the warehouse. A cloaking spell. Her crew continues their training and have switched partners.
 
At her apartment, in the not so distant borough of Queens, Aurora De Tiempo (Dawn of time) is trying to make some sense out of all the visions she has been having lately. Pain & suffering, sorrow & death, why is she haunted by these nightmares?

"Dios, por favor me ayuda entiendo estos sueños.", she thinks to herself. (God please help me understand these dreams.)

At that moment she feels a cold chill take over her body & hears a voice in her head:

"El Dios que usted llama para no lo puede ayudar ahora niño. Usted nacía no en luz, pero en la oscuridad. Venga a mí, yo tengo mucho en decirlo. " (The God that you call for can not help you now child. You were born not into light, but into darkness. Come to me, I have much to tell you.)

She recognized that voice, but it was one she had not heard since the tender age of five.

"F-f-father?? No, it can't be!"

And with that she felt an icy hand touch her shoulder, it felt as if death herself had touched her.

"La muerte es para mortales meros mi niño, yo no puedo morir. " (Death is for mere mortals my child, I can not die.)

Aurora tried to run away but a spell was cast upon her, freezing her in place.

"Do not be afraid daughter, turn around. Turn around & look at me"

At that instant she feels her body be turned towards him, she wants to close her eyes but she can not. This thing, this is not the father she remembered. He is pale in complexion, alive but yet he is dead & very strong with his powers. She had read books about his kind, her father is none other than.....
 
Welcome to the story Dayer! 😉 Nice writing but damn! How you gonna leave us like that? 😛

Nice additions everyone! 😉

Sweeeeeeeeetie! LMFAO @ After their session! :lol
 
***dun dun dunnnnnn***

Her father is TOBIAS!

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"I don't, I, I just don't understand. You were, you're..."

Aurora faints in shock.
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(Background)

It is traumatizing enough for a little girl to lose her father. More hurtful to watch your mother get dragged away to the institution after she tried to "excorcise" the "evil vampire curse" out of her only daughter. It hurt to grow up a "freak" in an orphanage & never know what love is.

After leaving the orphange at the age of 15, Aurora visited her mother at the institution. Her mother, though heavily medicated, managed to convey to her that her father, was indeed, a vampire. A powerful vampire as well, not one of those fletchings that do not know how to use theirs powers.

"Beware of your father, he is powerful, he will not...."

And at that moment, Aurora cradled her mothers head in her arms, as she went to sleep for the last time.

Through the years, 15 long years, Aurora spent most of her time studying the the history of vampires. She also dabbled in the occult, but none of that would prepare her for what her father had to say.

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"Despiértese, mi hija, wake up" Tobias says with a sinister smirk on his face.
"All those years of research por nada. You never learned of earthmeld."

"Earth... earthmeld? ¿De qué es este que usted habla?"

Tobias laughs.

"Vampiros son sobrevivientes, hija. Surely you know that from your studies."

Aurora Nods.

"Some, more advanced vampires, have developed an ability to feign death. This is called Earthmeld. It is not a widely known power, as it takes many years to develop, but it is a power that I have mastered!"

With this, Aurora becomes infuriated at this man whom she believes, is an imposter.

"¡Mentiroso, di me la verdad!" she screams.

"Have you ever seen a vampire die?" Tobias asks.

"Their body will seem to dissolve into the ground, sometimes even into thin air. Their will be nothing left but the clothes that they were wearing."

Tobias glances at Aurora & she knows by that look & those mannerisms that this was indeed, not an imposter.

"During the next 48 hours, the vampire slowly pulls itself together, underground. The ground above them will become soft as the earth and dirt are shifted. Finally, after two days, the vampire can begin digging themselves out. The vampire is famished by this experience, and must seek a source of fresh blood within hours of digging themselves out or begin suffering starvation pangs."

Aurora, at this point is completely mortified by this experience but manages to blurt out "¿Por qué vino usted aquí? What is it that you want?"

With that Tobias laughs an evil laugh & says, "mi hija, yo tengo hambre"

(TO BE CONTINUED....)
 
oops! Sorry 😀

Despiértese, mi hija = Wake up, my daughter

por nada = for nothing

De qué es este que usted habla = what are you talking about, what is this that you speak of etc... depending on how you translate it (same sh!t)

Vampiros son sobrevivientes, hija = vampires are survivors, daughter


Mentiroso, di me la verdad = liar, tell me the truth

Por qué vino usted aquí = why did you come here

mi hija, yo tengo hambre = my daughter, I'm hungry
 
*Francisco runs to the burning bus, to see what is going on. He felt that moving prisoners that late in the evening could lead to trouble. He knew that some sort of escape plan would occur. He gets to the scene and sees a few burned up corpses, and some body parts around the place. After a quick assesment, he sees that about half of the prisoners are missing. It is possible that they survived the blast, but there is no way for them to be just gone. They couldn't have recovered in this short amount of time. Other police officers have arrived by now, and they are taking over the situation. Realizing that the scene is in good hands, and since he didn't see anything, Francisco decides to go home. It's time for bed, and he will need his strength about him for this "dinner" he is going to tomorrow. While he is not homophobic, the fact that Carlos ElAmante Delhombre was able to escape from the police station and lead him on a goose chase annoyed him. For Daniella's sake, he will try to put the negative feelings aside. As he walks home, he glances at the abandoned warehouse across the street. He thinks about how much of an eyesore it is, and wishes the town would destroy it.*

*Auroro backs away from her father. She is disgusted by the sight of him. He sees that she backs away out of disgust, but not of fear.*

(Tobias) "Daughter, I said I have come here to feed."

(Auroro) "I heard you the first time. I'm not afraid."

*Auroro pulls back the neckline of her blouse, and reveals a cross. In the presence of Tobias, the cross emits a bright glow that blinds Tobias. He shrieks in pain, and shock.*

(Auroro) "You thought you were so clever. That you would leave Mama and one day come back to claim me. She was wise to you Tobias. She made a pilgramage one year to a city that was being visited by the Pope. She approaced him, and he blessed this cross. She kept it with her until her dying day. Then she passed it to me. It has both the Pope's blessing and Mama's love all over it. You can never claim me. She will not allow it, and neither will I."

*Tobias growls at his daughter, and disappears into the night. Auroro is alone. She thinks about the visions she's been getting. It's hard for her to focus on the visions, due to all the stress. She only knows that they are about people she doesn't know. They are strangers to her, yet somehow, she relates to them. She also has the disadvantage of being new in town, with no one to talk to. She's relied so much on her new friend from work, she doesn't want to bother her again. Suddenly, as if on cue, the phone rings."

(Auroro) "Ola?"

(Daniella) "Hello Auroro, it's Daniella."

(Auroro) "Hi Dani. Are you ok? Do you need me to cover for you at work tomorrow?"

(Daniella) "LOL....no girl. I'm ok. I'm calling to tell you that my father called me today."

(Auroro) "How wonderful for you. We only touched on the subject at work, but I knew that this was important for you. Will you be meeting soon?"

(Daniella) "Yes. We are going to Chili's tomorrow night for dinner. We are meeting at 7. Why don't you stop by?"

(Auroro) "Isn't this your chance to get to know each other?"

(Daniella) "So come over at 8. Dinner will be finished by then, and we'll be having drinks and desert. Besides, if things don't go well, we may need a diversion."

(Auroro) "Ok then......I'll see you at 8!"

*Back in the center of town, in the "eyesore" abandoned warehouse, is the group of "anti-chosen" who are preparing to do battle with the "chosen" ones. Garrick, Glen, and Lila (the human membes of the "anit chosen) have left for the night. Brenda is in a back room with Patch, Hot Stuff, Onji, Jaques, and Remy. Chained to the walls are escaped convicts that were in the bus.*

(Brenda) "My fellow creatures of the night, we have our three human team mates to thank for this. They went out and caused a diversion, and the explosion. They bought us this."

*Brenda waves her hands at the 15 convicts who are attached to the walls. They look at the monsters, knowing there is no escape.*

(Onji) "So what is this?"

(Brenda) "For the next few days, our meals.......dig in......."
 
it was almost seven o'clock and i was going to give dona a call but before anything i wanted to take care of some stuff first like take a quick shower, brush my teeth, get dressed and look good almost finishing alberto sees carlos

(alberto)yo carlos look.......tell me what you think?

carlos sees alberto's gear and to his amazement says...

(carlos)ahhhhh shiiiiiittttttt,look out john travolta here comes my cousin alberto el chulo watch out ladies?(laughing out loud).

(alberto)so you like it man do you think i should put on something else?

(carlos)yeah man you look nice, where did you buy this nice shirt? and look at those pants wow!!! and those shoes oh god let me stop talking.

(alberto)saying with a soave voice.....well you know what can i say hehe.

(carlos)so wait dont tell me you gonna go see dona huh?

(alberto)yeah man i gotta call her in a few and see if we can hook up for tonight.

(carlos)you lady killer you go do your thing cuz, remember do it for the guys.

(alberto)ohh you know i am bro you know el chulo gotta do his thang.

so alberto picks up the phone dials dona # hears the dial tone

(alberto)hello dona?

(dona)yeah whos this?

(alberto)its me peewee herman(does the peewee herman laugh).

(dona)peewee herman????...haha yeah right, i know who it is?

(alberto)who?

(dona)its you alberto you dummy(laughing).

(alberto)hahah whats up girl? what you doing?

(dona)nothing just here listening to some music...why?

(alberto)nah just asking....um i was gonna ask you if i can cummmmmmm over?

(dona)oh i know you be cuming but i hope that it wont be soon though(giggling).

(alberto)oh reallyyyyyyy?

(dona)yeah i hope we can continue where we left off from last time.

(alberto)well dont worry it be that and more hehe so what are you wearing now?

(dona)well what do you want me to wear?

(alberto)well i would like if you can put on something sexy you know?

(dona)ok what about if i just wait for you with just my thong on?

(alberto)hMmMmMmMm even better babe sounds good.

(dona)ok then so are you gonna come now or what?

(alberto)i'll be there in 15 minutes.

(dona)ok honey im gonna wait for you dont be late?

(alberto)ok i wont i'll see you soon.

(dona)ok then see you in a few, bye!

(alberto)ok bye!

15 minutes later arriving at dona's place you hear KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK dona open's the door with this red thong on and alberto eyes pop out as well as his manly friend and the both close the door behind them holding each other slobbering on each other's lips grabbing body parts from head to toes and.....AND........well you know how the rest goes :lol
 
Brenda sits in her chair in her office and has just witnessed the feeding off of one of the victims and the convict is dying. Jaques, Remy, Hotstuff and Onji look satisfied. Jaques turns towards Brenda and says...

(Jaques): Should we turn him?

(Brenda): No. He was a monster that was worse than some of the creatures of the night. Turning him would be bad because he wouldn't be loyal. He is too greedy and would want to do his own thing. I did extrapolate psychically some useful information on the criminal underworld from his mind though. Turns out he has some mobster friends that would make excellent warrior vampires for us and my employer. The rest of the mob would share our convict friend's fate and be placed in our large storage room below to hold till we need them."

(Remy): Huh what are we doing to the rest of those human mobsters that we don't change into vampires?

(Onji and Hotstuff stand there looking puzzled and await Brenda's answer. Brenda smirks and stands up and walks closer to them and says..)

(Brenda): Hmm have you ever heard of an old movie called Night of the living dead?

(Onji silent underneath his ninja mask nods and is pleased. Hotstuff says "Alright!!!!!" and high fives Jaques and Remy and they are all quite pleased.)

(Hot stuff): You know Brenda I am glad I joined up with you and this crew!! You are awesome and you really know how to throw a wicked party!!! You go girl!!!

(Brenda): Thanks!! Yeah I'm awesome!! Anyways...(Brenda gestures and a map appears in her hand.)

(Brenda): Here is the mob address I want you guys to go make an offer they can't refuse. We have a few more days and this is a battle we must win so my employer can do his thing. Make me proud!!

The supernatural half of the Anti-chosen nod to their leader and say "Yes mam!" They then leave carefully as the human half return. Brenda then looks at the returning crew and speaks to them.

(Brenda): Good job on the convicts! The press will probably think there was terrorism or someone getting back at the convicts for other reasons. You have some more work to do before resting. Garrick and Glen your next assignment is to prepare the sub storage room for alot of visiters who will stay for a bit. Make sure they cannot escape unless I let them loose. Make sure there is strong reinforcement on that steel door Understood?

(Garrick and Glen): Yes mam!

(Brenda): Lila I want you on guard duty. Your martial arts combat skills and mystically enhanced strength and durability will definately deter anyone. Now that I think about it you are pretty much a created slayer. You were an excellent choice!!
Oooh I am soooo good I amaze myself sometimes!!!
(Brenda think's to herself take that Angelique!!)
 
Thanks Cool Al, really cool! Again big applause to all the writers! OMG I just recently realised Tobias is actually back and it's not a flash back! Jaques and Remy will be overjoyed to find out that their master lives!! Heh heh heh keep up the great work everyone!!
 
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