Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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HEY! It's not OVER! The second story will be starting shortly!

Carlos has a kid

X man has twins

Marisol got her man

and Angelique is off somewhere :lol :lol :lol
 
okay but we left ot alot of open ended story lines..still unresolved so we fade to black with maybe a sequel????im not writing anymore by myself so..lets put together the next novella "mujerII"..coming to a theater near you..lol
 
Krystal said:
HEY! It's not OVER! The second story will be starting shortly!

Carlos has a kid

X man has twins

Marisol got her man

and Angelique is off somewhere :lol :lol :lol
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In that case...
 
[size=+2]Somewhere In Colorado[/size]

1:20AM

*The rain pours heavely*
 

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Woman: U u..I must get to th the h hospi (She falls to the ground..exhausted)

*Out of nowhere she is seen*

Civilian: Hey lady are you okay? OH MY GODDD!!! You are giving birth! HELP!! SOMEONE HELP!!! (Runs to find help)

*A night of cry...a cry for help. Pretty soon...cries of help will be heard by the entire world*

Woman: *uughghhh* What do...I h hav have inside of meeee!

Woman: HMPHHH...HMPPHHHHH MMM!!!

*Uncontrollable...she gives birth...moments later...she dies. What is to make of this woman...and what is to make of her child. Her son.*
 

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~The Son Of The Dark Angel~

"Shall a trumpet be blown in the city, and the people not be afraid? shall there be evil in a city, and the LORD hath not done it?" (Amos 3:6)
 

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okay ant thats it i want you to go seek therapy as soon as posible..you need medication..lol
 
EEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Dayum. Carlos isn't even recovered from the first battle, now I gotta deal with this???? LOL!!!!!!
 
LMFAOOOOOOOOOO its all in love chuck my dear!

THIS STORY IS NOWHERE NEAR OVER!

cmon Tae u hafta contribute.....it's ur part of the story that kept us all at the edge of our seats too!
 
THE STORY TOOK A TURN WHEN WE GOT THE
MAFIA AND VAMPIRES AND SUPERNATURAL POWERS. THE STORY IS FAR FROM OVER,. WE
STILL HAVE A LOVESTORY, CARLOS-DAUGHTER, X-MANS TWINS AND TAINA IS PREGNANT.
WE CAN START THE SEQUAL WITH THESE PLOTS IN MIND AND GO FROM THERE. THIS
TIME I WANT SOME SERIOUS LOVE SCENES NOT GRAPHIC OF COURSE. THE KILLING CAN
CONTINUE. SHIT WE EVEN FORGOT THAT RICO AND TAINA GOT SOME UNFINISHED
BUSINESS. AND WE NEED A STRING OF NEW CHARACTERS TO JOIN IN TOO. AND LETS
NOT KILL THE STORY. ANGELIQUE MUST BE A BIG PART OF THE STORY BECAUSE SHE
NEEDS TO BE TAINA AND MARISOLS TEACHER SO THAT THEY CAN LEARN HOW TO HANDLE
THEIR POWERS AND FULLY UNDERSTAND THEM. DANIELLA NEEDS TO FIND A LOVER TOO.
WHAT SHALL WE CALL HIM?
 
Ummm okay...someone's gonna have to help Angelique out here cuz *I* know nothing about powers! ROFLMAO! My imagination ain't that universal! :stoned
 
nessa's302 said:
DANIELLA GOES INTO HER MOTHERS ROOM AND FINDS A DIARY.

CARLOS AMANTE DE LOS HOMBRES DAUGHTER. MUSIC PLAYS...................
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Who is playing the part of her mother????

Oh, and by the way, her mother (not the person who is playing her) must be very very butch!
 
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taezee lmao :lol

Ya guys jumped out of your chairs right? 😛

ChuckD LMAOOOO!!! :lol

-antonio
 
MARISOL TELLS RODOLFO
~STOP THE CAR! QUE QUIERE ESTE PENDEJO?~
RODOLFO: MARI WE DON'T HAVE TO STOP. ONE ENCOUNTER IS ENOUGH
MARISOL: SO WHAT?! I AIN'T THE ONE TO BE PLAYED WITH.
FRANCISCO GETS OUT THE CAR AND MARISOL GETS OUT RODOLFO'S CAR
FRANCISCO: MARISOL THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU. GET OUT THE WAY.
MARISOL: THE HELL IT DOESN'T WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT?
FRANCISCO: MARISOL PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHERE THAT PENDEJO CARLOS IS AT!
MARISOL: HE IS OFF WITH HIS LOVER. YOU KNOW GETTIN BUSY. WHY ARE YOU
JEOLOUS?
FRANCISCO: WHO IS HE WITH? THAT MUTHER FUKER HAS TO PAY FOR WHAT HE DID TO MY SISTER.
RODOLFO: WHAT? WHO? WHATS GOIN ON WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT
FRANCISCO: CARLOS THAT BASTARD RAPED MY SISTER. AND YOU HAD THE NERVES TO ACCUSE HER OF CHEATING ON YOU
RODOLFO: CARLOS MR AMANTE DE LOS HOMBRES (LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY) IS THAT WHAT SHE TOLD YOU? IT WAS MY FRIEND CARLOS AND HE DIED 3 MONTHS AGO IN A MOTORCYCLE ACCIDENT. WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE RAPED HER?
FRANCISCO: HE DIED? FUK!!!!!!!!! YES THATS WHAT I MEANT HE RAPED HER. SHE SAID THAT SHE HAD GOTTEN PREGNANT AND SHE LOST THAT BABY.
RODOLFO: SO SHE TELLS ME THAT IT'S MINE AND DOESN'T TELL ME THE TRUTH WHY ALL THE LIES? SHE COULD HAVE TOLD ME AND I WOULD HAVE KILLED THAT SON OF A B*TCH MY SELF!
MARISOL BACKS AWAY WHAT DOES THIS MEAN HE WILL GO BACK TO HER?
FRANCISCO: SHE SAID SHE NEVER TOLD YOU THE TRUTH BECAUSE WHEN YOU WALKED IN IT LOOKED OTHERWISE.
RODOLFO: I AM SORRY THAT IT HAPPENED TO HER, BUT SHE COULD HAVE TOLD ME THE TRUTH. NOT MAKE ME BELIEVE THAT SHE HAD DONE SOMETHING WRONG.
FRANCISCO: SHE STILL HAS FEELINGS FOR YOU. SHE STILL WANTS TO BE WITH YOU.
RODOLFO: AS THAT MAY BE THE TRUTH MY HEART BELONGS TO MARISOL NOW. I ONCE HAD LOVED YOUR SISTER TOO. IF SHE WOULD HAVE TOLD ME THE TRUTH WHO KNOWS. BUT THAT IS IN THE PAST. MY FUTURE IS WITH MARISOL. I CAN'T BE BLAMED FOR WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN US.
FRANCISCO: SO YOU ARE TELLING ME THAT YOU WON'T EVEN CONSIDER GIVING HER ANOTHER CHANCE YOU JUST MET MARISOL. HOW YOU LOVE HER SO MUCH IN SO LITTLE TIME.
RODOLFO: YOU CAN NOT CONTROL THE WHAT THE HEART FEELS. I CAN'T EXPLAIN IT BUT I NEVER FELT LIKE THIS FOR ANY ONE NOT EVEN DANIELLA. SHE HAS AWAKEN SOMETHING IN ME THAT NO ONE HAD EVER BEEN ABLE TO DO. I'M SORRY BUT THATS HOW I FEEL.
FRANCISCO: SO YOU ARE TELLING ME THAT YOU NEVER LOVED DANIELLA? THAT IT WAS ALL A LIE?
RODOLFO: NO I LOVED HER JUST NOT THE SAME WAY. DANIELLA WAS SPECIAL TO ME AT ONE TIME. I CAN'T EXPLAIN IT. BUT SO MUCH HURT AND PAIN AND NOW THIS? I'M SORRY BUT I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO TRY TO FEEL WHAT WAS THERE BEFORE. THE PAST IS THE PAST. I WISH HER WELL. SHE TOO WILL FIND SOMEONE WHO WILL LOVE HER THE WAY I LOVE MARISOL.
FRANCISCO UNABLE TO SAY ANYTHING BACK GETS IN HIS CAR AND SPEEDS OFF.
MARISOL HUGS RODOLFO WITH ALL HER MIGHT. RODOLFO RETURNS THE HUG WITH A KISS THAT PUTS MARISOL ON CLOUD 9.
MARISOL: WHY IS IT THAT YOU MAKE ME FEEL THIS WAY? IT'S LIKE I CAN'T BE AWAY FROM YOU EVEN FOR A MINUTE. IS THIS WHAT REAL LOVE IS?
RODOLFO: I THOUGHT IT WAS JUST ME. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH IT HURTS HERE ~TAKES HER HAND AND PUTS IT ON HIS CHEST WHERE HIS HEART IS.~
MARISOL: I THOUGH THAT WHEN FRANCISCO TOLD YOU WHAT HAPPENED TO DANEILLA YOU WOULD HAVE REGRETS ABOUT US.
RODOLFO: NO NEVER. SHE IS IN THE PAST. I CAN NOT TRY TO RECAPTURE WHAT WAS BETWEEN HER AND ME. WHAT I FEEL FOR YOU IS SO MUCH STRONGER. YOU ARE MY EARTH THE AIR THAT I BREATH.
MARISOL: I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
THEY KISS EACH OTHER WITH A PASSION THAT CAN BURN DOWN A WHOLE TOWN.
 
As Fransisco was driving he was thinking to himself " What the heck is going on. I need to get right. Start doing my job the right way. I can't be a bad cop anymore." Fransisco stops at a stop light and sees an elderly lady being held up in front of a bodega called "Me Pica Aqui" by two women. Fransisco quickly get s out the car and runs toward them. The two women begin to run in seperate directions. Fransisco went after the one that had high heels. When he catches up to her and apprehends her he recognizes who it is. It was Carlos ex from back in da disco days Barbara La Santera. Fransisco cuffs Barbara and gets his cell and dials the station for a patrol car to pick her up. So Barbara! Fransisco says, Is this your new outfit style? You still be fooling the guys that you are really a woman when you really have 2 balls and a bat swing batta batta swing. Barbra starts to laugh and Fransisco notices fangs in her mouth and says what the F*&%? Barbra then says to Fransisco, You haven't even seen the begininng.
The patrol car arrives picks up Barbra and takes her to the station. Ambualnce arrives for the elderly lady but the paramedics pronounced her dead and pointed at her neck to Fransisco and saw to bite marks like a vampire leaves behind. Fransisco runs to his car and drives after the patrol car before it was too late..........................................
 
Ok Ok Ok Ok!!!!!


I need help, cause I can't follow along what the hell is happening!!!!



Lamatrix said:

FRANCISCO: MARISOL PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHERE THAT PENDEJO CARLOS IS AT!
MARISOL: HE IS OFF WITH HIS LOVER. YOU KNOW GETTIN BUSY. WHY ARE YOU
JEOLOUS?
FRANCISCO: WHO IS HE WITH? THAT MUTHER FUKER HAS TO PAY FOR WHAT HE DID TO MY SISTER.
RODOLFO: WHAT? WHO? WHATS GOIN ON WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT
FRANCISCO: CARLOS THAT BASTARD RAPED MY SISTER. AND YOU HAD THE NERVES TO ACCUSE HER OF CHEATING ON YOU
RODOLFO: CARLOS MR AMANTE DE LOS HOMBRES (LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY) IS THAT WHAT SHE TOLD YOU? IT WAS MY FRIEND CARLOS AND HE DIED 3 MONTHS AGO IN A MOTORCYCLE ACCIDENT. WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE RAPED HER?
FRANCISCO: HE DIED? FUK!!!!!!!!!
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Ok so was this me? Someone said that there was another Carlos that raped someone in the story but between that Carlos getting someone pregnant, and my Carlos getting Daniella's mother pregnant, I have no clue???????

I propose that the impostor Carlos now be called Ricarrdo!!!!


Originally posted by EL_BORICUA_72

It was Carlos ex from back in da disco days Barbara La Santera. Fransisco cuffs Barbara and gets his cell and dials the station for a patrol car to pick her up. So Barbara! Fransisco says, Is this your new outfit style? You still be fooling the guys that you are really a woman when you really have 2 balls and a bat swing batta batta swing.
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Ok, now what about this???????? Is this supposed to be an ex of mine? The only woman Carlos has slept with is Daniella's mother, and now this says that it was really a man, so how the hell did Daniella show up in the first place?????????? :confused

Ya know, I don't know what's wrong with me, but I had no problem following the story before.....help? My brain-cells must be dying!
 
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