Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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Rico grab's a bag full of weapons from his SUV. It is near dark.
He see's another who has arrived. A shadowy mystery man. Rico senses this man is no normal man and smirks to himself with alittle satisfaction knowing there is another powerful being entering the fray. "This man can definately help but I definately want a shot at Antonio!!" Rico then looks to the sky and hope's that his little gargoyle friend Henry arrives soon so that he can help protect Taina from harm.
Rico walks to the house. He is wearing some medieval armor plating under his clothes. He is garbed in a long flowing leather jacket and leather pants and boot's. On each of his arms he has metal medieval arm bands. He has a sword in one hand and a bag of weapons hanging over his shoulder and in his other hand a blessed Shaman's Tomahawk axe.
Rico steps inside the house and feels a mystic barrier flicker behind him. He knows it's to keep the fight inside and it is similar to the protection spell at his home. He see's his prey Antonio. Antonio has done some considerate damage in the Countessa's home. Rico see's no sign of the Countessa. He closes his eyes briefly and senses a faint trace of her presence still lingering. He can also hear police sirens at a distance.
He then takes a firm grasp of his sword and suddenly hears a fluttering sound that sounds like wings through a window. Henry is here he thinks to himself. He then hopes his little gargoyle friend can help protect Taina. He also feel's a slight warm surge on his chest. It's the amulet that he threw to the ground hours ago in anger to only pick up again. When the time is right he won't need it anymore he thinks to himself. He will save Taina at all cost's.
Rico steps into the fray ready to do battle. He calls out to his prey. "Antonio!!" "Demon!!" "Face me demon!!" Do you realize all the suffering you have caused all the damage!! What do you have to say for yourself? "I can't help it." Antonio say's laughing. "What?" Rico is puzzled. "It's not so easy... It's not so easy with this Devil in my heart!!" Ha ha ha ha Antonio laughs outloud.
Rico then responds "Yeah funny. Heard that one before." "This time you won't get me by surprise instead I have a few surprises for you demonio!! Rico then rushes towards his prey and feels the hunger of the wolf stirring within him a bloodlust is filling him and his heart is racing and there is a rush of adrenaline and the beast want's out. The battle has begun!!
 
Heh heh heh Thanks Krystal!! Yeah the Antonio character makes me think of that song and i just had to put that in. I couldn't resist!!😛 I really like all the different points of view and the excellent writing everyone is doing!! Applause and shoutouts to everyone!!:yeey
 
*Carlos picks himself off the ground and looks around he sees his friend Rico there, suited up. "Strange," thinks Carlos, "he's not letting his wolf form out yet. I wonder why." Rico charges at Evil Antonio and his second minion starts the fight. A second figure runs into the house and enters the room. It is X-Man. Carlos and X-man approach and recognize each other. They smirk at each other, now realizing that after all the chasing and tricking, they are on the same side.*

(Carlos) "You are a difficult man to lose in a chase."

(X-Man) "and you are one of the most difficult to trail. Where were you those days I couldn't find you?"

(Carlos) "Mantengo mi es el secreto de espacios que esconde." (I keep my hiding spaces secret.) Never know when you will need them."

*Suddenly, a flash of light distracts the men. Rico is in a fierce battle with the second dark angel, and he is winning. Rico grabs the demon by the neck and forces it down. Once on the ground, Rico snaps its neck, and it disappears in a cloud of dust. Antonio smirks at them.*

(Carlos) "Rico, come to me now."

*Rico comes over, keeping an eye on Evil Antonio. Carlos begins to fill them in.*

(Carlos) "Antonio's little helper killed Teresa. Estacóla en el corazón (Staked her in the heart). She was trying to protect Taina and her unborn baby."

(X-Man) "Where's Taina now?"

(Carlos) "In the basement with Javiar, (my main man) and Marisol, who Teresa revealed was Taina's twin sister just before the battle happened. Angelique has cast a spell trapping Antonio in this house. He is not yet a dark angel, but can become one by killing the woman who will give birth to his child, which is Taina. We can remove the evil out of him by having him WILLINGLY eat a consecreated host. If he refuses, we just kill him."

*Looking down on all of them is Evil Antonio. He thinks, "Let them plot and plan. I've become so powerful that they can't stop me. I'll even let them plan from a distance, and not try to learn their plans. It will crush them to see how much stronger than them I am."

(Rico) "Is Taina ok?"

(Carlos) "She's very emotionally unstable right now. She's just found out she's part vampire, that she is pregnant, that Marisol is her sister, and watched her mother be killed. Of course she's not alright. Evil Antonio thinks to convert her to evil and make her love him. She would never love him now. His partner killed Teresa."

(Rico-thinking to himself) "good. That will leave me no opposition with Taina."

*While the three men discuss plans, Evil Antonio sees movement out of the corner of his eye. It is Taina, coming up from the basement, thinking the battle is over. He is overcome with conflicting emotions to kill her or love her. Before anyone can move, he flies to her side.*

(Evil Antonio) "Taina, come with me. I can make you my evil queen, and together, we can make Hell on Earth. I feel even more alive when I'm with you."


"Bring Me To Life"
Evanescence

how can you see into my eyes like open doors
leading you down into my core where i've become so numb
without a soul, my spirit sleeping somewhere cold
until you find it there and lead it back home

(Wake me up) wake me up inside
(I cant' wake up) wake me up inside
(Save me) call my name and save me from the dark
bid my blood to run, before i come undone
save me from the nothing i've become

now that i know what i'm without
you can't just leave me
breathe into me and make me real
bring me to life

(wake me up) wake me up inside
(I can't wake up)wake me up inside
(Save me) call my name and save me from the dark
bid my blood to run, before i come undone
save me from the nothing i've become
bring me to life

frozen inside without your touch without your love darling
only you are the life among the dead

(all this time i can't believe i couldn't see
kept in the dark but you were there in front of me)
i've been sleeping a thousand years it seems
got to open my eyes to everything
(without a thought without a voice without a soul
don't let me die here, there must be something more)
bring me to life

(wake me up) wake me up inside
(I can't wake up)wake me up inside
(Save me) call my name and save me from the dark
bid my blood to run, before i come undone
save me from the nothing i've become
bring me to life
bring me to life
 
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OMGGGGGGGGGGGG! LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO with Evanescence's song! Chuck your so creative..LOLOLOL..I love the whole idea with the lyrics..keep it up!
 
*Carlos, X-Man, and Rico turn to see Evil Antonio at Taina's side. She's confused and vunerable. Remembering that Evil Antonio needs to sacrifice her to obtain the total evil he seems to want,they start to advance. X-Man points his weapon, Carlos prepares to lunge, and Rico starts to morph into a half man, half wolf best. Evil Antonio turns and places Taina in front of him, using her as a human shield.*

(Evil Antonio) "if you come any closer, I'll kill her now, and get my full power! You'll never be able to stop me!"

(Rico) "Taina, Do you see what he's like???? He swears to love you, then swears to kill you!"

(Evil Antonio) "you shut the phuk up, mongre!"

(Carlos) "I know the real you Antonio......this is not what you want.....please, take the host from me and eat it. It will end everything."

*The stand off is at a stand still, with neither side gaining any ground. Suddenly, Javiar and Marisol come up from the basement. They charge Evil Antonio from behind and he falls, letting go of Taina. Marisol grabs her twin and they run for the basement. Before Javiar can move, Evil Antonio grabs him and slams him to the wall knocking him unconscious and breaking several bones.*

(Carlos) "Javiar!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

(Evil Antonio) "Maricon! Go say goodbye to your little boy toy!"

*As Carlos runs to Javiar's side, X-Man makes his move. He grabs his most powerful gun and points it right at his heart. He shoots 5 times, only to see Evil Antonio feel no effects. X-Man reaches into his bag and grabs a small home-made explosive. He pulls the trigger and throws it at Evil Antonio, with no effects. What does it take to kill a dark angel??????*

(Carlos) "Javair, can you hear me???"

(Javiar) "I told you I would....be...at your side.....tonight...."

(Carlos) "Don't speak Javiar, save your strength......"

(Angelique) "Don't worry Carlos. He's in good hands."

*Angelique begins to use her healing powers, and her hands start to glow, healing the vast wounds that were inflicted by Evil Antonio.*

(Angelique) "Go back to the battle, you are needed there. Let me work here!"

*Carlos turns to see X-man charge at the dark angel. As a half-breed, he has more strength than an average human. X-man leaps to Antonio and knocks him back. He grabs Antonio and lifts him up to throw him. Antonio lands on his feet, and swings X-man by his arm and throws him through the door of the room. Rico stands back, letting his full wolf strength grow. Carlos seizes the oportunity to keep Evil Antonio busy. He rushes forward and lets Antiono grab him. Antonio grabs Carlos by the waist, in an effort to snap his backbone, Carlos then grabs Antonio's neck, catching Antonio by surprise with the two consecrated hosts in his gloves. They burn and sear Antonio's skin, and he screams in pain. Antonio tries to leave the house, but is bounced back in, due to Angelique's spell. Antonio grabs Carlos and backhands him, punches him, and kicks him, and Carlos drops to the ground.*

(Evil Antonio) "you're making me tired, but your making me mad!"

*Rico finally makes his move. With the speed and strength of a wolf, he leaps at Antonio. Antonio grabs Rico, but Rico lashes out with his claws. He slashes wounds to Antonio's neck and chest. Antonio shoots an energy bolt and hits Rico at close range. Rico howls in pain, but lands on all fours and prepares to charge.*

(Carlos-to X-man) "Double Team?"

(X-man) "Double Team!"

*X-man charges Antonio and leaps at his neck, while Carlos takes out his legs. Carlos reaches through one of the tears that Rico made on Antonio's shirt, and presses the consecrated host into Antonio's chest. The Dark Angel screams as X-man begins to beat Antonio's head and face over and over. Antonio explodes in a fit of rage and pain and sends out a pulse of energy, throwing Carlos and X-man off of him.*

*Taina and Marisol see that they are not safe in the basement, and decide to leave. They run from the doorway, but Antonio sees them.*

(Evil Antonio) "If I can not have you, then no one can!!!!!!!!"

*Evil Antonio shoots a bolt of lightning directly at Taina, but Rico jumps into it's path and takes the blow. He screams in pain and the smell of burned hair fills the room. As Taina runs, she realizes that Rico was willing to die for her, while Antonio was willing to kill her. Carlos sadly realizes that his friend may be long gone by now, and is ready to kill Antonio. He pulls out one of his host-tipped arrows and aims it directly at Evil Antonio. He shoots and waits, but Antonio grabs the arrow mid flight and throws it by hand, striking X-Man in the right shoulder. While not a deadly blow, because X-man is half vampire, the host burns and causes quite a large amount of pain. He breaks the arrow out of his shoulder and let's the healing process begin. Carlos, Rico, and X-Man all stand together, facing Antonio, while Antonio stands sneering at them. He's weaker now, but so are they, and it is only a matter of time before one side breaks. Rico and X-man would be more than happy to see Antonio die, but Carlos prays inside for Antonio to come to his senses and take the host. He remembers all the fun times, and all the good Antonio has done, and what he is capable of.*

(Carlos-to himself) "please, my friend, end this, and ask for the host."


"Jumper"
Third Eye Blind

I wish you would step back From that ledge my friend
You could cut ties with all the lies That you've been living in
And if you do not want to see me again
I would understand, I would understand

The angry boy a bit too insane
Icing over a secret pain
You know you don't belong
You're the first to fight
You're way too loud
You're the flash of light on a burial shroud
I know something's wrong
Well everyone I know has got a reason
To say put the past away

I wish you would step back From that ledge my friend
You could cut ties with all the lies That you've been living in
And if you do not want to see me again
I would understand, I would understand

Well he's on the table and he's gone to code
And I do not think anyone knows
What they're doing here
And your friends have left you
You've been dismissed
I never thought it would come to this
And I, I want you to know
Everyone's got to face down the demons
Maybe today
You could put the past away

I wish you would step back from That ledge my friend
You could cut ties with all the lies That you've been living in
And if you do not want to see me again
I would understand, I would understand
I would understand, I would understand
I would understand, I would understand
Can you put the past away

I wish you would step back from That ledge my friend
You could cut ties with all the lies That you've been living in
And if you do not want to see me again
I would understand, I would understand
 
*Off story comment*

I have a semi ending written up. It ties up some stuff, but only stuff that dealt with the Teresa Xman Taina story. Stuff with Marisol and Roldolfo and other lines are not complete. I don't want to just post it, because I've done the last few posts, and I want other peeps with other ideas to post them before I just assume it's ok to end the story. If anyone has ideas, write them in!
 
ive been very busy with work when i return this evening chuck..everybody ill finally go into the x man teresa story🙂
 
Woooo Novela like a mutha.... Dang K I think you have some competition for-real... And the LLI Emmy go's to>>>>>>> Drum Roll lol
 
Taina and her sister are hiding again in another part of the house. Both sisters hold each other for comfort on the hell that has become their lives. They would not live a normal life ever again. Those days seem so far away now as tears flow from their eyes. Will this horrible nightmare end? Will their tears of sorrow turn to tears of joy they think? Taina closes her eyes and suddenly feels a familiar presence. She could smell her mothers favorite perfume in the air. She hears a voice inside her head.

Teresa: My daughter I am sorry for what has happened to your life! I am sorry for everything! Although I cannot be with you physically, I am with you! Please be strong because very soon that strength you have deep inside will save you and your child! Tenga fuerza mi hija!! I love you my daughter!!

Taina: Gracias mama! I needed that! I love you too!

Taina tears stop and she feels a momentary peace. She wonders if she will make it and then suddenly a dark shadow passes through the floor and begins to materialize. It's a Dark Angel minion he moves forward to try and grab the girls. Taina looks him straight in the face never moving while her sister is terrified. Then out of the shadows a small winged creature appears with a scepter shaped talisman that begins to glow and the creature hurls himself at the Dark Angel and they fight. The creature is a gargoyle that Rico had sent to protect her. The two creatures fight and as the gargoyle gets enraged the talisman glows more and he plunges the talisman into the heart of the dark being making him vanish. Henry the gargoyle is hurt. The small creature did his best to protect Taina. Taina feels sad for her little guardian and hopes that he survives. The gargoyle then tosses the talisman to Taina. it rolls over toward her and touches near her feet. He tells her his name is Henry and he was sent by Rico to protect her.

Henry: Take this talisman for it will amplify or fully awaken your inner strength and power. Use it to protect yourself! I will try my best to continue to aid you as best as this injured ...gargoyle... can.

Henry slips into unconciousness from the pain of his injuries.
Taina and her sister look at the silver and jeweled Talisman and as they look deep inside the jewels it begins to glow and a warm sensation begins to flow within them and they feel a charge of strength begin to rise within. What will they do now?
 
Meanwhile the battle rages on with our three injured heroes.
They stand facing each other and no side is giving in. Angelique heals Javiar as best she could and drag's his unconcious body to another area of the house that is far from the battle scene. She hopes that the tide of battle will change for the better soon so that this nightmare ends.

Antonio: "I told you, you will not stop me!!" You can hurt me all you can but I'm still here you pathetic loser's!!!

X-Man: "Pathetic?" X-man gave him the finger and then quickly grabs from his jacket a 44 magnum pistol and pop's a few rounds at Antonio's head. The bullets had been soaked in holy water and blessed wine. "Take that a*****e!!" X-Man says as he draws a Samurai sword from a sheath built in to his jacket.
Antonio is hurt by the bullets but there is no fatal injuries.

Antonio: "You will pay for that one halfbreed!!When I ascend to my most powerful form I will take you appart and feed on your heart!!

At that moment Rico speaks to Carlos. and it is very difficult for him because the moon has risen to it's zenith position and his human part is struggling to hold back his beast half! His strength is rising further still and some of his injuries have healed.

Rico: "Carlos take this Tomahawk axe. It was blessed by my Shaman grandfather and I had it blessed again by the elders of my mothers tribe recently. This axe should be able to hurt him.
I cannot weild it properly for my hands are more canine now and my humanity control is slipping I am doing my best to stick with the plan but my original intention was to make that demon pay! I was going to allow the beast within free reign to tear him apart as he deserves!!" "Arrrooooooo!!!!!!" Rico howls as he steps closer and closer to becoming a wolf that just wants to fulfill it's bloodlust and pounce and kill its prey.

As this is taking place there are sirens and police and people crowding outside the house. Dona lengua larga is and others are trying to see what is going on and causing all this ruckus in there neighborhood. At that same moment Antonio senses all the people outside and closes his eyes. He breathes in deeply and opens his eyes and lets out a growl that shakes the house. His eyes glow and sparks from his eyes reach out onto the streets where the crowd has gathered. The sparks begin to hit inanimate objects like statues and regular structures like cars and metal abstract art pieces that were decorating the area. The objects become demonised and come to unholy life and begin to terrorise the people. They scream as they run for safety but other heroes arrive to help. Antonio begins to laugh at the terror he has unleashed!
 
At the central park zoo...............................

Fransisco is knocked out in a dumpster with blood all over him. As he starts to waken he aches all over his body. His left eye is swollen shut a busted lip and bloody nose. He makes an attempt to climb out of the dumpster but with all the pain he falls back in. After a few moments pass by he finally makes it out of the dumpster. Barely walking he walks towards a phone booth and dials headquarters and barely gets his words out "I I I na na na need h h h help!" Fransisco passes out on the floor.................................
 
~MARISOL IS TOO ENRAGED TO SPEAK. SHE JUST FOUND OUT THAT TITI THERESA WAS HER MOTHER AND THIS EVIL BASTARD JUST KILLED HER TOO. IN AN INSTANT AFTER GETTING TAINA TO A SAFE HAVEN SHE RETURNS TO THE SCENE. FULL OF GRIEF AND ANGER MORE ANGER THAN ANY THING SHE BEGINS TO TREMBLE AROUND HER THE WINDS ARE PICKING UP. SHE WALKS TO THE SPOT WHERE HER MOTHER THERESA WAS KILLED. HER VOICE IN A AN AWFUL SCREAM THAT CAN POP THE EAR DRUMS OF ANY ONE~ 'YOU BASTARD YOU CAN NOT KILL MY MOTHER AND GET AWAY NO F*CKIN WAY!' ~ BEYOND HER CONTROL AND UNDERSTANDING SHE STARTS TO POINT TO OBJECTS AND THEY LEVATATE SHE THROWS THEM AT ANTONIO~ 'YOU'LL DIE TONITE. I PROMISE YOU! YOU WILL DIE TONITE!
~ANTONIO FIGHTING THE BEAST TURNS TO LATE TO SEE A CAR COMING AT HIM FROM THE AIR. IT HITS HIM PINNING HIM TO THE WALL. HE PICKS UP THE CAR BEWILDERED. WHAT THE HELL IS SHE? HE TRIES TO COME AT HER BUT SHE IS ABLE TO STOP HIM IN MID AIR (LIKE THE MATRIX 😉 )
YOU CAN'T TOUCH ME EVER DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND? THEN PROCEEDS TO THROW HIM SENDING HIM CRASHING AGAINST THE WALL. THE BEAST NOT FULLY UNDERSTANDING THAT MARISOL IS NOT AGAINST HIM TRIES TO COME AT MARISOL FOR INTERFERING IN HIS FIGHT~ SHE PICKS HIM AS WELL SENDING HIM CRASHING AGAINST THE SAME WALL SHE FLUNG ANTONIO TO KNOCKIN ANTONIO TO THE WALL AGAIN. 'IF ITS A FIGHT THAT YOU WANT A FIGHT YOU WILL GET MY BEEF IS NOT WITH YOU BEAST IT'S WITH THAT HIJO DE LLEGUA. HE SHALL PAY FOR MY MOTHERS DEATH AND MY SISTERS HEARTACHE!~ SLOWY SHE PICKS UP ANTONIO AND SMILES AN EVIL SMILE~ BEFORE I KILL YOU I WANT TO MAKE YOU SUFFER. I WANT TO MAKE YOU FEEL THE PAIN THAT I FEEL.' SHE STARTS TO CRUSH ANTONIO'S BONES. KNOWING THAT HE CAN HEAL HIMSELF SHE CONTINUES TO DO SO BECAUSE IT TAKES HIM DAYS BEFORE HE CAN COMPLETE THE PROCESS.~ 'YOU FEEL YOU A**SHOLE? DO YOU HURT' YOU WILL NEVER HURT ONE OF US AGAIN'
CARLOS IS PARALIZED FROM THE SCENE THAT HE IS WITNESSING. 'WHERE THE HELL DID SHE GET THOSE POWERS FROM?'
 
Antonio is in pain. His injuries try to heal but his body is being assualted by a telekinetic fury. He growls outloud shaking the house to it's foundation. Luckily the building structure is a small but well built mansion made of stone and concrete. The structure holds well despite the damage. At that moment He summons other minions and they attack our heroes. X-man unleashes a supernatural enhanced fury while attacking with guns and a sword. Rico rushes another minion and begins to tear his prey apart in an unfettered bloodlust. Carlos then wields the tomahawk and cuts off an arm of another minion while Marisol fights off two minions. Antonio is healing now that his adversaries are occupied and then tries to seek out Taina.
 
back into time 1979..a time when disco ruled the world and the bee gees where the new "beatles" 2 years after thier big break through with "saturday night fever"..they were still kings...in the hills of belsaris..team six did what any military man does when not serving his country.... get drunk and laid..as they were in a club partying in some night club in the middle of nowhere..romero sat a a table watching his friends dancing with the local chicks as he nursed a beer and thought of the girl who had overpowered him a few nights before..he still could not bring himself to tell anyone what really happened..her strength the look in her eyes...like a strong deadly cat with the grace and beauty behind..they all were playing "tourist"..no one could know why they were really there..they had no idea that they were at a buffet with "them" being the main course..the club was run by the local vampire..and was a place to attract prey..so they being the bad mercenaries that they were..they were in for a rude awakening of how weak they really were..how far down on the food chain..nice looking women were everywhere..it seemed like three girls to every guy..nice odds..if you couldnt get laid here tonight..good chances you were a virgin for eternity..wasnt to long before thier table was full of local beauties..ramirez came back with two girls..jackson another two..tex one asian looking hottie..jose "diablo" from the bronx another two..."pretty boy" chaz from los angeles three,,milton from tampa bay another two.flemming from conneticut two also..paxton from new orleans,,two..."chilli" from chicago who was ugly even had two girls.."marvin" whos real name was troy..but swore he was marvin gaye..from north carolina ..a black sweetheart.."smitty" from washington..with another asian..and drake from boston with russian twins..this was looking to be a night to remember..and it was just not in the way they all thought..romero was trying to be good..he had sophia waiting back home from him..wasnt long before he had two norwegian girls sitting next to him..flirting..songs kept playing and drinks kept coming..crazy night..any mans dream come true..and caught up in it all after a few drinks romero was thinking..what she doesnt ever know wont hurt her..it was looking to be an interesting evening..and after two weeks in the bush..covered in mud and creeping around the country side..they were all now in suits and surrounded by women....sister sledge "we are family started playing' and so did the boys..it seemed to turn into a big orgy only everyone had thier clothes on..kissing..touching..grabbing..romero found himself drunk with the norwegians rubbing thier hands and lips all over him and taking in the action going on around him..michael jacksons "dont stop till you get enough" came on..and suddenly things changed..the girls really became agressive all of them..ripping clothes off..kissing frantically..then the fangs!!!!..so caught up in everything happening and the liquor..most of the team didnt realize any danger..as they were bitten.romero sensed danger and despite having a fine noewegian pulling at his belt buckle to take out his (censored)..his instinct told him to get out of there!!..he started to see the guys getting bitten..one moment all smiles and eagerness with music playing..to shock at whats was happening..romero got up quickly and tried to run for the exit..one of the blondes jumped up snarling and bit into his shoulder as he screamed out in pain..he saw smitty and flemming being torn at the neck by four of the girls!! blood everywhere!!he felt the other blonde bite into his right side..and then everything faded to black
 
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