Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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i wish i hear they pay better then my current job..and i draw alot better then i write🙂 if it was a movie this secne would have had "the rivers of belief" by enigma playing in the background ant😉
 
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:hohsit BRAVO!!!!!!! MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! TAE! GET TO WRITIN! Where's everyone else in this story! COME ON! 😛

I'm sooooooooo lovin this! :stoned
 
*Antonio hides in his black hole, his transformation almost complete. Many people knew Antonio, but not his family history. His great grandparents were celebrants of the black arts, and made a deal with the devil. They would have health and wealth in their earthly lives, at the sacrifice of the first born son into the family. As chance would have it, the rest of the generations had first born daughters, until Antonio. He was never told of this history, and is completly unaware of the reasons of the transformation taking place.*

*Deep inside, the real Antonio screams for help. He was shocked of his treatment of Tiana. He cried at the death of Carlos. But he's helpless to stop the drama he's wrapped up in.*

*There are three steps that must be fulfilled for Antonio to remain this way permanently.

1. The betrayal of love. (Tiana)

2. The death of an innocent. (Carlos)

3. The sacrifice of the one who is to bear his child. (Tiana)*


*Antonio is about to leave to complete the third step, when he senses he's not alone. He turns around and sees Carlos. A ghost, transparent, but there.*


(Carlos) "You thought that you'd be finished con mí eso fácilmente (with me that easily)! I can see the real you now Antonio. I know you are still in there fighting!"

(Antonio) "Shut the hell up usted bolsa caminante de huesos (you walking bag of bones)!"

*Antonio grabs a large boulder and throws it at Carlos, but it passes right through him.*

(Carlos) "When you killed me, you gave the ones fighting you an ally you can't stop. You can't touch me, but I can touch you."

*Carlos demonstrates this point by disappearing, and while invisible, walking over to Antonio and slapping his face.*

(Antonio-from the inside) "Carlos, help me!"

(Carlos) "I'm trying, but usted no hace a este fácil mi amigo (you are not making this easy my friend. Perhaps you'll see me soon, perhaps not. If you truly want your old self back, stay away from Tiana."

*Carlos disappears.*
 
singing.."carlos the freindly ghost the friendliest ghost you know..the grown ups might look at him in fright but the drag queens love him so"..lmao🙂
 
LMFAO CHUCK! Now deal with this... 😛

While Freckles and Torres are on their way over to the morgue to check on things with Carlos...Angelique Manos Curativas (Healing Hands) slips past the guard outside of the morgue examining room where Carlos is being kept until Heckle and Jeckyle err Freckles and Torres shows up.

As she approaches Carlos a slight glow begins to eminate from her being. Mumbling words incomprehensible to the human ear she lays her hands on Carlos's twisted neck and her hands begin to glow. Slowly as to not alert the guard outside the door to what's going on inside she twists Carlos's neck back into its proper position. So minute that its barely noticable Carlos's eyes start to twitch. With her full concentration upon her task despite feeling herself weakening...she brings Carlos back among the living.

Angelique - "My friend, what had you so distracted that you let that fool Antonio get the drop on you? You are quite lucky I was nearby when this took place otherwise it truly would have been the end of you. You know how Teresa despises idiots and fools! Do not let this happen again for it may be too late next time."

Carlos - "Angelique...what? How did I get here? What happened? What are you saying about Antonio? Last time I saw that comerciante (trader) he was throwing me into a wall!"

Angelique - "Carlos...I am very weak right now and can not explain what has happened. Get to Theresa ASAP! She needs all the help she can get and do NOT be a FOOL! Stop thinking that she will betray you! You have no need to fear her...you are one of her chosen ones. Be wise and appreciate that! Holy water indeed! Now hurry! You must go now. The Dynamic Duo :rolleyes will be here shortly expecting to find you laid out here in the morgue!

Carlos - "QUE? The morgue? What are you saying?"

Angelique - "CONYO! I said to hurry! You have no time for me to explain! GO! They are here! GO GO!"

Carlos runs out the door and knocks the guard down trying to get out before Freckles and Torres spot him. The guard gets up and starts chasing what he thought was a dead man thinking to himself...I must be dreaming this! Damn!

Angelique suddenly passes out on the floor. This is where Freckles and Torres find her when they walk into the room wondering where the guard has gone off to as they were told someone would be outside the door until they arrived. As they notice the woman passed out on the floor they look to the table where Carlos is "Supposed" to be. They look at each other like WTF? Just then they hear something behind them and turn with their weapons drawn...
 
LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ~APPLAUDS~ CARLOS A GHOST AND RICO IS NOW BORN. OOOOO LOVIN IT!!!
MARISOL: DANIELLA HE SAID YOUR BROTHER HIT HIM WITH SOMETHING ON THE HEAD BEFORE HE WENT INTO A COMA.
DANIELLA: OMG WHAT HAS HE DONE. NO!!!!!!!!!
MARISOL: WHY ARE YOU SO DISTRAUGHT ISN'T THIS WHAT YOU WANTED? YOUR BROTHER BETTER HOPE HE GETS OUT OF THIS. OR HE IS GOING TO PAY.
DANIELLA: DON'T YOU THREATEN ME WITH NO SHIT I DIDN'T TELL HIM TO DO ANY THING!
MARISOL: WHAT EVER HEFFA. YOU'RE HISTORY. I WASN'T GOING TO EVEN GO THERE WITH HIM BUT YOU KNOW WHAT? I'M GONNA MAKE HIM MY MAN. I'M GONNA BE THE WOMAN THAT HE HAS NEVER HAD.
DANIELLA: YOU B*TCH I'LL FUKIN KILL YOU!
MARISOL: I DOUBT THAT. YOU CAN NEVER BE HALF THE WOMAN I AM. RODOLFO WANTS ME AND YOU KNOW WHAT I WANT HIM TOO. SO CHEW ON THAT! ~SLAMS PHONE~
DANIELLA: YOU BETTER NOT HANG UP ON ME ~TOO LATE MARISOL ALREADY HAD HUNG UP THE PHONE~
 
Oh man......

Krys.....now I have to think about how Carlos the ghost is now Carlos flesh and blood......

hmmmmmmm.........
 
ROFLMAOOOOOOOOOOO CHUCK! Muahzzzzz!

Carlos doesn't remember anything past getting thrown into the wall! 😛

Work with it cuz like I told Tae! I'm not changing my ONE post up in here that actually contributes to the story! :lol :lol :lol
 
*Carlos runs from the morgue, and is unsure what to do. His body is shaking and his mind is racing. Memories are flooding back and he feels like he is going crazy. The last safe place he can remember is "Our Lady of Suspicious Conception" church, so he runs there, and crawls into the basement window. He has enough sense to leave the lights off, and finds the secret door. He thinks that Fr. Roman can help him but then remembers that the priest is dead.*

*He falls onto the bed, feeling safe among the religious icons, and becomes relaxed. The state of relaxation allows all his memories to come back. The flights from Teresa, being chased by "Mr. X-Man", the crash of his car, the purchase of a new car and apartment, the job at The Salad Bowl, and his death at the hands of Evil Antonio.*

*The memories become sharper. He remembers confronting Antonio as a ghost, telling him how he knew the Good Antonio was still in there, he could hear him crying out. Then......he vanishes, and feels an awful "pulling" feeling, as he's being dragged backwards, falling and falling down, without landing. Suddenly, he's awake on a cold slab, staring at Angelique Manos Curativas (Healing Hands). All this is tiring, and it makes him appreciate his boyfriend, Javier Pantalones- Afeminadas (Javier Sissy-Pants) all the more. Thank God Javier has been out of town this week....there would be much explaing to do. Carlos allows himself to fall asleep. He will contact Teresa in the morning, and let her tell them all he's back, and that they must work as a team to save Antonio's soul.*
 
Good Angeligue has done her job well, now maybe Carlos can stop this theatrical Holy water carrying trip and help me end this Angels llife!.

Waiting for Carlos to emerge Teresa ponders on what this will all bring i nthe end?..will it actually ehlp Taina in anyway possible? will she hate me for what she is about to learn is the truth of why I have always taken long vacations with out her.
Being a Countess of the dark world means I had responsibilities to my other family, the dark one, the one I kept hidden for so many years. After Tainas birth, which was considered a unbelievable..a vampire and a human conceiving a child, but it happened, needless to say I had to hide everything from her until she was ready. Iknew sahe wasn't ready for her powers when she was 5 years old and she was standign 10 feet from teh door and in a fit of rage she managed to shut the door without so much as moving an inch!, after that she never got mad again...I knew she chose to block that out of her mind.. so what will happen when she learns the truth, of who her father is, what her mother is, and finally what she is?

Suddenly her intuition is on alert again. she spots Antonio looking scared as if he were hiding from something..LOl finally I have you cornered like the little rat that you are.

Antonio feels her near, doesn't even have to turn around.

Antonio:" so you have managed to find me after all Countess, can't say it surprises me, Ihave been waiting for your arrival, but I must say you took your sweet time getting here"


Countess" oh and here I was thinking I was coming to surprise you Tonio"

Antonio, very much aware of the nick name she gave him years back when she made him, was for a moment taken back in time, to when he was her favorite, so much so that she let him be her daughters protector, but he never figured actually falling in love with her, at least he thoght it was love.

Countess: you never loved her, dont' even think about her!, oh have you forgotten our ability to read minds?" you know he'll come after you too

Antonio: "he who"?

Countess: "her father! he has already said he would go after you if I fail, but you see, I don't plan to fail!"

Antonio: "Well Countess, I guess it's you and me then, you know I have always admired you, the way you kept everything under control for so long, how you were able to fool so many,being that your so ancient, your able to walk aroun dlilek normal people do, bu ttell me how does it really feel to walk like normal humans , but knowing your anything but normal?..lolol see the differnce between you and me is that I like what I am, I don't dispise what you made me! but I soon found out that my admiration for you was nothing but shame, shame at you for hiding, for dispising the gift you were given! for...

aghhhh!..in one swift movement Countess was on him and gripping his neck to an inch within in his immortal life..

Countess: you dare speak to me as if you have that right, you were here to do one job and that was to protect my Taina, and you failed to do that, now I must reveal everything to the one person I hold most dear in this life! because of you I may very well lose my duaghter.. she bends to his neck and slowlybegins to pierce his skin..enters CArlos...
 
freckles and torres are pointing thier glocks at the guard who screams "dont shoot its me!!!" as a dark stain appears on the front of his pants as he pisses on himself..they put thier firearms on safety and reholster thier weapons.torres turns to freckles and says "alice were not in kansas anymore" they look back to the gurney where they see carlos..head twisted ..they both say "conyo" at the same time..the guard says "WTF is a conyo?" torres says FUBAR!! (fuked up beyond belief).."you know what freckles" "what?" "im not hungry" they look back at the gurney..no body..and both say "shit" at the same time..the guard faints..torres says "i think its gonna be a while before i eat again"
 
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LMFAO!!!!!! Javier Sissy Pants!! I FUQN LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Go Diva Go Diva! :vamp

Tae? All's I gotta say is...You lucky! 😛
 
*Carlos, unable to sleep at the church, goes to his old apartment and changes into fighting gear. He though earlier in this adventure that "Mr. X-Man" was gonna see what it was like to deal with an angry fag. Now, it looks like Evil Antonio was gonna find out. He completes the look, thick demin jeans, tucked into black leather boots, black leather jacket, black gloves, sunglasses, (hey, he may be in for the fight of his life, but he STILL must look good!) Dagger tied to his left thigh, secret weapon in his gloves. As he prepares to leave, he hears a voice behind him.*

"well, well, well! I didn't know that tonight was bondage night!"

*It is Javier Pantalones-Afeminadas (Javier Sissy-Pants), home early from his trip.*

(Javiar) "You know what it does to me when I see you all suited up."

(Carlos) "I have no time for this Javiar. I have to go."

(Javiar) "I knew this was your life when I decided to hook up with you, but the least you could do is say 'Hello' to me."

(Carlos) "I'm sorry mi amor, but like you said, you knew what my life would be like when you decided to spend it with me. It is good to see you though, very good, I wish I could spend time in your arms tonight."

*Carlos walks over to Javiar and grabs him tightly. Javiar leans in kisess Carlos passionatly. Carlos runs his fingers through Javiars hair and down his face, and slowly pulls away.*

(Carlos) "I must leave now. If it is meant to be, I'll be back."

*Carlos makes his way across town, and arrives unannounced at Tiana's house. He walks around to the back and sees Teresa at Evil Antonio's neck. He stands back, willing to let her finish the job. Teresa gets distracted by Carlos' appearance, and looses focus. Evil Antonio takes this oportunity to back hand Teresa, and she is pushed back. Carlos runs forward with the dagger and stabs Antonio. The wound instantly heals, but for a moment, he hears the Good Antonio yell out.*

(Evil Antonio) "So, look who's back in the flesh......"

(Carlos) "yes, I'm back friend. I'm looking for a way to bring you back, and for now, that means keeping you from Tiana."

(Evil Antonio) "Let me guess, or you'll die trying?"

(Carlos) "No....or I'll kill you trying!"

*Evil Antonio leaps for Carlos, and grabs him, but Carlos grabs Antonio's neck in his right hand. Evil Antonio screams in pain and has pure white smoke rising from his neck, where Carlos holds him. He screams loudly and disappears.*

(Teresa) "What did you do to him?"

(Carlos) "I knew that Holy Water really had no effect on him, but being evil, he had to be effected by good. I placed a conscreated host in my right glove. Catholics believe it's the Body of Christ, and a very powerful weapon against evil."

(Teresa) "I'm impressed."

(Carlos) "Evil Antonio won't be back tonight. He has to heal from the wounds I inflicted to his neck, and his pride. We need to research his background. Perhaps there's a clue as to how he became this way, and how we can reverse it. As long as he doesn't sacrifice Tiana, the change is not permanent, and we can get Antonio back."

(Teresa) "Not that I want him back. He's causing much problems for me now."

(Carlos) "Countess, I don't mean to pry, but I feel it's time you talked to Tiana. As an adult, she has a right to know about her past, and her powers. If she learns quickly enough, she could use them to protect herself."

(Teresa) "I'm glad you're back, but don't overstep your bounds. Are we clear on that?"

(Carlos) "Yes Countess."
 
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