Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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*It's 7AM...and Antonio is tired as heck. Should he go home? This was a night of havoc. Who would ever thought that a simple man will turn so evil...and to top it off...for one to actually find...he is not mortal.*

*Looks at the picture...then...placed on his hand...it frys away...burning.*

Antonio: Thats the way my heart burns for you sweety.

to be continued
 
As with many legends, the exact date of origin is unknown; but evidence of the vampire tale can be found with the ancient Chaldeans in Mesopotamia, near the Tigris and the Euphrates rivers, and with Assyrian writings on clay or stone tablets. The land of the Chaldeans is also called the "Ur of the Chaldeans," which was the original home of Abraham from the Bible.

"Lilith" was a possible vampire from the ancient Hebrew Bible and its interpretations. Although she is described in the book of Isaiah, her roots are more likely in Babylonian demonology. Lilith was a monster who roamed at night taking on the appearance of an owl. She would hunt, seeking to kill newborn children and pregnant women. Lilith was the wife of Adam before there was Adam and Eve, according to tradition; but she was demonized because she refused to obey Adam. (Or to see it from a more liberated viewpoint, she demanded equal rights with Adam). Naturally, she was considered evil for such "radical" desires and became a vampire who eventually attacked the children of Adam and Eve -- namely, all human descendants.

and the bloodline of lilith continued onto teresas generation.. all the ancient books ..tales ..myths ..legends into today. the movies and all the countless novels and halloween bullshit got it all wrong..theres no transylvania..and no count dracula..never was..Bram Stoker.. Ann rice and Stephen King did not have the first clue about the reality of the decendants of lilith..they roam the earth my friends..they exist and are real..they are your neighbors..your teachers..your congresman.. world leaders..a secret world..they blend in and act human for self preservation...they are not all monsters..or evil..as a matter af fact pecrcentage wise there are more evil humans then the immortals..just the stories told since ancient times portray them as such..as all being evil..the majority feed just on animals just as we do..only they consume the blood rather then the meat..does that make them monsters??..before one judges think of history and realize that humans are the ultimate monsters..commiting the most heinous of atrocities since ancient times in thier own greed ..lust.. causes and even claiming to do 'GODS WORK".and then having the arrogance and audacity. to call the immortals "monsters"..well those who are aware of them in the modern world anyway.. the immortals are allways in hiding in order to avoid becoming extinct by the humans killing them off..for though they are considered 'immortal" in a sense where they defy death in "human nature or standards" things that kill humans as easily as bullets..and being stabbed they survive only because thier abnormal platelets and blood that heal alot more quickly then humans in thier preceptions of laws of nature...so many things that would kill a human a vampire could endure...while..holy water ..the crcifux and the stake do kill them..and decapitation..thier average lifespan is five hundred years..garlic just makes thier breath stink and there are plenty of vampire with good tans who spend the day at the beach..the imortals have many who are evil also and commit the sin of hunting humans and they justify thier forbidden taste by claiming only to hunt the "evil ones" just as humans justify war and killing by claiming they are ridding the world of "evil" even if they kill thousands of innocent civillians while trying to kill thier evil leaders.. the bad of the immortals are the "vampire" ..those who just kill without reason..who have an unholy lust for the taste of human blood..they come out at night not becuase the sun will make them burst into dust..as in all the myths and legends..but because they can move more easily and unobsreved.. when the humans are asleep..its safer.. and soon torres and freckles would find out when they joked of vampires and x files.. that despite having street smarts and having seen "all" as new york detectives they only knew of the tip of an iceberg..the world was about to flip on all involved in this story.

and one fall in europe..the two worlds meet where adam once again was with lilith..in romero (the X man) and tersa.. a human and a vampire ..a forbidden love began..
 
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Fransisco Raul is driving down WelePeo Boulevard and he sees Rodolfo.
Fransisco parks his car gets out and starts following Rodolfo. Rodolfo doesn't notice Fransisco following him but then turns up the street to CuloCago Drive by the White Castles then makes a left unto the alley way called Estoy Cago Dr. Thats when Fransisco grabbed Rodolfo and confronted him on his relationship with Daniella..............more to come.................
 
*Carlos wakes up in the basement of the church. It is too draining on him to stay here any longer. He sneaks up the church stairs and finds the area where the priests prepare for mass. There is a copy of today's paper. He takes it and returns to the basement unseen. With his cell, he calls numbers from the paper. He is able to get a new apartment. He calls a nearby used car dealer for a reliable car. They are both within walking distance. He gets up and leaves the church.*

"I'm no crimial, so I'm not gonna defraud my insurance company. I don't need the money that badly. My public and private shows as Chiquita have earned me plenty. First stop, the bank."

*Carlos gets to the bank and withdrawals two official checks from his account. One for the new place and one for the car. Once all the paperwork is in order, he heads over to Tiana's house, and is very surprised to see Rico leaving as he arrives. As he walks in, he is met by Tereasa Nomechaves.*

(Teresa) "Hello Carlos."

(Carlos) "Hello Countess."

(Teresa) "I don't take lightly the fact you killed my servent, but the act of sending Rico to Tiana makes up for it."

(Carlos) "Had I known that Antonio was evil, I would've let her take him."

(Teresa) "Don't worry about it. You trusted him. Considered hin an ally. Vampires know about Allies too. I know you haven't slept well, with all that's going on. Go to the spare room upstairs. You are safe here."

*Carlos goes upstairs, and on the way up, clutches the bottle of holy water he took when he left this morning. He may be welcome here, but he doesn't yet trust Teresa.*
 
secure line confirmed..alpha 3108 reporting..."carlos 20 (location) 14th street and fourth ave brooklyn 1378 apt 3 A..will observe for possible contact with objective romero (aka Xman)..new contact..female..teresa.."..alpha leader " say again ..teresa??" alpha 3108 " yes sir ..teresa" alpha leader says to himself " i cant believe it" "continue servaliance..do not engage any action until target shows..again observe only!!,, team six to keep track of teresa but to remain on standby and at a distance..no action..confirm/"....alpha 3108."yes sir confirmed"..alpha leader "tell the team extra precaution this new contact will make them easy" alpha 3108 "sir it seems like just a woman" alpha lead " she is not!!..again stay back..she is an immortal!!!".. alpha 3108..." an immortal sir?" alpha lead " belay my last ..disregard.just keep me posted on her 20 and i want only the best in servaliance of team six..copy? we cant be made!!"..alpha 3108."copy" alpha lead.."if its teresa then objective will show up eventually..all teams on stand down in the mean time..countinue sector search no action till i say so!!".. alpha 3108 "sir yes sir" alpha lead "lead out" ..automated voice..secure line terminated
 
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as teresa made her way down the block she smelled them before she saw them..three men one dressed up as a homeless man..just pushing a shopping cart pretending to collect cans ..which he may have played off but smelled of a dolce & gabanna colonge..exact oppisite of someone who would not have remembered the last time he had a shower..another dressed in street clothes dressed as a street thug..dew rag..sunglasses..gold chains...passable only too obvious in following her every step..and one in a suit..armani.not the average in this neighborhood ,,who wears a two thousand dollar suit in this side of town?,,and driving slowly in a lexus..obviously an undercover something with a vanity which asked nothing more then to be noticed.she quickly ducked into an alley and jumped twelve feet to a fire escape ladder impossible for a mortal but easy for a vampire then climbed up the fire escape stairs to the roof..and looked down as all three entered the alley looking up and around wondering where she had gone .. the homeless made screamed into a concealed mike..in a panic "3108 alpha..contact lost..say again contact lost!!"
 
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alpha leader stared at the monitor f**ing idiots..picked up the phone and said "alpha leader ..i need a bird to new york now!!" make it happen..and hung up before he got a response and made his way to the surface..as the elevator made its way to the helo pad he was on the cell "alpha leader.all teams scramble..brooklyn ..now!!!!
 
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*Trying to reach the destination of his new love...to live happily ever after...is beginning to be a huge marathon for Antonio. As he walks...his legs gives out...then suddenly there is darkness...then lots of bumping movement. Seems he is in some vehicle being taken away.*

*Antonio is unaware...and starts to dream of his childhood.*

Antonio: Hey...we finally made it!

Susan: Yeah...finally.

Antonio: So are you going to give me that first kiss? 😉

Susan: Let me see...ummm YES!

*Antonio holds her tightly. His childhood girlfriend...they each lived few blocks away from each other...and she was the only girl in his life...that knew about his dark secret.*

Antonio: I love you Susan...I will always be with you.

Susan: You going to marry me right?

Antonio: Let me see...ummm YES!

Susan: lol

Antonio: lol

*They both embrace and for the first time...they kiss.*

Antonio: It's not what I expected!

Susan: What you mean?

Antonio: I didn't think that today; those clouds that you see way up there...I was finally going to reach and touch them.

Susan: Oh Ant. What am I going to do with you you lil devil heehe

Antonio: Divorce me?

Susan: lol!

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I see who has taken over the story with the mysteriousness of vampires..OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO u know I like..:vamp
 
Back in Estoy Cago Dr.............................

Fransisco Raul Boricua has Rodolfo by the shirt up against a building saying to him....
Fransisco: Yo Punk! Why you hurt my sister the way you did? You just a punk who can't take care of his responsibilties.

Rodolfo: Look Fransisco I know I did wrong. My bad!

Fransisco: My bad? My bad my @$$ I ought to blast you right now! But! I have other plans for you. And don't even think I won't have my eyes on you cuz I have others watching you also. Always keep your cell phone on for you gonna be keeping me posted.

Rodolfo: Posted? Posted on what? I ain't doing jack $*@%!

Fransisco: OH No?! (Pulling out a .45 putting it up against Rodofos temple) You will keep me posted or your special someone will disappear!

Fransisco hits Roldolfo with the gun knocking him out and Fransisco leaves, leaving Roldolfo laying in the alley...............................................
 
:hohsit oh no you didn't! lmaooooooooo. umm ok back to the novela.



Marisol looks at Taina and notices her biting her lip first sign of there is something wrong
Marisol: Taina whats wrong you only bite your lip when you have a big problem
Taina: oh uh nothing
Marisol: Taina!
Taina looks at Marisol and starts to cry.
Taina:Marisol i'm pregnant!
Marisol: holy sh*t!
Taina: I'm happy because it's what I always wanted with Antonio but I'm so unhappy because of all he's done to me.~sobbing uncontrolably~
Marisol😀on't you worry prima he will stick by you.
Taina:No! I don't want this son of a b*tch next to me! Or I will kill him myself!
Marisol: ok so you don't want him to know?
Taina: No I will let him think it's someone elses. He doesn't deserve to be part of my baby's life. Fuk him!
Marisol: Ok Prima what ever you decide is fine with me. No matter what I will stick by you. Familia is first!
Taina: Thank you prima that means so much to me.
 
DAMN I WAS ALL IN IT AND IT'S ONLY 10 PAGES (POUTING)LOL...YO! I MUST ADMIT THIS IS EXCELLENT...A ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS..TAINA, I FEEL FOR U GO GIRL....TERESA, YOU GO MA, FANGS AND ALL, TAEZEE AND ANTONIO...I LOVE THE VISUAL THAT YOU GUYS PROVIDE....BRAVO!!

PLEASE, CONTINUTE...(WAITING)
 
*Carlos gets ready to sleep, keeping the bottle of Holy Water nearby. He turns down the covers of the bed, and is about to get undressed, when he hears a sound, sort of like a small puff of wind blowing, and smells brimstone. He turns around to see Antonio standing behind him.*

(Carlos) "What do you want here, el traidor bastardo(bastard traitor)?"

(Antonio) "Don't be that way Carlos, and don't make me angry. We are friends."

(Carlos) "We WERE friends. I have every right to be mad! I risked mi trabajo, mi libertad, y mi vida (my job, my freedom, and my life) trying to protect you!

(Antonio) "Don't do this amigo! We could be powerful together!"

(Carlos) "So I should forget everything that happened so I can be used by you now????? I don't think so!"

*Antonio starts to walk towards Carlos, and Carlos grabs the bottle of Holy Water. He smashes it against Antonio's chest, and it shatters into pieces, soaking Antonio. Nothing happens.*

(Antonio) "Carlos, I told you not to make me mad."

(Carlos) "aaaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuuggggggggghhhhhhhh!!!!!

*Teresa, Tiana, Marisol, and Rico hear the scream and run to the spare room. As they burst in the door, they see Antonio grab Carlos' head and spin it, snapping his neck. Antonio laughs and disappears in a cloud of smoke, and Carlos drops to the floor dead.*
 
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