Cf Telenovela "por El Amor De Una Mujer"

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HOT DIGGITY DAMN!!!!!!!!!!:typing must continue this one😉 me likes it God😉
 
Thanks Krystal, Naya and Chuck!!! I am really glad you liked the addition! I also tied in Angelique and Rico into the story quite nicely right? Looks like our scooby gang.. err.. super friends... err our heroes are in for some trouble!! I can't wait for your additions!! LOL!!!!😉
 
HELL I wish I had the talent to add to the story! I think I've said this before but the only reason I brought Angelique in was to bring Carlos back...that's why it was kinda easy for me to write the part but YO...where is X?????????????????
 
Heaven: ok listen to me everyone, really these little antics are extremely cute but enough already. YOU are all in danger. believe it or not Luna I am not what everyone thinks I am..well so to speak. Yes I am the Queen Vampire, not by choice as you well know. I don't feed on the innocent people of this world. I go after the criminals the ones that won't be missed if they were to disappear.NOw listen to me There is a Master Vampire out there he goes by the name Tobias Cervantes. He is very powerful, and wanting to have a one on one with me, the only problem is that these Roque vampires work for him, they know who you are Luna, and I am sure that by now they know all of your identiites in this room.

Carlos: Great just freaking great! is he the one that has my Javier?

Heaven: yes, that would be him

Carlos: do you think he is still alive?
Heaven: he might be but barely

Luna: so what are you telling us Heaven?
Heaven: I am telling you that I am here to lend my help, I can give you all thier daytime resting places. I cannot directly be involved, or else every vamp in this nation will be after me for killing one of our own.But I can provide information for you to get the job done.

Rico: How the hell do we know that your not leading us into a trap, after all you are the Queen Vamp yourself.

Heaven l stood so very still that for a moment everyone in the room could have thought she was a statue, then she whirled on Rico and grabbed him by the neck "Listen to me Lycantrope, I don't really like your kind, your a disease, your not even immortal, but if I wanted you all dead, it would have been alot easier and more fun to do it all myself, but like I said I am not the monstrous killer you may think I am. I became Queen Vampire by powers bestowed on me by an Ancient, don't have me test the abilities I have yet to see in myself"...she lets him drop to the floor but not before she saw his eyes try to turn, but he held his animal inside..."Now there is a vampire club called "SINfulicious" that is his daytime resting place, you will find him and all his fledgelings there.

Luna was busy trying to see if any part of her human sister was still in this cold looking beauty standing in front of her.

Heaven: Luna yes it is still me sis, I may be an immortal, but I still remember our life together, I still remember you drying my tears when I cried and fighting my fears for me, you were and still are the best sister anyone could have. I know you have your duties to perfom as Slayer of the Vamps, but I will also protect my fledgelings, just so that we have an understanding.

Luna: I understand Heaven, we will work together to end this nightmare, but after this we part ways, don't ever come back to my city again.

Luna turned away to quick to see the look of hurt on Heavens face.

Angelique looked at the Mistress and felt for her. She must do what she can to make sure The Mistress gets her soul back...she is holding onto her humanity by force, by not feeding on the innocent, but if left without feeding ofr to long, the pope could be in front of her, and he would be the entree`... She needs her soul back, it is the only way Luna will accept her for what she is...

Meanwhile Marysol is feeling the stirrings of something really bad about to happen...
 
the x man , freckles and the agency have been on the back burner only becuase ive been living at work the last few weeks..ill try to write them back in best i can..great story line in the meantime..and i have gotten all of your PMs in the mean time asking me about X man and freckles.. and when they will return!!..as a matter of fact the real "freckles" is coming up to visit this week from florida (my pops who was nicknamed freckles while in the NYPD so thats who i based the caracther on!!!) so while hes visiting ill get some more ideas!!
 
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*It is about 4 in the morning. Almost everyone in Taina's house is asleep. The group decided as a whole to rest for tonight. To try to attack durning night would be suicide. Waiting until morning was the safest way to deal with everything. Rico, Marisol, Taina, and Rodolfo are asleep in the basement. There are no windows there, and it's the safest place for them to be. Angelique is doing some last minute research, looking for a way to restore Heaven's soul. Carlos is sitting on a window seat, looking out the window. He's thinking of Javiar, and if he is safe. Luna walks into the room and sits down by Carlos.

(Luna) "Your thoughts are on him, aren't they?"

(Carlos) "Of course. Where else would they be?"

(Luna) "On the mission tomorrow?"

(Carlos-smirks at Luna) "You're not in love with anyone, are you?"

(Luna) "No....the life of a slayer is a solitary one. To be honest, I'm surprised that you had a lover."

(Carlos) "Well, I'm not a typical slayer, I guess."

(Luna-smirking back) "I guess that's true.....I've never seen a male slayer before."

(Carlos) "I'm not a typical male either."

(Luna) "Hahaha! You're right there."

(Carlos) "Maybe the extra estrogen in my system has something to do with that." haha

(Luna) "I see your sense of humor is still intact."

(Carlos) "If I don't laugh, I'll cry. I went without love for a long while, and now that I have it, I don't want to lose it."

*Luna sees a single tear run down Carlos' cheek. She has always had a tough exterior, as well as a wall around her heart. She is very impressed with Carlos now, seeing how strong, yet sensitive he can be. She walks to him and wipes away the tear, and sits with him on the window seat.*

(Luna) "I'm sorry we got off on the wrong foot. I think there is much more we can learn from each other."

(Carlos) "You're right. We best try to get some sleep, so we can be of use tomorrow. Thank you for the company."

*Luna gets up and leaves. Carlos streches out on the window seat. Each of the panes of glass have a consecrated host stuck to the pane so he has no worries about falling asleep there. The hosts are leftovers from the battle with Antonio. "Please God", thinks Carlos, "He wasn't my lover, but Antonio was my friend. I can't lose anyone else. Watch over Javiar for me." He tries to sleep, but his thoughts return to Javiar..........At Sinfilicious, Javiar lies strapped to a table. He is in the basement, very tense. He tries to relax, but it is almost impossible. His wrists and ankles are strapped to the stone slab, and he's in a great deal of pain. His neck is unmarked. When they come to have some of him, they take what they want from his forearms. It is more painfull, and a slower death. He knows that Carlos has something that they want, but inside, he hopes that Carlos never tells them what they want to know. Javiar would rather die at this point than to have his life saved by cooperating with these monsters. Javiar looks out the window.....by the position of the stars, he can tell that dawn will be coming soon. Then he can relax, when the beasts go to sleep. Little does he know, that Carlos is looking at the night sky, and thinking of him..........*


"Somewhere Out There"
James Ingram & Linda Ronstadt

Somewhere out there, beneath the pale moonlight
Someone's thinking of me, And loving me tonight
Somewhere out there, Someone's saying a prayer
That we'll find one another, In that big somewhere out there

And even though I know how very far apart we are
It helps to think we might be wishing
On the same bright star
And when the night wind starts to sing a lonesome lullaby
If helps to think we're sleeping
Underneath the same big sky

Somewhere out there, If love can see us through
Then we'll be together, Somewhere out there
Out where dreams come true

And even though I know how very far apart we are
It helps to think we might be wishing
On the same bright star
And when the night winds starts to sing a lonesome lullaby
It helps to think we're sleeping
Underneath the same big sky

Somewhere out there, If love can see us through (can see us through)
Then we'll be together, Somewhere out there
Out where dreams come true
 
*It is 7:00 in the morning, and the sun is blazing down. Marisol, Taina, Rodolfo and Rico come up from the basement. They see Angelique at a desk reading many books. Luna is on a couch.*

(Marisol) "Good morning everyone."

(Luna) "as good as it can be."

(Rico) "Angelique, were you able to find anything?"

(Angelique) "All I have found is the location of "Sinfulicious". I have not been able to find a way to get Heaven her soul back. At least not yet."

(Luna) "Where is Carlos?"

(Taina) "He's gone???? Angelique, is it possible that he found out where the club is? He may have went to rescue Javiar."

(Angelique) No, it's not possible. I only just found this information myself."

*While everyone is talking about Carlos, he walks into the house.*

(Luna) "Where did you go?"

(Carlos) "I was prepping a safe place for Javiar to stay."

(Luna) "You know Carlos, he may........"

(Carlos) "No Luna, I will not think that way. I will cross that bridge when I come to it. In my mind now, Javiar is alive."

*Carlos grabs his cell and calls Alberto.*

(Alberto) "Yes?"

(Carlos) "Al, I need your help. Are you still seeing that girl from the hospital? Maria Pantalones-Ffáciles (Maria Easy Pants)?"

(Alberto) "Yes I am....why?"

(Carlos) "I need you to visit her at the hospital. When you've dazzled her enough, sneak in the back and steall two pints of A+ blood.

(Alberto) "Why?"

(Carlos) "Just do it!!!!! Bring it to Taina's house as soon as possible. Angelique will be here to greet you."

(Taina) "I suggest we get ready. We have only 10 hours before it's sunset again."

(Rico) "And what makes you think that you'll be joining us in this raid???"

(Taina) "I'm tired of this.....you, or no one else, can tell me what to do. I have these powers. I may not have total control, but I have them. They will be of use."

(Angelique) "I agree with Taina. I will not be able to go, because of the sun. You will need her. Luna, not only will this be beneficial to us, but to Heaven as well. She may be able to use this attack as an excuse to back away from the Master Vampire. By saying his control is weak, she can turn from him, and be safe."

(Carlos) "Then I suggest we get ready and go to "Sinfulicious".

*Everyone prepares to go to a quick hit and run battle. The plan is to cause as much damage as possible, take out as many vamps as possible, and rescue Javiar. Everyone dresses in as strong clothes as possible. Luna is used to battle and is ready first. She looks over the group one by one, and rates them in her head.*

"Rodolfo" <she thinks> "he's just a human. No special abilities......how can he help?"

"Marisol" <she thinks> "half breed. She trained quickly. Her powers are strong. An asset."

"Rico" <she thinks> "Werewolf.....his abilities are enhanced, but this battle takes place during the day, not by the full moon."

"Taina" <she thinks> "another half breed. Pregnant. That's affecting the development of her abilities. She's the loose cannon in this."

*Carlos walks in at this moment, dressed for battle in the leather look, with the crossbow.*

"Carlos" <she thinks> "there is more to him than meets the eye. He looks very powerful there now, but his mind is only on his man. He's not as focused as he should be. If we survive this, it will be a miracle."

*They leave the house at 9 o'clock and get into a cheap junk van that Rodolfo rented. It had the fewest windows possible. No seats except for the driver's and passenger's. They are taken by Rico and Taina. The rest sit on the floor in the back of the van. They look at the weapons they have: stakes, crucifixes, holy water, guns, arrows, and flame throwers. After about a three hour drive, they arrive at the location. One mile away from the club, they get out of the van and walk the rest of the way. They feel the evil vibrations emenating from the building......and feel eyes on them.*

(Luna) "Remember, the vamps are asleep....but they will have human helpers here to protect them. They won't wake up, but be prepared for a fierce battle."

*The group walks up to the door of the club. Luna tries to turn the knob, but it is locked. They hear a voice on the other side of the door*

(Voice) "If you value your lives, you will turn and leave now."

(Carlos) "Not without who we came for."

*Marisol steps forward, and focuses her concentration on the door. It breaks off the hinges and flies inward, striking the person speaking on the other side, knocking him unconscious. The group runs into the club and are greeted by a large group of , for a lack of a better word, guardians. The humans who have sided with vampires, to help them get victims. Carlos and Luna engage in hand to hand combat with 3 guardians each. Rico attacks one Guardian in front of him. Because the club is in utter darkness, keeping the vampires safe from the sun, Rico is able to partially transform, becoming a half man/half wolf form. Marisol strikes out with her powers, and throws two people across the room with her psychic powers. Taina attempts to do the same thing, but the two guardians coming for her keep coming. She gets nervous, and tries again, this time accidentally snapping their necks, killing them. Rodolfo feels out of place, but attempts to help. He gets into a small fight and is able to knock out the guardian.*

*The group stands around and looks at their handy work. The guardians are defeated, and the main room is unprotected in front of them. Carlos and Taina enter the room first, slowly walking through the door. Suddenly, a fledgling vampire drops from the ceiling on top of Taina. Before he can hurt her, Rico grabs the vamp, and rips it's head off. Four more fledging vampires attack the group, when Carlos notices a flight of steps going down towards the basement. Carlos runs down the steps, leaving the group behind. Before he leaves, he flips on the light, helpping the rest of the group. A vamp grabs Luna from behind, but Luna flips it over her shoulder to the floor, and stakes it's heart. Rodolfo tosses two bottles of holy water in the air, and Marisol concentrates on them, causing them to explode. The remaining vamps are drenched in the water, and they explode.*

*At the bottom of the stairs, Carlos enters a large room, it is lined with coffins, each one contains a vampire. He looks over them all, and can't find the Master Vampire. There are just too many coffins. He looks to his left, and sees Javiar, chained to the stone slab. He runs over, and is unable to free him. A shadow falls over Carlos. He pulls his crossbow out and turns, to see Rico.*

(Rico) "Carlos, wait, I'm here to help."

*Rico is still in his in-between stage, and easily snaps the chains hold Javiar. Carlos checks Javiar, and feels a pulse. Javiar is not in a coffin, and Carlos hopes this means that Javiar is still human.*

(Rico) "Holy sheet! Look at all the coffins! I can't believe it! Well over 100. How do we find the Master Vampire?"

*Suddenly, there is the sound of battles upstairs.*

(Carlos) "We don't find him now......we have to get back up to the first floor. Let's go!"

*Rico and Carlos see a full battle going on. Before they can do anything, Rodolfo ignites the flame thrower. He points it at some fledgling vamps. One suddenly attacks Taina, and she lashes out with her powers. It happens at the same time as Rodolfo fires the thrower. Taina's powers react with the flame, turning the small plume of flame into a wall of fire. The vampires are incinerated, and the club is set aflame. Any remaining guardians fight the fire, so to save their vampire masters. Luna, Marisol, Rico, Rodolfo, Taina and Carlos (carrying Javair) run into the sun........they get into the van and race home. Carlos is relieved to see that Javair had no ill effects when getting exposed to the sun. This means he's still human. They watch their backs on the way home. There is still a three hour drive to deal with. They are also rushed to get Javiar back to Angelique for healing. Luna looks back and sees Javair, cradled on Carlos's lap. Carlos has removed his gloves, and she can see the matching rings they wear. "Perhaps <thinks Luna> "one day I'll find love as well. When all the vampires are dead!!!" The van arrives at Taina's house and they see that Alberto is there. Carlos rushes Javiar into the room, and Angelique is waiting.*


(Carlos) "Alberto, cuz, please tell me you have the blood!"

(Alberto) "You turned to the right man. I tossed out a few compliments, and was able to get what you needed."

(Carlos) "Thank God! Angelique, hurry."

*Angelique lays her hands on him, and let's her powers work. While she is doing that, Luna gives Javiar the transfusion he desperately needs. After a few minutes, the color comes back to Javiar, but he is still unconscious. Carlos picks up Javiar and places him in his car.*

(Carlos) "There are no words I can say to thank you all. I will be back tomorrow. I am spending tonight with Javiar, getting him comfortable. Alberto, it may be best if you stay here tonight. They don't know of your involvement yet, and I plan to keep it that way. You are safest here."

*With that, Carlos drives off. Everyone else goes back into the house. There are only two hours until sunset, and they know that if the house is unprotected they are finished. Angelique chants a spell of protection. Taina and Marisol place consecrated hosts on all the windows, and Rico and Rodolfo spray the doors and windows with holy water.*

*It is about 7 pm, the sun is down. Javiar wakes up.*

(Javiar) "Aaaahhhhh!"

(Carlos) "Shhhhh, my love, it's ok."

(Javiar) "I'm.....I'm free. Carlos! Where am I?"

(Carlos) "You are back in the basement of Nuestra señora del concepto sospechoso" (Our Lady of Suspicous Conception), this is the secret room I told you about."

(Javiar) "I want to go home."

(Carlos) "For now, this is home. No one knows of this passage and room. It is completely covered in religious icons. Until I know you can come out, you're safe here. No vampire can come in here."

*Javiar looks around and sees that the room is furnished, and stocked with food. He leans foward to Carlos and starts to cry.*

(Javiar) "I didn't think I would survive....I was sooo afraid."

*Carlos slides next to Javiar and holds him tightly.*

(Carlos) "Shhhhhh.....you're safe now. I'll stay with you tonight. You'll be able to sleep peacfully. It will all seem better in the morning."
 
Marisol starts to see different images. This time she was able to control her images without suffering pain. although she became paralized she saw the images clear. They were coming to her making actual sense this time she saw the child she saw someone taking taina and giving Taina a ceserean taking out her unborn. It was a girl. Marisol's tears were rolling down her face uncontrolably. The men in cloaks took the baby girl and placed her on a stone table. One of the men reached for a dagger with three sapphire stones and another with topaz stones. He was murmuring something under his breath Marisol could not understand. Everyone in the room watched her as she was having her visions.
Rodolfo: what is happening why is she crying? why can't she move?
as he reaches for her Angelique grabs his hand.
Angelique: No. Let her be she is in control. She is doing better than we imagined. We need her to fully see the visions if we are to protect Taina and the child.
Rodolfo: ok but..
Angelique: no buts leave her be.
Marisol starts to come out of her trance. She turns to Angelique
Marisol: We need to get Taina to safety. Her and the baby are in danger. I didn't see the whole thing but there are two daggers one with sapphires stones and one with topaz stones. They intend to take the baby right out. There is one being that will protect her and the baby. Although Antonio is was evil the good in him left a protector we must find who it is.
 
after doing my thing with(maria)tonguing her down, feeling up her body against mine lifting up that white skirt uniform slowly that the nurses put on, being with her in some room that we got into that nobody notice we were in i just needed to do my quickie so i can get these 2 pints that my cuzin was asking me to get cause on the back of my mind i kept thinking why blood? staying over at taina's crib i said, since im gonna be staying here i might as well get comfortable you know? cause knowing me i dont wanna get bitchy on no one except on my cousin (carlos) cause he's use to that already.

(alberto)so carlos whats up with all this drama going on? with this blood thing you asking? i feel like im in a movie or something (laughing to himself).

(carlos)well cuz is like this...... first i just wanna say thank you for getting the 2 pints of bloods but theres vampires going around grabbing people and sucking up their blood.

(alberto) haha say what? you kidding right? tell me you playing around man and that you're not serious?

(carlos)al im not, im serious, im dead serious!!!

alberto being speechless not knowing what to say stays quiet for a second.

(carlos)alberto im like shock myself as well i didnt want to believe it either but is true i had to fight some off earlier and they got javiar but hes alittle hurt but he will survive.

(alberto)ok so you saying that there's some "thing" out there(looking out the window)that comes out in the night looking for some victim to prey on? that this "thing" comes out of a coffin?

(carlos)yeah al(grabs alberto by the arm pulls him away)dont get near the window(carlos closes the curtains)look cuz just stay here at taina's house for the meantime you'll be safe.

(alberto)so....did any of these "vampires" get to them already?(making some kind of a funny remark)or do i need to get some garlic put it around my neck get a hammer and a big ass nail just in case of one these idiots gets stupid on me?

(carlos laughing)no......you be ok here believe me, you be in good hands with taina.

(alberto)well i hope so.....cause i show taina if anything my good hands(smiling)thats if i mean if she wants.
 
Meanwhile everyone is quiet with thier own thoughts while they prepare for this battle...

Carlos sleeps with Javier thinking to protect him, little does he know that Javier has been touched my the master, he is now the Human Servant for the Vampire, whatever he sees the Master sees, so now the Vampire has eyes inside the protective circle...

Angelique thinks to herself who is this person that can protect Taina and the baby? who is it Anotnio!, you bastard you could have at least made it easy for us to find.

Marisol sat there still unable to tell them all how they cut Taina up to take out the baby, how she couldn't tell if taina was still alive or not. Please let her be alive Please...

Luna thinks what harm can it really do to let Heaven help on this after all she is the Queen Vampire. She must have Powers beyond anything I have faced so far. Luna made up her mind to let Heaven help out and to at least try to be a little more understanding.

Heaven is crouched on the balls of her feets on the ledge of the building outside, what she has been thinking will not go over very well with Luna, but it is something she will have to do it's the only way to keep Luna protected. she will have to pass along her immortality to Luna...The only way to keep her alive with out turning her into the walking dead, a monster like me...
 
Nyasia said:
Carlos sleeps with Javier thinking to protect him, little does he know that Javier has been touched my the master, he is now the Human Servant for the Vampire, whatever he sees the Master sees, so now the Vampire has eyes inside the protective circle...
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:mad

LOL

All i want is for Carlos and Javiar to be happy!

Why must everything be a trial??? :sosad





This story just keeps getting better.
 
ChuckD said:
:mad

LOL

All i want is for Carlos and Javiar to be happy!

Why must everything be a trial??? :sosad





This story just keeps getting better.
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He only has the early markings, if he gets the last one then he will be lost to you for good Carlos... now if you kill the Master you get Javier back.. so do your thang😉 see? there is always a happy ending sweetie!😉
 
Outside on a beautiful starry night a cool breeze is blowing on Heavens estate. Heaven is out on her ledge with the wind blowing in her hair and she looks up at the stars. She goes back to a time in her childhood with her sister when they were out on the balcony of their old house looking up at the stars. She remembers the conversation on what they wanted to be when they grow up and how they saw two falling stars and they decided to make a wish. She laughs a little to her self remembering those good old innocent times and wishes she could go back but those days are long gone.
Suddenly a servent comes to door of her balcony.
>Servant: Mistress there is someone here to see you.

>Heaven: Who is it?

>Servant: He says that his name is Tobias and he is from a royal vampire clan from spain.

>Heaven: I guess send him in. (She decides to let him in to avoid trouble for her clan.) A few of Heavens guards enter the room that connects to the balcony and place themselves around the room holding spears and wearing some battle gear.
Tobias is then escorted in and he is surrounded by very large strong body guards. They were probably bouncers who were weightlifters before becoming vampires.

>Tobias: Good evening Mistress Heaven! What a pleasure to finally meet you!! (He grabs her hand and kisses it and then slightly bows in front of her. She then notices his features he is tall and handsome with long black hair and he is quite physically fit. She can also sense that he is very powerful for a vampire in fact too powerful like he has been enhanced. This then worries her and she thinks of her sister and the others.)

>Heaven: Tis a pleasure as well. (she then slighty bows as well)
What brings you here milord?

>Tobias: Ah milady I just wished to meet you and witness your fine radiant beauty! I also have a gift for you and I hope that you would except it?

>Heaven: Really? That is facinating.

>Tobias: So the Queen is not impressed? Bring me the box!(He calls out to one of his vampire body guards and he brings forward to him a medium sized box. The box is then opened and a multilayered necklace encrusted with large diamonds and in the middle a white gold pendant with a large ruby in the middle. Heaven thinks to herself that has got to be the most beautiful and expense piece of jewelery she has ever seen!)

>Tobias: I see the Queen has fine taste! Yes I knew that piece would be worthy of you! Try it on please!

>Heaven: That's okay I see it is beautiful but..

>Tobias: Oh I insist if you do not except it I will be insulted.

>Heaven: Fine.(She lifts her long locks up to reveal her neck and she looks at one of her guards, he then nods and looks at the other gaurds.)

>Tobias: Do not worry it is a gift that is all.(He then gets behind her and places the necklace on her after that he kisses her hand once more.)

>Heaven: Thank you milord it is beautiful.

>Tobias: No it is you that makes it beautiful!

>Heaven: Is there anything else? Did you wish to speak?

>Tobias: Yes. I have a proposition, an offer.

>Heaven: What is it.. milord?

>Tobias: I wish to join our clans. There is a new world on the horizon and I would like us as allies... and maybe.. more?

>Heaven: If you are looking for marriage well I am not ready for such things. I am sorry. I also like my clan the way it is!

>Tobias: Are you sure of your decision? It would be a big mistake milady.

>Heaven: Do you want your necklace back?

>Tobias: No. Once a gift is given that is it.
I will take my leave.(He starts to leave and then stops)Oh by the way how is your sister?

>Heaven: What? How dare you!? (She then looks at the guard and he lunges for an attack.)
Tobias's body guards keep Heavens vamp guards back while Tobias defends himself. Tobias changes to his true vamp form and grabs the the spear with lightning speed from the gaurd and impales the guard's foot to the ground so he won't move he then grabs a short sword from his jacket and disembowel's the guard. The guard falls over and suddenly a whole bunch of guards come in they try to over take Tobias and his men. Tobias and his guards fight with a ferocity of very experienced warriors. They take quite alot of her gaurds out and just as Heaven is about to enter part of the roof is torn off!
Heaven then looks up and see's a large Demon like creature and feels extreme power emenating from him. She is frightened and the fighting is halted. The Creature then says to her "You should have taken his offer!" Now you will suffer like all the others of this world!" He will be a prince in my reign to come! A new age is upon us! Those who join me will prosper and those who do not will cease to exist or suffer torment they have never felt before!!" At that moment Tobias his men get up. Tobias looks at Heaven and then shakes his head back and forth in dissapointment. Tobias and his Master and minions take off into the night sky. Now Heaven is really worried and decides she must warn the others.
 
Outside on a beautiful starry night a cool breeze is blowing on Heavens estate. Heaven is out on her ledge with the wind blowing in her hair and she looks up at the stars. She goes back to a time in her childhood with her sister when they were out on the balcony of their old house looking up at the stars. She remembers the conversation on what they wanted to be when they grow up and how they saw two falling stars and they decided to make a wish. She laughs a little to her self remembering those good old innocent times and wishes she could go back but those days are long gone.
Suddenly a servent comes to door of her balcony.
>Servant: Mistress there is someone here to see you.

>Heaven: Who is it?

>Servant: He says that his name is Tobias and he is from a royal vampire clan from spain.

>Heaven: I guess send him in. (She decides to let him in to avoid trouble for her clan.) A few of Heavens guards enter the room that connects to the balcony and place themselves around the room holding spears and wearing some battle gear.
Tobias is then escorted in and he is surrounded by very large strong body guards. They were probably bouncers who were weightlifters before becoming vampires.

>Tobias: Good evening Mistress Heaven! What a pleasure to finally meet you!! (He grabs her hand and kisses it and then slightly bows in front of her. She then notices his features he is tall and handsome with long black hair and he is quite physically fit. She can also sense that he is very powerful for a vampire in fact too powerful like he has been enhanced. This then worries her and she thinks of her sister and the others.)

>Heaven: Tis a pleasure as well. (she then slighty bows as well)
What brings you here milord?

>Tobias: Ah milady I just wished to meet you and witness your fine radiant beauty! I also have a gift for you and I hope that you would except it?

>Heaven: Really? That is facinating.

>Tobias: So the Queen is not impressed? Bring me the box!(He calls out to one of his vampire body guards and he brings forward to him a medium sized box. The box is then opened and a multilayered necklace encrusted with large diamonds and in the middle a white gold pendant with a large ruby in the middle. Heaven thinks to herself that has got to be the most beautiful and expense piece of jewelery she has ever seen!)

>Tobias: I see the Queen has fine taste! Yes I knew that piece would be worthy of you! Try it on please!

>Heaven: That's okay I see it is beautiful but..

>Tobias: Oh I insist if you do not except it I will be insulted.

>Heaven: Fine.(She lifts her long locks up to reveal her neck and she looks at one of her guards, he then nods and looks at the other gaurds.)

>Tobias: Do not worry it is a gift that is all.(He then gets behind her and places the necklace on her after that he kisses her hand once more.)

>Heaven: Thank you milord it is beautiful.

>Tobias: No it is you that makes it beautiful!

>Heaven: Is there anything else? Did you wish to speak?

>Tobias: Yes. I have a proposition, an offer.

>Heaven: What is it.. milord?

>Tobias: I wish to join our clans. There is a new world on the horizon and I would like us as allies... and maybe.. more?

>Heaven: If you are looking for marriage well I am not ready for such things. I am sorry. I also like my clan the way it is!

>Tobias: Are you sure of your decision? It would be a big mistake milady.

>Heaven: Do you want your necklace back?

>Tobias: No. Once a gift is given that is it.
I will take my leave.(He starts to leave and then stops)Oh by the way how is your sister?

>Heaven: What? How dare you!? (She then looks at the guard and he lunges for an attack.)
Tobias's body guards keep Heavens vamp guards back while Tobias defends himself. Tobias changes to his true vamp form and grabs the the spear with lightning speed from the gaurd and impales the guard's foot to the ground so he won't move he then grabs a short sword from his jacket and disembowel's the guard. The guard falls over and suddenly a whole bunch of guards come in they try to over take Tobias and his men. Tobias and his guards fight with a ferocity of very experienced warriors. They take quite alot of her gaurds out and just as Heaven is about to enter part of the roof is torn off!
Heaven then looks up and see's a large Demon like creature and feels extreme power emenating from him. She is frightened and the fighting is halted. The Creature then says to her "You should have taken his offer!" Now you will suffer like all the others of this world!" He will be a prince in my reign to come! A new age is upon us! Those who join me will prosper and those who do not will cease to exist or suffer torment they have never felt before!!" At that moment Tobias his men get up. Tobias looks at Heaven and then shakes his head back and forth in dissapointment. Tobias and his Master and minions take off into the night sky. Now Heaven is really worried and decides she must warn the others.
 
Excellent! 🙂

All of you guys have taken this to another level! I'm loving it!

What will happen next?

*waits*
 
My pc was down for a while so I lost track where this novela went. My gears are running in my mind to sneak back into the story.
 
LOL!!!!!!! does anyone know what we did in the story???




Daniella was attacked by a vamp, and left at Taina's house. no one ever did anything with that. She's been unconscious for two days now!

LOL!!!!!
 
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