Can ya feel me?

[Richie]

Let me know what ya think!

Sorrow is the word to describe my world
Tears console me for they are steps to my future
Tomorrow is inevitable, yet I pray for it's arrival
As if afraid I will be trapped inside
Inside of pain, that's what remains
And like a record it plays again and again
Lost I am but knowing where I am
How can this be, how do I see
Yesterday I found a picture of me
Memories of what used to be
Who changes destiny? Deep inside I
curl up surrounded by the death of true
love. Frail like the dove which can not
survive without it's mate. I turn to fate
but instead find hate. Am I too late to turn
a tragedy into something I can hold and see.
Peace is my longing it seems so far away
Yet it may come in just one day...

 

[La Mas Grande]

WoW I like this one
🙂

 

[Lamatrix]

ooooo this is hot keep up the good work look foward to seeing more of your work.

 

[Crystal2001]

BEAUTIFUL..you should write more..😉