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The wind swiftly blowing,
Day turns into night,
Feels like a hurricane coming,
How long will it keep up this fight?

Thunder breaks the silence,
Lighting fills the dark sky,
Rain falls down like tear drops,
The outside world died.

I woke up from a sudden dream,
To realize this was only a battle within my mind,
The storm taking place,
Only describes my Love, Hurt, Pain..and Crimes..
 
I think thats really beautiful Crystal 🙂 Your a very talented writer
 
Speechless. 😱

Magnificent indeed! Wow.

~Antonio 🙂
 
😱 ...Thank you guys!! you are da BEST!!!!!!!!! Thats why I love sharing my work wity you, I know i wont get dissed..lmao😛
 
Thank you freestlegod...😀..I wrote this when it was pouring its butt off last night..LOL!! I turned that..into a diffrent kind of poem...I love to write!!!
 
Ok, I lied...it was awful.

LMAO! Sorry, I had to be a smart ass cause you said you never get dissed, so I just had to do that. But seriously, like I first posted, I really do like it. Didn't mean to scare ya with that first line! But it was funny! LOL

Luv ya! *muahs*


~Meg~
 
I had my mouth opened like this just by that line...😱..LMFAO!!!! When I meet you girl...Im slap you silly!~!😛
 
Then shit it is a date!!..LOL!!!!


Thank you taz babbyyyyyyyyyyyy😛
 
what u dont no
what u cant rember
is that happens for a reason
y ill try to rember
it cleans ur thoughts that r in ur head
the pain grows new and yet a little older
some leaves ur body and some stays over
the crime part is cause u feel guilty
or some tend to say its y u were sweating cause u wanted to get away
the hurt is cause ur heart can let it go
and u have more heart than ull ever no
the last was love and what can i say
causse i to have those kinds of days
rember ur dreams r not just dreams
there visions that r ment to ment to be seen
our feelings alone dont always tells us this
but in a dream a visions cant be missed
 
Wow babes...You understand me very well..LOL

Last night,
I had this dream,
A crazy nightmare,
But dont know what it means.
I heard screams,
I heard my own cries,
I tried to wake up,
But like I said..I was paralyzed.
This isnt the first time,
Not the first time this dream occured,
I had it when I was younger,
But I was never heard.
Is it true,
With what you say?
That this dreams happens for a reason,
And it shall haunt me till that day?
 
sometimes in a dream were r not ourselfs
our spitits run freely as u can tell
sometimes r spirits cross others pass
and thats when u think , how long will this last
the screams u hear may not be u own
just some lost soul trying to find a way home
so if u can and if u might
hold at ur hand and show them light
 
If I do so,
Id let the spirits go?
And if its not there own,
Then my fear I must over throw,
Because fighting this dream,
Is not getting me anywhere as it seems.
Lead me the way,
To get to that one night of rest,
Just one damn day.
 
if u think that souls isnt theres,
maybe its inside u cause u think no one cares
its one of those things tucked deep inside
and it only can be felt when u close ur eyes
ill tell u what ill do for u
next time u have that dream , dream it for two
ill go in and hold ur hand
ill stand in ur place and jump into the frying pan
rember one thing my sweet girl
a dream is somthing that can be out of this world
dreams have many meanings and show u many things
but when u open ur eyes all is not what it seems
so take a deep breath and count to 3
cause no im here to dream with the
 
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